WWE:A New Beginning

[Deman121]

[IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/SSSD/WWETease.jpg[/IMG] [I]OOC:First news will be up soon[/I]

[Guest Vitamin E]

You really should have given more in a first post than a simple image. If the next post contains all the useful information that readers would need to know, you should have waited until you had it done and had that as the first post.

[sebsy]

Don't see a problem to be honest. Nothing wrong with using nothing more than an image. Gets you thinking, what is Bischoff going to have to do with WWE then and why is it 'a new beginning'. Is he the new owner? etc etc Look forward to your first post Deman

[Deman121]

[b]Saturday,10:30 AM Stamford, Connecticut June 30th 2007[/b]: Vince McMahon sat in his office pondering the situation he was in,the big angle that he had thought of had been a massive disaster,one of his workers has been the headling of international news and he was running thin on ideas of were he should go from there,his creative team had tried all they could to keep the storylines fresh and new but they had just not been up to the standard that the wwe fans around the world had expected,he had really thought that his death angle would go down with the fans but it didn't go well at all,he was losing watchers to RAW,SmackDown and ECW every week for 3 weeks straight and all though it had not been long it had taken quite an effect on the moral back stage as well as his,he had to find a way to recreate the wwe in a new and fresh stlye but his mind was just blank,he had no idea's what so ever,he suddenly had a idea as he was thinking back to the times of the monday night wars,Eric Bischoff,he had been the man who had beaten the wwf for over 80 weeks in the ratings and he was the man who would of destroyed the wwf had it not been for the company he was working for,vince knew that bischoff was not afraid to try daring and knew things,he also knew that he had a great mind creatively and that he just might be able to turn this sinking ship around,vince picks up his office's phone and dials a few numbers, [color=red]Vince[/color]: Get me Eric Bischoff on the phone please. He says in a croaky voice to his assistant,he waits for a minute as the call connects, [color=blue]Eric[/color]: Hello? [color=red]Vince[/color]: Eric its nice to speak to you again. [color=blue]Eric[/color]: Vince? is that you? [color=red]Vince[/color]: Sure is,suprised? [color=blue]Eric[/color]: Well yea kinda,last time we spoke you said that you weren't gonna need me until sometime in 2008. [color=red]Vince[/color]: I know eric but its kind of a emergency and i need your help right away,is there any way you can get a flight down to Stamford today?. [color=blue]Eric[/color]: Ummm sure i should be able to,vince,whats this about? [color=red]Vince[/color]: I'll tell you when you get here eric,just be here as soon as you can. They both hang up and vince relaxes's into his chair as the thought of eric running the company he tried to destroy crosses his mind,it soon leaves as he thinks about the possibility's that can happen with eric under control. -------------------------------------- [I]OOC:Thanks sebs and vitamin,the pic was just a teaser untill i got the whole intro written up,plus i thought it would be cool to have a slight tease,not a great backstory i know but not to bad either,second part of the story will be up later tonight or tommorow.[/I]

[Deman121]

[b]Saturday,4:21 PM Stamford, Connecticut June 30th 2007[/b] Vince had been sitting in his office for the most part of the day as he waited for eric bischoff,as he sat in his chair behind his big desk he suddenly heard his office phone ring,he quickly answered, [color=red]Vince[/color]: Hello? [color=purple]Assistant[/color]: Eric Bischoff here to see you sir. [color=red]Vince[/color]: Send him up. Vince once again hung up the phone and waited in his chair for eric to come up to his office,he suddenly heard a slight tap at his office doors,he stands up and slowly walks towards the door,he opens it slightly and smiles as he see's eric bischoff's face smiling back at him,vince opens the door wider as eric walks in, [color=red]Vince[/color]: Its good to see you again eric. Eric turns around and looks at vince as he shakes his hand, [color=blue]Eric[/color]: you to vince,it been a while. eric says as he walks around the office slightly as vince shuts the doors and walks behind eric, [color=red]Vince[/color]: To long eric,its just that I've been so busy here trying to keep the fans happy,I'm sure you understand. [color=blue]Eric[/color]: Of course i understand vince,but there is one thing that i dont understand. [color=red]Vince[/color]: And that would be?. [color=blue]Eric[/color]: Why you called me up here today and what the big emergency was that it couldn't wait until later on in the week. vince pulls out a chair for eric as he walks back around behind his desk as he looks across at eric,he pulls out a file from a drawer and hands it to him,eric flicks it open slightly and reads whats on the paper, [color=red]Vince[/color]: Those are TV Ratings over the past 3 weeks,as you can see there dropping very quickly and i don't like it one bit,and thats the main reason i called you here today eric. Vince pauses as eric finishes reading the papers,he then places them back on the desk and looks at vince, [color=red]Vince[/color]: Eric i want you to take control of the WWE,you'll be control of everything,from booking shows to firing/hiring,it will al be up to you,hell you can even create another show if thats what you want but its all in your hands if you want it,you'll be my new head booker and have control of everything i have control of,what do you say?. Eric looks in shock at vince after he literally spilt all of his words out without pausing for breath, [color=blue]Eric[/color]: So you want me to basically take over the WWE? is that what your saying?. [color=red]Vince[/color]: Thats it eric,by god i have tried everything to please these fans and try and turn our shows around but none of its working,what we need is someone new,someone who will have no fear in doing what they need to do to turn the company around and bring back the fans,are you up to it eric? [color=blue]Eric[/color]: Vince you know ill never say no to a chance like this but ime still kind of in shock. Vince smirks at eric, [color=red]Vince[/color]: Dont be eric,just think of it like WCW,ime sure you'll get used to it eventually,so are we agreed then?. [color=blue]Eric[/color]: We sure are vince. Eric says as he extends his hand to vince's and shakes it still not believing whats just happened,he had basically just taken over the whole of the WWE,the company that had bought out his old one,the company that he had tried to destroy,never had he thought that when he got that call this morning vince was gonna ask him this. [color=red]Vince[/color]: looks across the desk at his new head booker and basically co owner of his own company,he smiles a little bit as he feels just some of the relief of his shoulders.

[tommytomlin]

Dude, spell-check.

[Deman121]

[IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/logo_main.gif[/IMG] [b]Sunday 1st June 2007[/b] [b]WWE News[/b]: It is being reported that yesterday afternoon Eric Bischoff signed a new contract with the WWE that now makes him the head booker of the company,Bischoff is Expected to make a appearance at tommorow night's RAW,we will have more news as soon as we get it. --------------------- [I]OOC:Sorry mate,ran it through one,was just some small mistakes lol,anyway hope you enjoyed reading it.[/I]

[Deman121]

[IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/SSSD/EVSM.jpg[/IMG] [b]RAW Preveiw[/b]: Carlito Vs. Jeff Hardy [b]Intercontinental Championship[/b] Santino Marella Vs. Val Venis Randy Orton Vs. King Booker [b]Inter Promotional Match[/b] Shawn Michaels Vs. Edge That and much more on RAW this monday night!. ----------------------------- [I]OOC:Raw should be up tommorow.[/I]

[Deman121]

[IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/SSSD/4976170.jpg[/IMG] [b]RAW is being held live at the All state Arena with 9,565 fans in attendance.[/b] Dark Match: Viscera Def. Eugene in 6:40, Rating: C ----------------------------- RAW kicks off as the camera pans around the arena as we hear JR and the King, JR: Hello lady's and gentleman and welcome to another action packed monday night RAW,i' Jim Ross and alongside me is Jerry Lawler,and what a night we have in store for you tonight. The King: No kidding JR we have a huge main event as Edge the raining world heavyweight champion takes on the returning HBK Shawn Michaels. JR: And thats not all folks,because tonight Santino Marella takes on Val Venis as he defends his intercontinental championship for just the 4th time. As soon as JR stops talking HBK's music hits and the crowd go crazy,he walks out smirking as he looks around the arena as the crowd give him a huge pop,he walks down the ramp and slides into the ring as he grabs a mic and starts talking, HBK: Now then,i've just got a few things to say tonight to a few people,first of is John Cena,now don't think that HBK has forgotten about you cena because you can bet your ass that i haven't,because when i beat Edge tonight cena i'm coming straight for ya and for that title belt. HBK looks around the arena again as they cheer for him and the HBK chants start ringing out, HBK! HBK! HBK!, HBK: Second is Randy Orton,now than kiddo you tried to end my career and to be honest you nearly did,so when you face booke.... sorry king booker tonight just know that i'm gonna be around aswell,so watch your back randy because i might just wanna help out the king. Suddenly Edge's music hits and the camera cuts to the tron as we see edge come through the thick smoke with his belt around his waist,he looks around the arena as he has a smug smirk on his face,he stands up on the tron and begins to speak, Edge: I've gotta stop you right there shawn,its just i cant take your stupid rambling any more and i'm pretty sure the fans cant either. The crowd starts booing as a slight you suck chant begins, Edge: No i don't suck because i have this on my waist. He say's as he points down to his belt, Edge: Anyway as i was saying before i was rudely interrupted,shawn tonight when we meet in that ring,i have a little proposition for ya,if you beat me tonight i'll give you one shot to take my belt this friday on smackdown,what do you say?. HBK smiles up at edge, HBK: Oh your on edge,just get ready to defend that title of yours this friday because i can guarantee you that i'm gonna win tonight. HBK drops the mic and just stares at edge as his music fills the arena as the camera cuts up to edge who is doing the same thing to HBK,we then cut to a commercial. ------------------------- We come back from the break and Carlito's music is playing around the arena as JR recaps on what just happened before the break as we go to the first match of the night, [b]Single's Match[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/JeffVsCarlito.jpg[/IMG] The match starts of pretty fast as expected from these 2 fast men,carlito gets the upper hand as he takes down jeff and try's for a early pin but only finds the 1 count,a few more minutes in see's jeff change the tide as he hits carlito with the whisper in the wind knocking carlito down as jeff try's for his first pin of the match only to find a near 2 count,jeff hardy manages to keep the match fast paced for the next 4 minutes as both men battle it out as jeff suddenly go's for a twist of fate but carlito reverse's and sends jeff into the turnbuckle,jeff bounces off and carlito hits him with the back stabber,carlito covers and gets the 3 count, Carlito Def. Jeff Hardy in 10:42. After the match Carlito grabs a mic, Carlito: This is for Santino Marella or Val Venis,who ever wins that title tonight this is a warning,carlito is coming to take his title back from who ever has it he doesn't give a dam. He drops the mic as his music sounds in the arena as he walks up the ramp with a smirk on his face as he trash talks to some of the crowd. -------------------------------- We come back from the break and the camera is backstage showing todd grisham, Todd: At this time lady's and gentleman i am joined by the legend killer himself,Randy Orton. The camera moves along a bit and we see randy standing next to todd with a smirk on his face, Todd: Randy tonight you face king booker,how do you feel going into this match against a future legend himself. Randy: Well todd tonight when i step into that ring with the so called king i wont be worrying to much about him,to me he's just another old guy who wants to try his luck at beating a young star. The crowd boo a bit as randy still has that smug look on his face, Todd: Ok then,how do you feel about HBK and what he said about your match tonight?. Randy: To be honest with you todd i'me not to worried about him either,you see i have all ready bought his career so close to ending that it wouldn't take me much more to do it again so when i walk out there tonight all i'm focused on is beating king booker. The camera fades out on randy's face as we go to a commercial. ------------------------------------ We come back from the break and the camera is all ready on the tron as we hear Santino Marella's music through out the arena,as we go to our 2nd match of the night. [b]Intercontinental Championship Match[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/VenisMarella.jpg[/IMG] This match begins pretty simple with basic lockups and takedowns as Santino just about manages to get the upper hand as he knocks Venis down with a simple ddt,the match starts to go back and forward with both men getting the upper hand on each other at some time,val venis gets the lead as he smacks santino's head into the turnbuckle over and over,he then plants santino on the mat with a piledriver,val climbs to the top rope and leaps of it landing the money shot right ontop of santino,he gets the cover and gets the 3 count,val stands up and takes the belt as he celebrates in the ring as the crowd cheer him on. Val Venis Def. Santino Marella in 8:54 Rating: C The camera quickly go's backstage as we see Melina getting for her match as JR and King hype it up a bit. ---------------------------- We come back from the commercial break and we hear the new womans champion music as she comes out from behind the curtain and wlaks down the ramp as we go to our 3rd match of the night. [b]Singles Match[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/cvsm.jpg[/IMG] The match begins pretty basic once again with normal lock ups,the match continues even as both woman battle it out quite well with lots of revealing move's to please the crowd as melina starts to get more agressive as the match go's on with lots of vicious moves and hair pulling,melina than sets her up for a inverted ddt,but candice reverse's the move and hits melina with a straight ddt,she covers her and gets the 3 count as she celebrates in the ring with her title. Candice Mcihelle Def. Melina in 5:48 Rating: C- ----------------------------------- As we come back from the break the camera comes down to the announcers desk were JR and King hype the main event match of Edge vs HBK,when there finished we cut to the backstage area again were maria is with the new IC champ val venis, Maria: lady's and gents the new IC champ Val Venis. Val: Thank you maria and the fans means alot to the big valbowski to hear them cheers. Maria smiles at val as the crowd cheer for him, Maria: Val how do you feel about carlito wanting to challenge you for your new title. Val: Well you know something maria i couldnt care who wants to challenge me for this title,i'll take on anyone any were and i'll still walk out champion,so i just have one thing to say to carlito,were ever and when ever you want a shot at this title,just ask. The camera fades away as we cut to a break. ---------------------------------- We come back from the break and Randy Ortons music is all ready playing as we go to our first main event of the night the announcers also state the fact that the new general manager has made this a No.1 contenders match. [b]No.1 Contenders match for the WWE Heavyweight Title[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/OrtonvsBooker.jpg[/IMG] This match starts out pretty slowly for a main event as booker uses alot of holds and submissions to try and break randy down,booker locks him in a sleeper and it looks for sure that randy's out,the ref lifts his arm 2 times and on the 3rd randy comes back as he try's to fight his way out of it,booker manages to quickly lock his arms around randy's waist and delivers a almost perfect german suplex which makes randy crash down on the mat pretty hard,booker continues to beat down on randy for the next couple of minutes delivering perfect kicks to the face,a straight ddt and some suplexes as he try's his best to break randy,in the 8th minute randy counters a irish whip and sends booker crashing into the turnbuckle,randy then runs and slams straight into him sending booker to his ass as he sits in the corner,randy begins to stomp away at the king,randy eventually stops and booker gets up,but he doesnt last long as randy delivers a suplex of his own sending booker straight back to the mat as he sets him up for the rko,booker stunmbles up and randy go's for the rko,but booker reverse's and kicks randy in the mid section as he then delivers a scissors kick sending randy to the mat,the match looks over as booker pins randy 1........2....... but he kicks out at the last second,booker looks desperate as he picks randy up and sends him to the ropes,randy comes back and delivers a cracking rko laying booker out in the middle of the ring,randy flops ontop of booker and pins him, 1..............2............3,randy manages to stand up as he looks around the arena as he has just one himself a shot at the WWE heavyweight championship. Randy Orton Def. King Booker in 13:41 Rating: C+ After the match randy picks up a mic, Randy: Cena you best be ready because i've just earned my self a shot at your gold,and you can bet that i'm gonna win the match and become the new WWE Heavyweight Title. We cut to another break as randy stays in the ring smirking. ------------------------------ We come back from the break and the camera is backstage and we see edge beating the living hell out of HBK,refs and officials rush to break it up but edge just continues to beat shawn down,they move into the parking lot as edge slams HBK into a car,he turns around knocks down some officials,as he turns around HBK smacks him with some sweet chin music leaving edge knocked out outside,shawn looks down at edge, HBK: I'll see ya out there. ------------------------------ We come back from the break and HBK's music begins to play as he comes out to a huge pop from the crowd as we go on to our 2nd main event. [b]Singles Match[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/HBKVsEdge.jpg[/IMG] This was the match of the night as the crowd loved every twist and turn from both edge and michaels,the match started out fast paced and pretty technical as both men were reversing each others moves not managing to hit anything that would let them get the upper hand,after 6 minutes of back and forth reversing and varios moves edge managed to get the upper hand as he slammed hbk into the turnbuckle and began to punch down on him and then began to give him the famous ric flair chops as the crowd reacted normally whoooing at every one,hbk didnt last long in the corner though as he gave edge some of his own medicine chopping away at his body sending shockwaves through as the crowd again began whooing at every chop,at about the 12 minute ark edge nailed michaels with a spear sending him straight to the mat,the crowd thought it was over as the ref counted to 2 but hbk managed to get a late kick out as the crowd cheered on,hbk just about managed to come back hitting edge with lefts and rights knocking him down a few times as he began to work away at wearing him down planting great suplexes and ddt's at any chance he had,at the 18th minute both men looked beat and worn out as they traded blows in the middle of the ring,hbk sends edge on the ropes and as he comes back towards him flips him over his back making edge land straight on his back as hbk waits in the corner for him to stand up as he begins to tune up the band,stomping his foot on the canvas hbk waits for edge to get up,edge stands and turns in shawns way as he go's for the sweet chin music,edge ducks and michaels go's straight past edge,hbk turns around and edge runs towards him for the spear,this time shawn didges it and edge go's shoulder first into the post,edge turns around and BAM! hbk nails him right in the chin knocking him flat out in the ring,michaels covers him and gets the 3 count,he stands up and celebrates with the crowd as his music rings around the arena as the camera fades away for the end of the show. HBK Def. Edge in 20:43 Rating: A ------------------------------ Final show rating: B [I]OOC:Not a bad rating in my mind,was a bit disappointed with the booker-orton match but other than that i think it was a good show.[/I]

[Deman121]

[IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/logo_main.gif[/IMG] [b]Major ECW News[/b]: It was announced today on wwe.com that the ECW brand has been dropped by the wwe,it is said that this was the decision of the new head booker Eric Bischoff,we'll try and get you more news when we get it. [b]WWE Superstars Released[/b]: Following the dropping of the ECW brand wwe has announced that the following superstars have been released from there contracts: Balls Mahoney Hornswoggle Santino Marella Daivari Mike Knox The Great Khali The Boogeyman The Sandman Gene Snitsky Steve Lombardi Vickie Guerrero They have also wished them luck for the future.

[Guest Vitamin E]

I could never see ECW just being dropped, espcially by Bischoff since Vince would still have final say. Would have been better if you just didnt write for ECW if thats the reason you dropped it. You need to work on spelling and grammar some more before posting shows. Quite a few mistakes in the first show. The show itself didnt seem too bad. Orton winning a shot at the title I like, Venis winning the IC title is meh as he really hasnt done that much for a while now and has fallen into a void, and I think that you should cut down on the match times because not much really happened on RAW like you would usually see. Cut back on match times, throw in a few of the lower guys in, build other storylines and feuds up and stuff. To the person who said there's nothing wrong with just using an image as a first post: it isnt a proper backstory or post. Well, here it might be, but everyother board you would need actual texted backstory and not just a picture of Bischoff and the diary name as the first post. The whole Bischoff/McMahon thing should have been the first post to be honest.

[chris caulfield]

[B]OMG[/B] can you just shut up i've seen it in a few diaries now you reply and pick at all their faults and barely say a good thing at all about the diary.if you are not going to say anything nice just don't say anything at all .plus not everything has to sound like it might happen in real life otherwise diaries would get boring because most would be mostly the same.Anyway it's his diary so let him do what he wants. I thought it was a good show with a great main event i agrre with you in the orton match it was a bit of a dissapointment.i hope the venus puch continues, but i would of kept khali a little longer to job him out to some new talent.jus sayin.

[The Ego]

No wonder people think this vitamin D guy is a dick. Dude this diary is one that is INTERESTING!

[sebsplex]

[QUOTE=chris caulfield;254942][B]OMG[/B] can you just shut up i've seen it in a few diaries now you reply and pick at all their faults and barely say a good thing at all about the diary.if you are not going to say anything nice just don't say anything at all .[/QUOTE] I don't think that's necessarily true. It'd be a pretty bland forum if every just complimented one another by default the whole time or just didn't reply at all. Everything raised was basically a fair point. At least Vitamin E posted in detail and gave some advice rather than just giving a snide 1-star rating and then disappearing, like some others seem to do around here. The dropping of ECW without a final show or any sort of angle or detailed announcement seems a bit throwaway or at least a missed opportunity. The match times were substancial for a RAW broadcast where several names never even appeared or barely got a mention (Cena, Lashley, Kennedy, etc). Val who hasn't won a match on RAW for what seems like eons, picking up the IC title is a good move [B]if[/B] he'd have received a least a little build up... even if it were just winning a number one contenders match or something. Now that he's got the belt though, I'll be interested to see what you do with Val. Nothing wrong at all with Orton getting a title shot, the build has basically been put in place IRL and the main event was good, although I'm not quite sure how the brandsplit stands with the releases, Edge on RAW and Eugene and Vis (both on different brands), etc. Maybe I missed something? As for spelling and grammar, again whilst this isn't getting graded or anything, there were quite a few simple little mistakes that could have been caught with a read-through. They don't ruin the diary, but when repeated, they certainly don't help the reader... I can't see anything negative about pointing that out? It's not a bad start and taking onboard a little advice, it could get a lot better.

[flamebrain]

Val got a win and a title. I'm reading now! :)

[Deman121]

Thanks for all the advice,i'll take it all on board good or bad and try to improve as much as i can,i agree that the ecw dropping was a bit rushed and should of been handled better but i just wanted to get it out of the way as quick as i could lol,smackdown preview will be up later on.

[Guest Vitamin E]

People usually do that, though, dropping ECW because they dont want to book it or for whatever reason they have. I think it would have been better if you kept it around and just didnt book it (it would give you a place to keep lower card guys and build new stars up) or build a storyline around ECW being 'shut down' again, which if booked good would have made a good little storyline as well. I dont want to have your diary filled with ****, but allow me to just reply to caulfield by saying, the whole "dont have anything nice to say dont say anything at all" arguement doesnt work with diaries because then all you have is people going "oh wow nice show loved it all" and nothing else. It's sad that people get worked up whenever people leave negative feedback in their diary and cant accept it and only want the positive one liner kind of feedback. I usually try to leave negative feedback because I think it helps the writer out more if he/she reads the negative and tries to improve on some stuff as opposed to reading positive feedback that doesnt give him anything more than what people [b]like.[/b] I also believe that certain diaries should hold some form of realism, and if not then explain the unrealistic things (like....brooklyn brawler winning a world title) in a realistic way, in which case I think is good because it challenges the writer. And Ego, nice job with the whole "Vitamin D stands for Vitamin Dick LOLZ!" thing you did. Thumbs up to you. If people cant accept negative feedback with the positive then they shouldnt be posting diaries. Im sorry if Im not like the usual people and dont always go "oh nice work man loved the show" and short one liners like that. Sorry that I give the writers my view on the things I dont like more than the things I do so that the writers will see what some readers [b]dont[/b] like. If that makes me a dick... If leaving well thought out and detailed feedback that usually consists of mostly what I thought was bad as a way to give the writer an idea on what some things he/she is doing that isnt liked so that he/she has better info on what he could improve on makes me a dick, then yes I will say I am a dick. Sorry again, Deman for cluttering your diary with the post. I think if the shows have some more to it with a few of the lower guys and you cut back with match times a bit to give you more time to add some smaller angles/storylines and such it would be a good idea. If you feel the way that caulfield or The Ego feels about my feedback let me know, but it doesnt look like you have a problem with it and can actually handle the negative feedback.

[Deman121]

[IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/SD.jpg[/IMG] [b]SmackDown Preview[/b]: Jamie Knoble Vs. Kenny Dykstra [b]Cruiserweight No.1 Contenders Match[/b]: Jimmy Wang Yang Vs. Funaki Ric Flair Vs. Matt Hardy Finlay Vs. MVP [b]WWE World Heavyweight Championship Match[/b] Edge Vs. Shawn Michaels ------------------------- [I]OOC:Vitamin i dont really mind any feedback good or bad and as i said before i'll take it all on board and try my best to improve,and about eugene being on raw,i had totally forgot about him being drafted :( whoops lol,oh and predictions welcome :)[/I]

[chris caulfield]

[QUOTE]but allow me to just reply to caulfield by saying, the whole "dont have anything nice to say dont say anything at all" arguement doesnt work with diaries because then all you have is people going "oh wow nice show loved it all" and nothing else. It's sad that people get worked up whenever people leave negative feedback in their diary and cant accept it and only want the positive one liner kind of feedback.[/QUOTE] Ididn't mean mine to come out like you never post anything good it just tends to be a bit too negative and not enough nice comments.it's just you have done it in quite alot of diaries,you could try picking up on more of the positives to kinda even it out a little then it would be fine.plus i'm not saying i can't handle negative feedback, cos why should i care I don't even have a diary to worry about, it's just try and tone it down cos i'm kinda gettin sick of reading you picking up on little faults when you could be talking about them and the positives to make the writer of the diary a little more appreciated.

[chris caulfield]

Jamie Knoble Vs. [B]Kenny Dykstra[/B] Cruiserweight No.1 Contenders Match: [B]Jimmy Wang Yang[/B] Vs. Funaki Ric Flair Vs. [B]Matt Hardy [/B]- hard one to pick here Finlay Vs. [B]MVP[/B] WWE World Heavyweight Championship Match [B]Edge[/B] Vs. Shawn Michaels - why is michaels on smackdown?

[Guest Vitamin E]

Im personally someone that would rather read about what people didn't like about a certain show because the negative feedback would help me more than hearing what people DID like about a show, which is why I am the same way when I leave feedback. If I think a diary is utter ****, you would know :P. As for predictions: Dykstra over Noble because Noble isnt really anything in the WWE, and Dykstra could be a better talent. Was he drafted to Smackdown! in real life though? Or did you put him there? Cant remember what happened with the draft. If it's the latter, then a simple post saying "WWE.com reports so and so was traded to Smackdown! this week" Yang over Funaki. Not a match I really care for. Flair over Hardy... Would be a good match, but I dont think Matt should beat Flair. MVP over Finlay. Not sure if you are turning one of them face since theyre both heels right now. Edge vs Michaels...Not sure if it would be anything great after a 20 minute match being given away for free already. Confused as to whether it is Edge's title or not (he hsa the World Heavyweight and Raw has just the WWE Championship). If it's for Edge's title then I see him winning. Just confused a bit right now with some things. Maybe posting a roster, showing who is on what brand and whether they are face or heel, and champions list will help out. EDIT-That comment wasnt directed soley at you, caulfield. It was basically towards anyone who does get worked up about negative feedback. Like I said, I usually only give negative feedback because i feel a writer can improve more with it and will give them a better view on things theyre doing that arent liked by people. I'll leave comments about things I like if there's something I like, but it probably wont be more than "I liked such and such. It was yadda yadda.", so will be less focused on by me than the things I didnt like. As long as I'm not saying how **** a diary and it's writer is every chance I can get and shoot down anything they do for no reason, then there isnt any need to worry about whether I appreciate a diary writer or not.

[Deman121]

All rosters and champs are the same as the ones in real life at the moment,and yea dykstra was drafted to smackdown.

[chris caulfield]

ok man i understand i just got a bit annoyed cos i was seeing it everywhere i went almost i mean i'm not saying don't post anything negative just try and mix it up a little. oh and sos to Deman for cluttering up the first few pages his diary hope it goes on for quite a bit longer. edit: [QUOTE]All rosters and champs are the same as the ones in real life at the moment,and yea dykstra was drafted to smackdown.[/QUOTE] so why is michaels in a smackdown title match?

[Deman121]

In raw there was a interpromotional match,edge said that if michaels won he could have a shot at his title.

[Deman121]

[IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/SD.jpg[/IMG] [b]Smackdown is coming to you from the Loisville Gardens with 7,214 in attendance[/b] Dark Match: Dave Tayor Def. Shannon Moore in 8:27 Rating: B- ---------------------------------------- As Smackdowns theme music rings through out the arena fireworks go of around the tron as the camera pans around the fans,it then cuts to Michael Cole and JBL, Michael: Hello lady's and gentleman and welcome to friday nights smackdown,I'm michael cole and alongside me is JBL at ringside. JBL: I sure am michael and what a main event we have for you tonight,yet another interpromotional match but this time for the World Heavyweight Championship. Michael: No doubt about that john,its the Shawn Michaels,Edge rematch from RAW and shawn michaels is eager to get his hands on edge and have another shot at the gold,that and much more all tonight in a action packed 2 hours. Michael finishes his sentence and we get straight into our first match, [b]Single's Match[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/KennyVsKnoble.jpg[/IMG] This match was pretty basic really with alot of lock ups and takedowns and surprisingly the match wasn't that fast for 2 fast paced guys,in the end though dykstra managed to win by hitting the guillotine leg drop from the top rope and getting the 3 count. Kenny Dykstra Def. Jamie Knoble in 6:43 Rating: B- ------------------------ The camera cuts back from the break as edge's theme music blast's through the arena,he comes out through the smoke with a smug grin on his as he slowly stroll's down to the ring with his title firmly around his shoulder,he slides into the ring and grabs a mic as he looks around at the booing crowd, Edge: So it seems that shawn michaels still has it in him to be a young star like me,well shawn i have to take my hat of to ya,you did a good job on raw,but this smackdown,this is my show and tonight its gonna be a very different story. The crowd boo a bit louder as the you suck chants ring out, Edge: Tonight shawn your gonna find out why they call me the rated r superstar,because when i pin you in th...... Edge is suddenly cut of by Batista's music,he comes out to a big pop as the crowd are on there feet for him,he strolls down to the ring as well with a big grin on his face,he walks up the stairs and into the ring crossing edge as he grabs a mic, Batista: So edge,just because HBK beat you on raw you decided to give him a shot at the gold,sounds intresting. Batista walks right up to edge with a blank look on his face, Batista: So if i was to beat you right here,right now,would i get a shot edge?. The crowd cheer as edge looks away from batista and looks around at the fans and the arena, Edge: No dave,youve had your chance's and you blew them,i decided that you weren't good enough for me so i had to go back to raw to find someone who was because no one on this damn show has the skill to even challenge me,so dave id suggest you go and find another belt to chase because your never gonna get another shot at this one all the time i'm champ,and trust me i plan on keeping this baby for a long time. Edge looks at his belt as he holds it up in his hand taunting batista,batista moves away from edge and looks at the crowd,then out of no were batista charge's at edge and spears him sending edge crashing to the mat,batista plays to the crowd as he slowly leaves the ring leaving the champ layed out in the middle of it. ---------------------------------- As the camera comes back from the break we see funaki allready in the ring as the next match begins, [b]No.1 Contenders Match for the Cruiserweight Title[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/WangYangVsFunaki.jpg[/IMG] This match was pretty much as expected by everyone,very fast paced as both men battled hard for the shot at the gold,Wang yang was the most dominating between the 2 as he managed to plant funaki on the mat with a powerfull power bomb but only got a 2 count,right near the end though wang yang set funaki up and he climbed the ropes and landed a perfect moonsault hooking funaki's leg for the 3 count and the shot at the cruiserweight title. Jimmy Wang Yang Def. Funaki in 4:53 Rating: B After the match wang yang grabs a mic, Jimmy: Chavo guerrero i just wanted you to know that when ever your ready to defend that title of your i'll be here waiting to take it from you,so don't get to comfortable with that thing round your waist because soon its gonna be mine. -------------------------------------- We come back from the break as a video plays on the tron hyping the main event for tongith as michael cole and jbl boht hype it as much as they can,after that we get on to our next match, [b]Single's Match[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/KaneVsMajor.jpg[/IMG] Not really much of a match this one as kane just throw's brett major across the ring like he was nothing,brett did manage to get a few rights and lefts in but to no luck against the big red machine as he just over powered brett major,after no time at all kane finally ended bretts misery by delivering a cracking chokeslam in the middle of the ring and getting the 3 count. Kane Def. Brett Major in 4:53 Rating: C- ----------------------------------- We come straight back from the break and see the lovely kristal backstage, Kristal: Tonight lady's and gent's let me introduce to you shawn michaels. Michael's appears on the screen next to kristal as the crowd give him a big pop, Kristal: Shawn i have to ask you,how do you feel going into this match tonight knowing that you could walk out the new wwe world heavyweight champion?. Shawn: Well you know something kristal,i'm feeling pretty darn confident,you know why kristal?,i'll tell you why,because just 4 days ago i beat edge in the middle of the ring to win this damn shot so tonight i'm gonna go out there and kick some rated r ass. The crowd cheer loudly as kristal giggles some aswell, Kristal: Well then shawn i guess its good luck for your match tonight. Michaels smirks at kristal, Shawn: Well i guess it is kristal. The camera quickly cuts to another part of the back stage area, ------------------- We see ric flair taping on eric bischoff's office door, Eric: Come in. Ric walks in and strolls over to eric, Eric: Ric,its good to see you,long time no see. Ric shakes erics hand, Ric: Sure is eric,but i didn't come here for old times sake,i came here to ask you for a little favor. Eric: Well shoot ric,what can i do for ya?. Ric: Well i was thinking if i beat matt hardy tonight can i get my self a world heavyweight title shot?. Eric smirks to ric, Eric: You know what ric,if you can beat hardy tonight i'll give you a shot. Ric smiles at eric, Ric: Thanks alot eri..... Eric cuts ric off, Eric: Theres more ric,if you can beat hardy tonight i'll put you in a match with kane and then if you beat him you'll have your damn shot. The crowd slightly boo as ric looks at eric a bit suprised, Eric: Now get the hell out of my office. The camera cuts back to ringside, Michael: Well it doesn't look like erics changed much. JBL: Nope not one bit,still the same S.O.B he was back in the day. Michael: But did you hear what he said,if ric flair can defeat hardy tonight and kane next week he has a shot at the gold,so if flair wins both matches that means he could be facing michaels or edge,and not forgetting the animal batista. JBL: And what a matcht hat would be batista,edge or michaels and flair all in one match,something to look forward to michael. They both hype the main event again as we go to a break. ------------------------------ As we come back from the break matt hardy's music fills the arena as the next match begins, [b]Single's Match[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/FlairVsHardy-1.jpg[/IMG] This match was a real crowd pleaser as both men want at it from start to finish in almost non stop action,near the beginning flair used his famous chops and got the crowd straight into the action,there was no real man who got the upper hand in this contest as both men were working on the counter attack of the others moves,hardy did manage to land a leg drop nearly sending them through the canvas,he got a near 2 as ric just about managed to kick out,matt was also just about to hit the twist of fate when ric secretly gave hardy a low blow out of sight from the ref sending him to the matt,he quickly apply's the figure four and soon enough matt taps out. Ric Flair Def. Matt Hardy in 10:03 Rating: B+ --------------------------------- When we come back from the break MVP is standing in the ring holding his U.S title, MVP: Now then i just thought that i would come out here before i beat this irish brawler finlay,the main reason i'm out here is because something i over heard edge say earlier,it was something about not having enough talent on this brand for him to contend with,well i have something to tell you about that edge,I'm one of the,no they best talent on this roster and after i'm through with this bum finlay i might just challenge you to a little friendly,and then we'll see who's the best. He drops the mic as finlay's music plays, [b]Single's Match[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/MVPVsFinlay.jpg[/IMG] Pretty decent fight between these 2 as finlay managed to take the upper hand near the get go sending mvp from pillar to post as he gave him a real irish beating,and it wasn't long before finlay nearly had the match won,as he sets mvp up for the celtics cross,but somehow mvp reverses and nails finlay with the playmaker,covering him and getting a near 2 count,mvp picks up finlay and slams him into the turnbuckle as he repeatedly punch's him in the face,he then again sets him up for the playmaker and hits it again this time getting the 3 count. MVP Def. Finlay in 8:21 Rating: B+ ------------------------ As we come back from the break we see chavo guerrero standing back stage smirking holding his cruiserweight title, Chavo: So jimmy wang yang won the no.1 contenders match,no suprise really as it was only against funaki,i mean i could of done it with my eyes closed,but to the matter in hand,jimmy if you think your gonna take this title i'd think again,just watch what i do to gregory helms once again as beat the living hell out of him,because next week i'll give you your shot and i'll do the same to you as i'm gonna do to gregory. The camera then cuts back to the tron as we hear gregory helms music hit, [b]Single's Match[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/GuerreroVsHelms.jpg[/IMG] Another fast paced cruiserweight match that didn't disappoint the fans,some very risky and high flying moves in this match with both men getting there fair share of punishment from each other,it looks as if helms is gonna get the win when he hits the shining wizard on chavo nearly knocking him out,helms pins 1.....2.... but chavo just manage's to kick out,through out the match the tide turns from each of them but chavo manages to hit helms with a pile driver setting him for a frog splash,but chavo has other idea's as he go's out side the ring and grabs a chair,he slide back in and pushes the ref down as helms gets up chavo smashes the chair over his head making a huge dent mark in the chair,helms is shown busted wide open as chavo just smirks,he picks up a mic, Chavo: You see that jimmy,that will be you if you decide to take me on next week,so i'm gonna leave it in your hands wang yang. he chucks the mic to the floor as he walks up the ramp backwards smirking over the sight of helms. Gregory Helms Def. Chavo Guerrero Via DQ in 6:17 Rating: B --------------------------- As we come back from the break a video recap plays of monday nights raw,showing the match of edge vs michaels,straight after that we hear shawn michaels music hit and we go on to our main event, [b]WWE World Heavyweight Title Match[/b]: [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/EdgeVsShawn.jpg[/IMG] This match starts again pretty slow with michaels slowing edge down as much as he can using lots of submissions and takedowns to break down his legs and body,michaels keeps this up for some time as edge gets more worn out by the second but its not to long before he comes on the counter attack,edge hits shawn with lefts and rights and some basic power moves sending shawn to the mat multiple times,edge moves shawn over tot he turnbuckle and lifts him up to the top rope,edge go's to the second and hooks shawn's arm over his as edge hits a massive superplex from the top rope sending both of there body's crashing to the mat,edge go's for the cover but some how michaels kicks out sending frustration through edge,halfway through the match shawn and edge are back at even terms again as neither of them seem to get the upper hand,shawn nails edge with a ddt as he pounce's back up and starts to tune up the band,shawn waits for edge to stand and go's for the sweet chin music but misses as edge ducks out of the way and slides under the ring ropes as he looks at shawn smirking,near the end of the match shawn looks once again to hit the sweet chin music but fails as edge counters into a spear, and covers him getting the pin and winning the match. Edge Def. Shawn Michaels in 11:58 Rating: A ----------------------- After the match edge is walking up the ramp when all of a sudden a masked man comes from the tron and nails edge right between the eyes with a sledgehammer,he takes the world heavyweight title and starts to walk back up the ramp,he gets to the top and looks down at a bloody edge,he looks round at the crowd as he slowly peels of his mask to reveal, [IMG]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h66/Deman121/TEW%20Cuts/CMPunk.jpg[/IMG] The crowd go crazy as they see who it is, Michael Cole: Oh my god! thats former ecw extremist CM Punk,what the hell is he doing here and why did he just take out the champ. JBL: I have no idea michael i'm still in shock. Michael: Is CM Punk on smackdown now?,what in the hell. Michaels voice fades away as were left with image of CM Punk holding the title smirking down at edge. ---------------------- Fianl show Rating: B [I]OOC:I'm pretty happy with this show and the rating,i think the write up it self was much better then raw,and the reason some of the matches are so short is because i decided i'm gonna do mainly short quick match write ups for the weekly show's and long write ups for PPV's and things,hope you enjoyed the show.[/I]