michgcs Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 <blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="christmas_ape" data-cite="christmas_ape" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36100" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div><p> I did consider including short summaries of what was going on in game but not sure if it is needed. </p><p> </p></div></blockquote><p> </p><p> If it's not relevant to the story, I think it's definitely not needed. You're doing a good job of encapsulating the state of the promotion so no need to rock the boat, I say.</p> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mistaken Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 <blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="michgcs" data-cite="michgcs" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36100" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>If it's not relevant to the story, I think it's definitely not needed. You're doing a good job of encapsulating the state of the promotion so no need to rock the boat, I say.</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> quoted for truth!</p> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mistaken Posted May 22, 2013 Share Posted May 22, 2013 <blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36100" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>who will be the first member of the group to turn on atomic? <img alt=":eek:" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/eek.png.0e09df00fa222c85760b9bc1700b5405.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /><p> </p><p> what will be the next major stumbling block in atomics way? <img alt=":eek:" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/eek.png.0e09df00fa222c85760b9bc1700b5405.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /></p><p> </p><p> What is causing Lone wolf's run of amazingly bad luck, leading to continuous certain defeat? <img alt=":eek:" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/eek.png.0e09df00fa222c85760b9bc1700b5405.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /></p></div></blockquote><p> </p><p> </p><p> I am loving this diary, and I am staying tuned!!!</p> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lloyd Posted May 22, 2013 Share Posted May 22, 2013 /\ That! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christmas_ape Posted May 22, 2013 Author Share Posted May 22, 2013 <div id="divContentWrapper" style="font-size: 62.5%; line-height: normal; background-color: rgb(23, 30, 163); background-image: none;"><div style="width:950px;margin:0px auto;position:relative;"></div><div style="width: 700px; margin: 0px auto; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); padding: 0px 20px 20px; position: relative; overflow-y: auto; background-image: none;"> <div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; border: 1px solid transparent;"><div style="padding:5px;text-align:center;font-size:1.8em;"><img src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Graphics/SAW_zpsb4dbbe95.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Graphics/SAW_zpsb4dbbe95.jpg"</a> style=""></div></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id=""><span style="font-size: 20px;" id=""><strong id="">Episode Four: A glimpse of things to come</strong></span></div></div> </div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div id=""><strong id=""><br id="">Narrator: You join us in the middle of an intense battle between two dangerous Simply Awesome Superstars.</strong></div></div> </div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; border: 1px solid transparent;"><div style="padding: 5px; display: block;"><div align="center" style="position:relative;z-index:2;" id=""><img style="margin-right: 25px; width: 150px; height: 150px;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/fb36b846-de70-45ce-8250-6101acdb8ded_zps8fc4c3f0.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/fb36b846-de70-45ce-8250-6101acdb8ded_zps8fc4c3f0.jpg"</a> width="150px" height="150px" alt="Participant 1"><img style="margin-left: 25px; width: 150px; height: 150px;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/d4bf46e3-4e0f-4990-aada-d4655db7e9f2_zpsf5631972.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/d4bf46e3-4e0f-4990-aada-d4655db7e9f2_zpsf5631972.jpg"</a> width="150px" height="150px" alt="Participant 2"><img style="position:absolute;right:259px;top:-20px" alt="Versus" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/content/public/versus/lgvs_alt10.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/content/public/versus/lgvs_alt10.png"</a> title="Versus"><div style="position:absolute;left:445px;top:55px;"><img width="211px" height="117px" alt="grade" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/content/public/grades/none/c_.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/content/public/grades/none/c_.png"</a> title="grade"></div><div style="margin-top: 5px; height: auto;"><div style="font-size: 24px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div id="">Acid vs Mikey James<br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Acid is slumped on his knees as his opponent connects with a stiff kick, and then another and then</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">SMACK</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">The third one sends Acid to the ground</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Mikey jumps onto the top turnbuckle but Acid was already on his feet</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">The two clash as both men attempt a dropkick, with dangerous precision both connect and like two bullets shot at each other, their feet collide sending both men to the floor.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Neither man however gives up, if anything the pace increases.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Kick after kick both men are weared down and it takes a suicidal moonsault from Acid onto the outside of the ring to break the deadlock.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Acid frantically tries to drag Mikey into the ring for the pin.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">He pushes him under the ropes and scrambles in behind him.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">SMACK</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">SUPER KICK! SUPER KICK!</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Mikey had already risen to his feet and connected his signature kick.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">1...</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">2...</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">3! </span></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id="">Backstage Atomic, Jack and Buddy are watching the screen looking impressed with Mikey's victory.</div></div> </div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id=""><span style="color: #ff0000;" id=""><em id="">COMMERCIAL BREAK</em></span></div></div> </div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: pointer;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div id=""><strong id="">Our hero is at his fourth show of what is bound to be many...</strong><br id=""><br id=""><strong id="">Sat backstage with his allies the three debate whether Mikey would be a good addition to the team </strong></div></div> </div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 0px;"><img style="float:left;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/66f11393-9e8f-4b55-9a91-5ff41f3d4c28_zps75758566.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/66f11393-9e8f-4b55-9a91-5ff41f3d4c28_zps75758566.jpg"</a> height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 10px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 425px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">The kid might have some talent, but do we really need more people? </div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/632f5bed-b4d1-468b-8789-6c12972c38f6_zpsd412bcd0.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/632f5bed-b4d1-468b-8789-6c12972c38f6_zpsd412bcd0.jpg"</a> alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 20px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 296px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Way I see it is the more people on our side the better our chances at stopping Gargantuan.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 25px;"><img style="float:left;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/66f11393-9e8f-4b55-9a91-5ff41f3d4c28_zps75758566.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/66f11393-9e8f-4b55-9a91-5ff41f3d4c28_zps75758566.jpg"</a> height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 20px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 411px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Perhaps but what is he? 180lbs? What help is he against Gargantuan.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative; margin-top: 10px;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/4071abc3-fcea-45a1-81b7-342e0b594137_zpsbf39f914.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/4071abc3-fcea-45a1-81b7-342e0b594137_zpsbf39f914.jpg"</a> alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 40px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">I'm not entirely sold on him. But you got to think, none of us are the fastest guys in the world. It can't hurt to have someone that offers something a bit different in the group.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 45px;"><img style="float:left;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/66f11393-9e8f-4b55-9a91-5ff41f3d4c28_zps75758566.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/66f11393-9e8f-4b55-9a91-5ff41f3d4c28_zps75758566.jpg"</a> height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 30px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Do we even know that this kid wants in on all this? Going against Gargantuan isn't exactly the most appealing thing.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative; margin-top: 10px;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/632f5bed-b4d1-468b-8789-6c12972c38f6_zpsd412bcd0.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/632f5bed-b4d1-468b-8789-6c12972c38f6_zpsd412bcd0.jpg"</a> alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 40px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">You're right. We do have to be certain that he is someone who cares enough about bringing honour back to put his body on the line. But there is only one way to find out.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px 10px; top: 5px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div id=""><strong id=""><br id="">With the blessing of his allies, our hero made his way to Mikey James. </strong><br id=""><br id=""><strong id="">Little did he know he wasn't the only person looking for him.</strong> <br id=""><br id=""> </div></div> </div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id="">"BACKBREAKER!"<br id=""><br id=""><img style="display: block; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/b2868137-04af-44ca-beaf-8926b94a46ec_zpsd523677c.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/b2868137-04af-44ca-beaf-8926b94a46ec_zpsd523677c.jpg"</a> alt="" height="75" width="75" id=""><br id="">Gargantuan's huge body dwarfed the poor young wrestler who was now rolling around on the floor in agony.<br id=""><br id=""><img src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/a40b5b04-c56a-405b-8d0e-1d8b5214d350_zps38b2538f.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/a40b5b04-c56a-405b-8d0e-1d8b5214d350_zps38b2538f.jpg"</a> alt="" height="75" width="75" id=""><br id=""><br id="">James could be heard begging for mercy as the giant slowly lifted his boot up.<br id=""><br id="">"SKULLCRUSHER!"<br id=""><br id="">A huge thud was heard and then silence. No more screams, no begging. Just Mikey's motionless body.<br id=""><br id="">Gargantuan smirked and turns round to leave just as there is a knock on the door<br id=""><br id="">"Mikey, you in there?"<br id=""><br id="">The giant opens the door.<br id=""><br id=""><img src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/632f5bed-b4d1-468b-8789-6c12972c38f6_zpsd412bcd0.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/632f5bed-b4d1-468b-8789-6c12972c38f6_zpsd412bcd0.jpg"</a> alt="" height="75" width="75" id=""><br id=""><br id="">Atomic appears confused as he looks up at the man he must defeat.<br id=""><br id="">Gargantuan simply ignores him and exits down the corridor.<br id=""><br id="">Atomic watches the giant and then remembers why he was there.<br id=""><br id="">"Wait a minute... Mikey you in here?"<br id=""><br id="">Atomic runs in to see Mikey flat out on the floor. <br id=""><br id="">He runs back out the door but Garganuan is nowhere to be seen.<br id=""><br id="">"MEDIC?! WE NEED A MEDIC IN HERE!" </div></div> </div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div id=""><br id=""><br id=""><strong id="">For the first time this week, our hero stood face to face with the monster Gargantuan.</strong><br id=""><strong id="">Not only was his recruitment drive unsuccesful but seeing the Champions power must have worried him.</strong><br id=""><strong id="">Will he continue to fight for honour?</strong><br id=""><strong id="">What will his next step be?</strong><br id=""><strong id="">Find out next week on a special two part episode of...</strong><br id=""><br id=""><strong id="">SIMPLY AWESOME WRESTLING!</strong><br id=""><span style="font-size: 1em;" id=""> </span></div></div> </div></div></div></div></div> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christmas_ape Posted May 22, 2013 Author Share Posted May 22, 2013 <blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="michgcs" data-cite="michgcs" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36100" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>If it's not relevant to the story, I think it's definitely not needed. You're doing a good job of encapsulating the state of the promotion so no need to rock the boat, I say.</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Advice taken. I'll be open to anyone interested in knowing what is going on but will leave it out of the actual posts.</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="mistaken" data-cite="mistaken" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36100" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>I am loving this diary, and I am staying tuned!!!</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="The Lloyd" data-cite="The Lloyd" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36100" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>/\ That! <img alt=":D" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/biggrin.png.929299b4c121f473b0026f3d6e74d189.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /></div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Thanks guys. </p><p> </p><p> When reading this back before posting I was shocked at how short it was. Sadly the way I do it means I can't just go and edit it to add some stuff. Hopefully it was short but sweet! The next post is the first part of the ppv so I imagine that will be a more substantial read.</p> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mistaken Posted May 23, 2013 Share Posted May 23, 2013 <p>not to short at all.</p><p> </p><p> when focusing on a single story line, not every episode is going to be a full 30 minute read.</p><p> </p><p> it followed the standard format, one angle or so. plus a match. and if moved the story exactly one step.</p><p> </p><p> this step "the first meeting"</p> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flaviooooo Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 <p>Just caught up on this christmas_ape, very nice!</p><p> </p><p> Your episodes are short and sweet to read. I'm interested to see where this will be going <img alt="" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/smile.png.142cfa0a1cd2925c0463c1d00f499df2.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /></p> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3rdStringPG Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 <p>Simply...awesome. <img alt="" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/biggrin.png.929299b4c121f473b0026f3d6e74d189.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /></p><p> </p><p> Haven't had time to check out as many diaries as I used to, and I've just gotten caught up. I love the short-and-sweet episode concept and for me, it's like I'm reading a comic book rather than watching wrestling on TV. </p><p> </p><p> All in all, I'm very impressed with the originality and the way the stories are moving along. Keep up the good work!</p> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christmas_ape Posted May 25, 2013 Author Share Posted May 25, 2013 <div id="divContentWrapper" style="font-size: 62.5%; line-height: normal; background-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-image: none;"><div style="width:950px;margin:0px auto;position:relative;"></div><div style="width: 700px; margin: 0px auto; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); padding: 0px 20px 20px; position: relative; overflow-y: auto; background-image: none;"> <div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; border: 1px solid transparent;"><div style="padding:5px;text-align:center;font-size:1.8em;"><img src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Graphics/SAW_zpsb4dbbe95.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Graphics/SAW_zpsb4dbbe95.jpg"</a> style=""></div></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id=""><span style="font-size: 20px;" id=""><strong id="">Episode 5: SAW 1</strong></span></div></div> </div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: pointer;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div id=""><strong id="">Narrator: Tonight is Atomic's first ever SAW PPV...</strong><br id=""><br id=""><strong id="">However our hero is without a match...</strong><br id=""><br id=""><strong id="">Despite this, it is likely a night that he will remember for some time. </strong></div></div> </div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; border: 1px solid transparent;"><div style="padding: 5px; display: block;"><div align="center" style="position:relative;z-index:2;" id=""><img style="margin-right: 25px; width: 150px; height: 150px;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/21058e3d-167b-4e4d-a30d-b0464368fc92_zps9e1e9988.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/21058e3d-167b-4e4d-a30d-b0464368fc92_zps9e1e9988.jpg"</a> width="150px" height="150px" alt="Participant 1"><img style="margin-left: 25px; width: 150px; height: 150px;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg"</a> width="150px" height="150px" alt="Participant 2"><img style="position:absolute;right:259px;top:-20px" alt="Versus" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/content/public/versus/lgvs_alt10.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/content/public/versus/lgvs_alt10.png"</a> title="Versus"><div style="position:absolute;left:445px;top:55px;"><img width="211px" height="117px" alt="grade" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/content/public/grades/none/c_.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/content/public/grades/none/c_.png"</a> title="grade"></div><div style="margin-top: 5px; height: auto;"><div style="font-size: 24px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div id="">Hardcore Title: Koshiro Ino© vs Jay Chord<br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">The show begins with a brutal brawl between the Hardcore champion and the son of the man who sent Atomic on his quest.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Jay had won a number one contenders match last month and was finally getting his shot. Koshiro was wearing a bandage around his waist after the powerbomb outside the ring he suffered two weeks prior. Despite this Ino was everyone's favourite to win.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">The youngster's cocky aura was quickly destroyed with a chair shot to the back of the head.</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Chord was learning the hard way that Ino thrives in this lawless and chaotic environment.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Also the presence of the ninja bodyguard was a constant worry for the challenger.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Jay managed to get back into the match with a diving closeline followed by a running leg drop but he perhaps went one step too far when he climbed up top and attempted to hit a moonsault.</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Koshiro was wise enough to not only roll out of the way but place a chair for Jay to land on.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">"KOBRA KLUTCH"</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Koshiro stands over Jay and applies to dreaded submission. </span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">At first Jay struggled towards the ropes only to remember that it was futile in a hardcore match.</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">He grapsed Koshiro hands but the grip was too tight.</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Jay began to fade but then he spotted a way out.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">CRACK!</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Jay had used a metal pipe to break free!</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Koshiro rolled onto the floor as blood mixed with his green face paint.</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Jay set up a chair on the floor and signals for his finisher as Koshiro stumbled onto his feet.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">"CHORD CUTTER!"</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Jay leaped up and brought Koshiro's head crashing down onto the steel chair!</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">1...</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">2...</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">CRACK!</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Chord slumps on to the matt revealing Ninja stood with a chair.<br id="">He drops the weapon and places Ino on top of his opponent before sliding back out of the ring.<br id=""></span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">1...</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">2...</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">3!</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">"The winner and still Hardcore Champion... Koshiro Ino!"</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Boos rained down from crowd as Ino got to his feet and was handed his belt.</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Before leaving Koshiro grabbed a microphone.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">"That's why me greatest hardcore champion ever!</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Nobody can beat me!</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">No Chord and not Atomic man!</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">He will pay for what he did!</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Everybody pay!"</span></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id=""><span style="color: #ff0000;" id=""><strong id=""><em id="">COMMERCIAL BREAK</em></strong></span></div></div> </div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id="">Atomic is shown sat backstage with Jack and Buddy having just watched the title match.<strong id=""><br id=""> </strong></div></div> </div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 0px;"><img style="float:left;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/725ede6a-f3e3-4745-b554-f66e2d02d725_zps8a0a5d46.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/725ede6a-f3e3-4745-b554-f66e2d02d725_zps8a0a5d46.jpg"</a> height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 20px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 489px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">We got him scared! I can sense fear like a shark tastes blood and that... was fear. "Atomic man" is coming for you Ino!</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg"</a> alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 10px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">All I want to know is when can I face him?</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 25px;"><img style="float:left;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bbcc78b6-40ba-4aa4-8ea6-acf2a8ccd733_zps39a50c35.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bbcc78b6-40ba-4aa4-8ea6-acf2a8ccd733_zps39a50c35.jpg"</a> height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 40px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 420px; top: 0px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Apparently next month he will defend the title in a four man ladder match. I think in the upcoming weeks we can qualify. But right now I think we should consider this Jay kid. Seems a little over confident but the kids got talent, perhaps he could be useful against Gargantuan?</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 29px;"><img style="float:left;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/725ede6a-f3e3-4745-b554-f66e2d02d725_zps8a0a5d46.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/725ede6a-f3e3-4745-b554-f66e2d02d725_zps8a0a5d46.jpg"</a> height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 20px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 385px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">You know I actually agree with him Atomic. We shouldn't stop searching for allies just because of what happened to Mikey. </div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg"</a> alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 10px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 94px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Alright let's go.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id=""><br id="">The scene cuts to Jay Chord's locker room where Atomic, Jack and Buddy all await his answer.<br id=""> </div></div> </div><div style="position:relative;"><img style="float:left;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg"</a> height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 10px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 75px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">No.<span style="font-size: 1em;" id=""> </span></div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg"</a> alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 20px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">What...? Why? Don't you want to stop Gargantuan? We could use someone like you.<span style="font-size: 1em;" id=""> </span></div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 25px;"><img style="float:left;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg"</a> height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 53px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 421px; top: 0px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Damn right you could use someone like me. And yeah... I want to stop Gargantuan. But this is what makes me sick, you just got here and you're running around like some sort of superhero. I don't know what my Father was thinking... <strong id="">I</strong> can beat Gargantuan <strong id="">myself</strong>. I, unlike you, don't <strong id="">need nor want</strong> a little ragtag army of losers on my side. </div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id=""><br id="">Atomic looks at Jack who shrugs back. The three men leave slightly taken a back by the rejection.<br id=""><br id=""> </div></div> </div><div style="position:relative;"><img style="float:left;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bbcc78b6-40ba-4aa4-8ea6-acf2a8ccd733_zps39a50c35.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bbcc78b6-40ba-4aa4-8ea6-acf2a8ccd733_zps39a50c35.jpg"</a> height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 20px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 386px; top: 0px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">I guess Jay going after Gargantuan by himself isn't the end of the world. What's important is that the title is liberated right?</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative; margin-top: 45px;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg"</a> alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 20px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">That's true. Although we need to know what his intentions are. Is he going to get in our way?</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative;"><img style="float:left;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/725ede6a-f3e3-4745-b554-f66e2d02d725_zps8a0a5d46.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/725ede6a-f3e3-4745-b554-f66e2d02d725_zps8a0a5d46.jpg"</a> height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 20px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">It's a good question, but at the end of the day we ain't mind readers. What are we supposed to do?</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative; margin-top: 5px;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="<a href="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg" rel="external nofollow">http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg"</a> alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 10px;" src="<a href="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png" rel="external nofollow">http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div</a> style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Well Jack, I think I might just have a plan...</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div id=""><br id=""><strong id="">So far our hero has not had the best night...</strong><br id=""><strong id="">Not only does Koshiro remain a dominant Hardcore Champion but Jay has rejected his offer of allegiance...</strong><br id=""><strong id="">What will his plan be?</strong><br id=""><strong id="">And will it be successful?</strong><br id=""><br id=""><strong id="">Join us next week to find out on...</strong><br id=""><br id=""><strong id="">SIMPLY AWESOME WRESTLING! </strong></div></div> </div></div></div></div></div> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christmas_ape Posted May 25, 2013 Author Share Posted May 25, 2013 <p>Thanks to all who have commented lately and a special thanks to Alvarasus for nominating this for diary of the month!</p><p> </p><p> I wasn't sure whether to post the second part of the PPV with the first or not... But I've decided to keep two part episodes for season finales and things like that.</p><p> </p><p> That said, the second part should be up soon along with a second set of questions for everyone.</p> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peppermint Rage Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 this is simply awesome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lloyd Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 Nice match bro... Couldn't guess who was going to win, very well written... thanks for your nomination for me again I know you weren't sure... lol... but thankyou buddy And you have my vote for Cverse diary if it gets moved over THELloyd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
20LEgend Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 <p>I haven't commented in this yet, I thought I had at the start but I can only echo what other people have said RE: single character and the comic book style. Captain Atomic is one of my favourites (or Atom Smasher as I know him) and he's perfect for this - the dynamic between Garner, Griffiths and Atomic is really enjoyable to follow - I liked how Buddy Garner set up the in the upcoming weeks we can qualify, it went back to the comic book style or video game where your end goal is set up there and then.</p><p> </p><p> It seems really hard to try and get the right tone for this type of thing with the quest style (I know I couldn't do it) but it comes across as if you're putting it across really well (not entirely sure that makes sense but it comes across as if, what I assume is how you want it to <img alt="" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/tongue.png.ceb643b2956793497cef30b0e944be28.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /> (still not making that much sense <img alt="" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/biggrin.png.929299b4c121f473b0026f3d6e74d189.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" />)).</p> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mistaken Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 Christmas Ape = Santa clause all year round! thanks for another present! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christmas_ape Posted May 27, 2013 Author Share Posted May 27, 2013 <div id="divContentWrapper" style="font-size: 62.5%; line-height: normal; background-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-image: none;"><div style="width:950px;margin:0px auto;position:relative;"></div><div style="width: 700px; margin: 0px auto; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); padding: 0px 20px 20px; position: relative; overflow-y: auto; background-image: none;"> <div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; border: 1px solid transparent;"><div style="padding:5px;text-align:center;font-size:1.8em;"><img src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Graphics/SAW_zpsb4dbbe95.jpg" style=""></div></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id=""><span style="font-size: 20px;" id=""><strong id="">Episode 6: SAW 1</strong></span></div></div> </div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div id=""><br id=""><strong id="">Our hero faced rejection on last week's episode after meeting Jay Chord for the first time.</strong><br id=""><strong id="">However the night is not yet over for the group...</strong></div></div> </div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id="">The show starts within an unfamiliar setting. A locker room very different to the humble bare rooms we have seen Atomic occupy on a weekly basis. This locker room looks and sounds more like an exclusive V.I.P section of an upmarket nightclub. <br id=""> </div></div> </div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 0px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 20px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 363px; top: 0px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">No Clarky I won't calm down! I had that match won! If I'm going to beat Gargantuan I need to defeat chumps like Ino. </div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 69px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/8cb3d5d8-2a42-468e-8a20-09cf17c67d29_zps53055d2a.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 40px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 304px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">You're right Boss but so is Clarky. We got the drinks, the music... the ladies! Let's relax and have some fun. We'll get to Gargantuan, don't you worry about that.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 29px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/049dfebd-e6e1-44b4-8a82-d5c333df514b_zps3c98a63b.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 20px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 416px; top: 0px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Listen to Donny. Now I know you've had your eye on... what's her name? Blonde girl? Ashley that's it! Yo Ashley! Get over here!</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 69px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 20px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Perhaps you guys are right. We'll talk business next week. </div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/725ede6a-f3e3-4745-b554-f66e2d02d725_zps8a0a5d46.jpg" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 20px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Look I think I've made a mistake coming here... I'll let myself out. </div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 5px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/8cb3d5d8-2a42-468e-8a20-09cf17c67d29_zps53055d2a.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 20px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Let him go boss, I don't know why you let him in here anyway. He's with Atomic.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 69px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 40px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 485px; top: 0px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Nah... I trust him. I always thought there was something strange about a man like Jack teaming up with a man like Atomic. Jack's one of us through and through.<br id=""><br id="">So <strong id="">no</strong> Jack, you sit down... I'll get you a drink. </div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px 10px; top: 5px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id=""><br id="">The scene cuts to a contrasting locker room with just Atomic and Buddy in, void of music, drinks and ladies the two are instead focused on watching the screen showing the event.</div></div> </div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 0px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 10px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 311px; top: 0px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id=""><strong id="">We</strong> should be in that ring instead of sat back here!</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bbcc78b6-40ba-4aa4-8ea6-acf2a8ccd733_zps39a50c35.jpg" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 20px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 382px; top: 0px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Don't worry Atomic, our time will come. We must be patient. Our next step is to qualify for next month's ladder match.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 25px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/bc0d0d9e-9b20-4514-b36e-a0739464e911_zpsd1f6d151.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 20px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 249px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">But first let's hope Jack is successful in working out what's going on with Jay.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px 10px; top: 5px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id=""><br id=""><span style="color: #ff0000;" id=""><em id=""><strong id="">COMMERICAL BREAK<br id=""> </strong></em></span></div></div> </div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; border: 1px solid transparent;"><div style="padding: 5px; display: block;"><div align="center" style="position:relative;z-index:2;" id=""><img style="margin-right: 25px; width: 150px; height: 150px;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/b19e7bb7-ae50-4ca4-90f9-3160f0c398f0_zpsfca07665.jpg" width="150px" height="150px" alt="Participant 1"><img style="margin-left: 25px; width: 150px; height: 150px;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/3df13fc2-4695-4abc-915a-66ededbb8522_zps44d85673.jpg" width="150px" height="150px" alt="Participant 2"><img style="position:absolute;right:259px;top:-20px" alt="Versus" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/content/public/versus/lgvs_alt10.png" title="Versus"><div style="position:absolute;left:445px;top:55px;"><img width="211px" height="117px" alt="grade" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/content/public/grades/none/c_.png" title="grade"></div><div style="margin-top: 5px; height: auto;"><div style="font-size: 24px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div id="">SAW World Heavyweight Championship Match<br id=""> Gargantuan© vs Sgt. Bubba<br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">The bell rang and Sgt charged towards Gargantuan.</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Bubba is known for his sadistic nature however, rather than being intimidated, Gargantuan found the sight of somebody squaring up to him amusing.</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">With a big boot Bubba is sent to the ground but he jumps stright back up.</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">The Champion starts to get annoyed so hoists his opponent into the air and throws him straight over the ropes onto the hard floor.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Bubba rolls on the floor in pain as he begins to realise that even with his 'never say die' attitude, he has very little hope. </span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">The Sgt. isn't a small man but consistently loses all his attempts at gaining some momentum in the match. Gargantuan's sheer size and power is simply too much for him.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Bubba pulls himself to his feet and takes one last charge but once again is met with a huge boot to the face.</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Gargantuan picks up his opponent with ease.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">"BACKBREAKER!"</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Bubba crashes to the floor once again. Admirably he still has the energy to try and crawl out of the ring but his attempts are ultimiately futile as a shadow creeps up above his head.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">"SKULLCRUSHER!"</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Gargantuan keeps his foot on his opponent's head.</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">1...</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">2...</span><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">3!</span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">Gargantuan lifts an arm into the air in celebration as the referee tries to pull his foot off Bubba's head. </span><br id=""><br id=""><span style="font-size: 16px;" id="">"Ladies and Gentlemen, your winner and still World Heavyweight Champion... Gargantuan."</span><br id=""><br id=""> </div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 0px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/049dfebd-e6e1-44b4-8a82-d5c333df514b_zps3c98a63b.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 10px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Wow... That's one dangerous man.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 89px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/8cb3d5d8-2a42-468e-8a20-09cf17c67d29_zps53055d2a.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 10px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 358px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Yeah... Probably the most dangerous man I've ever seen.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 89px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 30px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 460px; top: 0px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">What the hell are you guys on about? <strong id="">I'm</strong> the most dangerous man in the world you idiots. You don't think I can beat him? Jack... What do you think?</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/725ede6a-f3e3-4745-b554-f66e2d02d725_zps8a0a5d46.jpg" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 20px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 300px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">The big guy looks one tough S.O.B. But if anyone is going to beat him... I'd put my money on you.</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 45px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 53px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 419px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Hmm yeah. That's good to hear. The truth is always good to hear. <br id=""><br id="">Donny, do me a favour? Go fetch my bat. <br id=""><br id="">So Jack I don't believe I heard you explain before... why is it you have left Atomic. </div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div align="right" style="margin-bottom: 10px; position: relative; margin-top: 10px;"><div style="float:right;" id=""><img height="113px" width="113px" style="float: right;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/725ede6a-f3e3-4745-b554-f66e2d02d725_zps8a0a5d46.jpg" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; right: 103px; top: 30px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-r.png"></div><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 123px 10px 0px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 391px; top: 0px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Well you know me. I'm a betting man... and the odds are in your favour. Although I have to admit... there is something troubling me. After you do indeed defeat Gargantuan. <strong id="">Then</strong> what?</div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 45px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 20px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 492px; top: 0px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">Then what? I don't see that being any of your business quite frankly Jack. You say you're a betting man. Well it just so happens I have a little question for you. </div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px 10px; top: 5px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id=""><br id="">Jay stands up as an old looking baseball bat his handed to him. He begins to slowly walk behind Jack's chair. <br id=""> </div></div> </div><div style="position: relative; margin-top: 10px;"><img style="float:left;" src="http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r498/christmas_ape/SAW/SAW%20Characters/6def1c1d-fd00-45b8-a5e1-008e1dd01353_zps2c825ab2.jpg" height="113px" width="113px" alt="Speaker"><img height="20px" width="22px" style="position: absolute; left: 103px; top: 53px;" src="http://fictionplus.interwebz.co.nz/images/layout/sbpointer/sb-pointer-d9d9d9-l.png"><div style="font-size: 16px; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; position: relative; background-color: rgb(217, 217, 217); margin: 0px 0px 10px 123px; padding: 7px; border-top-left-radius: 0px; border-top-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-right-radius: 0px; border-bottom-left-radius: 0px; width: 282px; top: 0px; height: auto; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;"><div style=""><div id="">If I were to swing this bat right into your back. <strong id="">Right now</strong>. How many ribs would I break? What would you put your money on hey Jack? <br id="">1...? <br id="">2? <br id="">Maybe 3?!<br id=""> <strong id="">Well Jack</strong>!<br id=""> <strong id="">How many!</strong> </div></div><div style="" id=""></div></div></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px 10px; top: 5px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div style="text-align: center;" id=""><br id="">Jack began to turn round but not before Jay swung the weapon and connected with a strong blow to his side. <br id=""><br id="">CRASH!<br id=""><br id="">Jack falls to the ground holding his sides. <br id=""><br id="">"YOU MOTHER.."<br id=""><br id="">THWACK!<br id=""><br id="">Another blow is dealt to Jack's back as Donny and Clarky jump up and cheer.<br id=""><br id="">"HOMERUN FOR CHORD!"<br id=""><br id="">The two men laugh as they join an enraged Chord to kick Jack while he is down.<br id=""><br id="">"YOU THINK I'M STUPID JACK?!<br id=""><br id="">DOES ATOMIC THINK I'M STUPID?!<br id=""><br id="">YOU CAN GO BACK TO HIM WITH A MESSAGE<br id=""><br id="">JAY CHORD IS GOING TO BEAT GARGANTUAN<br id=""><br id="">AND <strong id="">THIS</strong> IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU GET IN MY WAY!"<br id=""><br id="">The scene cuts out and shows Atomic and Buddy watching the screen, oblivious to the trouble their friend is in.<br id=""> </div></div> </div></div></div><div style="padding:0 5px;overflow:hidden;" id=""><div id=""><div style="height: 18px; cursor: n-resize;"></div><div style="clear: both; position: relative; padding: 5px; margin: 5px 0px; height: auto; border: 1px solid transparent;"> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; display: block;"><div id=""><strong id="">Our hero isn't quite aware of it yet, but tonight's plan has been a disaster.<br id="">Not only did it not fool Jay but it has resulted in the intense beating of his friend.<br id=""><br id="">What state will Jack be in?<br id="">How will Atomic react when he finds out?<br id=""><br id="">Join us next week to find out on...<br id=""><br id="">SIMPLY AWESOME WRESTLING! </strong></div></div> </div></div></div></div></div> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christmas_ape Posted May 27, 2013 Author Share Posted May 27, 2013 Thanks for the comments. Even though the PPV didn't hold much special interest for Atomic I wanted to make it a two parter and put some more time into them. I enjoyed writing these last two episodes. Not certain about the black background but I just wanted something to distinguish it from a normal show as sadly I don't believe there are any custom made PPV logo's for SAW. That said if anybody knows how to/enjoys making logo's then drop me a message! I'll probably post it in some request thread at some point as it would also be nice to get a custom made belt foro the World and Hardcore titles. Anyway I hope you enjoy the second part of the PPV! Surveys should be up soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaysin Posted May 27, 2013 Share Posted May 27, 2013 Jay Chord is my hero... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lloyd Posted May 27, 2013 Share Posted May 27, 2013 It's like a James Bond movie now! Send Jack the spy in to find out the plans of the evil baddies... they beat him up and send him packing... then the big henchman (gargantuan) kills someone again (sgt. bubba)... Lemme guess, Atomic is gonna steal this 'Ashley' lady from right under the criminal mastermind that is Jay Chord's nose?!?! I LOVE IT!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mistaken Posted May 27, 2013 Share Posted May 27, 2013 first great episode! Second Christmas Ape, have you thought about titling each episode? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christmas_ape Posted May 27, 2013 Author Share Posted May 27, 2013 So that last show revealed the rest of your answers to the survey. Over 50% of you voted for PPV's to be named SAW 1,2,3 etc Just over 50% of you voted for Mikey James to play more of a role than Acid. That one was close and went right down to the final vote. Sgt. Bubba won with the most clear cut vote. This week there are actually two surveys, one contains three questions which will affect some details in the story. The second one is more just a way for me to get some feedback. I'm thinking with it being anonymous I should get an honest response. I put them as two separate surveys just in case someone wants to vote for the booking decisions but doesn't feel they have read enough to give feedback. Storyline Survey Feedback Survey P.S Credit for the survey idea should again go to Eisen-Verse (or at least that's who I first saw using them) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christmas_ape Posted May 27, 2013 Author Share Posted May 27, 2013 I'm glad Jay Chord has gone down well. I didn't intend on him to come out so Bond villianish but I read back and liked him so I'm pretty sure he is going to stay that way. I wasn't sure whether to give the second episode of the ppv a different title but I think giving them the same name will make them seem more like a two parter if ever this is all put together in a PDF or something. Looking forward to seeing the responses for the surveys! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peppermint Rage Posted May 27, 2013 Share Posted May 27, 2013 can't wait to see what happens next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michgcs Posted May 28, 2013 Share Posted May 28, 2013 YES! I love it! Keep the shows coming, buddy, 'cause they've all been home runs. APE HITS A HOME RUN! HOME RUN FOR CHRISTMAS_APE! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mistaken Posted May 28, 2013 Share Posted May 28, 2013 survey's done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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