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---- MAIN EVENT / WORLD CHAMPIONSHIP ----

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MagnusCOCKY

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Rey MysterioSHOW STEALER

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Wade BarrettMAVERICK

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Alberto El PatronSNOB

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CM PunkCHOSEN ONE

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Hunter Michael IIIFRANCHISE PLAYER

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---- UPPER MIDCARD / INTERCONTINENTAL CHAMPIONSHIP ----

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Cody RhodesDEGENERATE

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Jake HagerLEGITIMATE ATHLETE

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James StormCOWBOY

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Mike BennettAGAINST THE WORLD

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Mr AndersonROGUE

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MVPARROGANT

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---- MIDCARD / UNITED STATES CHAMPIONSHIP ----

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Brian CageRAGING BULL

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Jay LethalCOOL

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Rob EckosSEX SYMBOL

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Adam ColeEGOMANIAC

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Carlito ColonPRETENTIOUS

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Thomas LatimerANARCHIST

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---- LOWER MIDCARD / TELEVISION CHAMPIONSHIP ----

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Johnny NitroLADIES MAN

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RicochetEVOLUTION

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PentagonPSYCHO

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Sami CallihanLOOSE CANNON

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---- TAG TEAM DIVISION / TAG TEAM CHAMPIONSHIPS ----

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Davey Richards

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Eddie Edwards

American WolvesWRESTLING MACHINE

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Alex Shelley

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Chris Sabin

Motor City Machine GunsPUNK

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Christopher Daniels

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Kazarian

Bad InfluenceOBNOXIOUS

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Tama Tonga

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Tanga Roa

Guerillaz of DestinyBAD ASS

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---- MANAGER ----

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AJ LeeCRAZY

m/ CM Punk

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chopmoEVIL INCARNATE

m/ Thomas Latimer

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Jim CornetteOLD SCHOOL MANAGER

m/ Mike Bennett

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RavenINTELLIGENT PSYCHO

m/ Sami Callihan

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Ricardo RodriguezANNOYING

m/ Alberto El Patron

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---- AUTHORITY FIGURE ----

 

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StingPOWER AND PAINT

 

---- ANNOUNCERS ----

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Joey Styles

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Mauro Ranallo

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Taz

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---- REFEREES ----

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Jim Korderas

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Mickie Henson

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Rick Knox

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---- ROAD AGENTS ----

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Ricky Steamboat

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Tom Prichard

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---- TELEVISION ----

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ELITE: Revolution

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ELITE: Insurgency <DORMANT FOR NOW>

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---- EVENTS ----

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DECEMBER - Global Warfare <TOURNAMENT>

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JANUARY - GROUND ZERO <ROYAL RUMBLE>

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FEBRUARY - Fallout

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MARCH - Destination X

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APRIL – HOMECOMING <SEASON FINALE>

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MAY - Ascension

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JUNE – Equinox

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JULY - PARADISE CITY <M.I.T.B MATCH>

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AUGUST - Burn It Down

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SEPTEMBER - Judgement Day

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OCTOBER – HELLBOUND <ELIMINATION CHAMBER>

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NOVEMBER - End of Days

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<p>Company & World Info</p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p>AUTHOR NOTES;</p><p>

This is a Real World Database from TheWho87 (April 2017).</p><p>

The Cuts for the People folder were all taken from PSD-DREAMS and edited by myself. All Event and TV graphics were all created by myself (I am happy for people to use them in their own games if they choose to recreate this promotion, please give credit where credit is due).</p><p> </p><p>

The only Real World changes I have made for this is as follows;</p><p>

CM Punk and AJ Brooks (AJ Lee) have been made active wrestlers.</p><p>

Following a narration of my world, Vince McMahon has maximum settings for SMOKING/DRINKING/SOFT DRUGS/HARD DRUGS/STEROIDS/LAW ISSUES (you can not set someone to pass on during the play of the game so this is like a roulette table of when he will, still leaving some mystery to the game as well.</p><p>

Eric Bischoff has been set as a Possible Owner of WCW with it being set to Mandatory.</p><p>

Stephanie McMahon has been added to the Possible Owners of WWE with it being set to Mandatory.</p><p>

Shane McMahon has been added to the Possible Owners of WWE with it being set to Mandatory.</p><p>

Triple H has been added to the Possible Owners of NXT with it being set to Mandatory.</p><p>

Paul Heyman has been added to the Possible Owners of ECW with it being set to Mandatory.</p><p> </p><p>

Everything else in the game bar my User's presence is how TheWho87's team has set the World/Database, some of the Overness ratings are out of whack for where my roster is currently at but in my opinion it adds to the challenge to build these people to where they should be.</p><p> </p><p>

The company was set up after the initial game start (as a 'Start Your Own Company' Promotion) so there is not a stupid amount of money there and the Popularity is at the Cult Level it started me on.</p><p> </p><p>

My roster has been kept to a little as possible for the time being of the start to build the company around the initial Wrestlers I started with and looking to hire as they expand but unless in some uncanny way of someone's contract coming up in WWE that is on my short list I will not be hiring until that point of the game.</p><p> </p><p>

ELITE Currently has a TV Deal starting after their inaugural event 'Homecoming' which is with ESPN (3 months/Late Evening/USA & Canada) and the PPV Broadcaster is with Verizon FiOS (3 months/Late Evening/USA) out of habit when building my company is always try aim for short contracts and the best Viewing Slot possible whilst still keeping my coverage size as big as possible with both companies that are broadcasting for me sitting on Medium.</p><p> </p><p>

I have assigned all Wrestlers/Managers with a worthy gimmick and refrained from repeating gimmicks I.E; Having 4 Bad Asses in the one roster. All of the Staff bar Taz have been given the Staff Member (Realistic) gimmick. </p><p> </p><p>

I am completely open to comments and questions about how and what has been done or is coming up.</p><p> </p><p>

For those who are worried about the consistency of this dynasty; I just spent 10+ Hours designing and planning out my first steps with this post taking multiple hours alone due to trying to perfect my formatting of the roster/brief overview post. I ain't going anywhere fast and having my own graphics for this save has only added to my immersion of this, making me even more excited about debuting a public dynasty. To add to that I am still unsure about what kind of schedule/how many shows I will run in a week basis, I am leaning between either running them as the game schedule is or running a show every 3-4 Days but it will be weekly at the very least, if I take the game world cycle I will try do some things within the week to spice it up and make the Dynasty/Real World tick a bit more I.E; Company updates and news.</p><p> </p><p>

I will be running and posting the Homecoming I event asap as it is where all the championships will be decided, furthermore I am really aching and wanting to be able to advance my planning/storylines. None of the winners have been decided for the event and will be random outcome of the match. </p></div><p></p><p></p>

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<p>Homecoming I Match Listing</p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>---- </strong><strong><span style="text-decoration:underline;">WORLD CHAMPIONSHIP</span></strong><strong> ----</strong></p><p><strong>

6 WAY SINGLES MATCH</strong></p></div><p></p><p></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Magnus</span></strong> – <em>COCKY</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Rey Mysterio</span></strong> – <em>SHOW STEALER</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Wade Barrett</span></strong> – <em>MAVERICK</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Alberto El Patron</span></strong> – <em>SNOB</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">CM Punk</span></strong> – <em>CHOSEN ONE</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Hunter Michael III</span></strong> – <em>FRANCHISE PLAYER</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></table></p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>---- </strong><strong><span style="text-decoration:underline;">INTERCONTINENTAL CHAMPIONSHIP</span></strong><strong> ----</strong></p><p><strong>

6 WAY SINGLES MATCH</strong></p></div><p></p><p></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Cody Rhodes</span></strong> – <em>DEGENERATE</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Jake Hager</span></strong> – <em>LEGITIMATE ATHLETE</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">James Storm</span></strong> – <em>COWBOY</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Mike Bennett</span></strong> – <em>AGAINST THE WORLD</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Mr Anderson</span></strong> – <em>ROGUE</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">MVP</span></strong> – <em>ARROGANT</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></table></p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>---- </strong><strong><span style="text-decoration:underline;">UNITED STATES CHAMPIONSHIP</span></strong><strong> ----</strong></p><p><strong>

6 WAY SINGLES MATCH</strong></p></div><p></p><p></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Brian Cage</span></strong> – <em>RAGING BULL</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Jay Lethal</span></strong> – <em>COOL</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Rob Eckos</span></strong> – <em>SEX SYMBOL</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Adam Cole</span></strong> – <em>EGOMANIAC</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Carlito Colon</span></strong> – <em>PRETENTIOUS</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Thomas Latimer</span></strong> – <em>ANARCHIST</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></table></p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>---- </strong><strong><span style="text-decoration:underline;">TELEVISION CHAMPIONSHIP</span></strong><strong> ----</strong></p><p><strong>

4 WAY SINGLES MATCH</strong></p></div><p></p><p></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Johnny Nitro</span></strong> – <em>LADIES MAN</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Ricochet</span></strong> – <em>EVOLUTION</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Pentagon</span></strong> – <em>PSYCHO</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Sami Callihan</span></strong></strong> – <em>LOOSE CANNON</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></table></p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>---- </strong><strong><span style="text-decoration:underline;">TAG TEAM CHAMPIONSHIPS</span></strong><strong> ----</strong></p><p><strong>

4 WAY TAG TEAM MATCH</strong></p></div><p></p><p></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Davey Richards</span></strong></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Eddie Edwards</span></strong></p><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">American Wolves</span></strong> – <em>WRESTLING MACHINE</em> </p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Alex Shelley</span></strong></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Chris Sabin</span></strong></p><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Motor City Machine Guns</span></strong> – <em>PUNK</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Christopher Daniels</span></strong></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Kazarian</span></strong></p><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Bad Influence</span></strong> – <em>OBNOXIOUS</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

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<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Tama Tonga</span></strong></p><p>

<span>http://i.imgur.com/bBuFVSK.jpg</span></p><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Tanga Roa</span></strong></p><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Guerillaz of Destiny</span></strong> – <em>BAD ASS</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></table></p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>PLAAAAAAAAAAAAACE YOUR PREDICTIONS</strong></p><p><strong>

ELITE Pro Wrestling Homecoming I - Results will be posted in 24 Hours.</strong></p></div><p></p>

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ELITE Homecoming I

World Championship: Magnus vs. Rey Mysterio vs. Wade Barrett vs. Alberto El Patron vs. C.M. Punk vs. Hunter Michael III

Intercontinental Championship: Cody Rhodes vs. Jake Hager vs. James Storm vs. Mike Bennett vs. Mr. Anderson vs. M.V.P.

United States Championship: Brian Cage vs. Jay Lethal vs. Rob Eckos vs. Adam Cole vs. Carlito Colon vs. Thomas Latimer

Television Championship: Johnny Nitro vs. Ricochet vs. Pentagon vs. Sami Callahan

Tag Team Championships: American Wolves (Davie Richards & Eddie Edwards) vs. Motor City Machine Guns (Alex Shelly & Chris Sabin) vs. Bad Influence (Christopher Daniels & Kazarian) vs. Guerillaz of Destiny (Tama Tonga & Tanga Roa)

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<p>ELITE Homecoming I</p><p>

World Championship: Magnus vs. Rey Mysterio vs. Wade Barrett vs. Alberto El Patron vs. <strong>C.M. Punk</strong> vs. Hunter Michael III</p><p>

Intercontinental Championship: <strong>Cody Rhodes</strong> vs. Jake Hager vs. James Storm vs. Mike Bennett vs. Mr. Anderson vs. M.V.P. </p><p>

United States Championship: Brian Cage vs. Jay Lethal vs. Rob Eckos vs. Adam Cole vs. Carlito Colon vs. <strong>Thomas Latimer </strong></p><p>

Television Championship: <strong>Johnny Nitro</strong> vs. Ricochet vs. Pentagon vs. Sami Callahan </p><p>

Tag Team Championships: American Wolves (Davie Richards & Eddie Edwards) vs. <strong>Motor City Machine Guns (Alex Shelly & Chris Sabin)</strong> vs. Bad Influence (Christopher Daniels & Kazarian) vs. Guerillaz of Destiny (Tama Tonga & Tanga Roa)</p>

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<p>ELITE Homecoming I</p><p>

World Championship: Magnus vs. Rey Mysterio vs. Wade Barrett vs. Alberto El Patron vs. <strong>C.M. Punk</strong> vs. Hunter Michael III</p><p>

Intercontinental Championship: Cody Rhodes vs. Jake Hager vs. <strong>James Storm</strong> vs. Mike Bennett vs. Mr. Anderson vs. M.V.P. </p><p>

United States Championship: <strong>Brian Cage</strong> vs. Jay Lethal vs. Rob Eckos vs. Adam Cole vs. Carlito Colon vs. Thomas Latimer </p><p>

Television Championship: Johnny Nitro vs. <strong>Ricochet</strong> vs. Pentagon vs. Sami Callahan </p><p>

Tag Team Championships: American Wolves (Davie Richards & Eddie Edwards) vs. Motor City Machine Guns (Alex Shelly & Chris Sabin) vs. <strong>Bad Influence</strong> (Christopher Daniels & Kazarian) vs. Guerillaz of Destiny (Tama Tonga & Tanga Roa)</p><p> </p><p>

Looks really good!</p>

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<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="OGpistolpete" data-cite="OGpistolpete" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="43721" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>ELITE Homecoming I<p> World Championship: Magnus vs. Rey Mysterio vs. Wade Barrett vs. Alberto El Patron vs. <strong>C.M. Punk</strong> vs. Hunter Michael III</p><p> Intercontinental Championship: Cody Rhodes vs. Jake Hager vs. <strong>James Storm</strong> vs. Mike Bennett vs. Mr. Anderson vs. M.V.P. </p><p> United States Championship: <strong>Brian Cage</strong> vs. Jay Lethal vs. Rob Eckos vs. Adam Cole vs. Carlito Colon vs. Thomas Latimer </p><p> Television Championship: Johnny Nitro vs. <strong>Ricochet</strong> vs. Pentagon vs. Sami Callahan </p><p> Tag Team Championships: American Wolves (Davie Richards & Eddie Edwards) vs. Motor City Machine Guns (Alex Shelly & Chris Sabin) vs. <strong>Bad Influence</strong> (Christopher Daniels & Kazarian) vs. Guerillaz of Destiny (Tama Tonga & Tanga Roa)</p><p> </p><p> Looks really good!</p></div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Thanks for the kind comments, I hope to not disappoint! <img alt=":)" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/smile.png.142cfa0a1cd2925c0463c1d00f499df2.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /></p>
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<p>Homecoming I - Results</p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p>1 – Sting announces that he is the General Manager in ELITE.</p><p> </p><p>

1ST Match – 4 Way Tag Team Match / TAG TEAM CHAMPIONSHIPS</p><p>

American Wolves v Motor City Machine Guns v Bad Influence v Guerillaz of Destiny</p><p> </p><p>

Result: American Wolves win by pinfall on Tama Tonga (Guerillaz of Destiny).</p><p>

*Note: American Wolves are now the ELITE Tag Team Champions.</p><p> </p><p>

2 – Sting introduces the competitors of the World Championship match.</p><p> </p><p>

2ND Match – 4 Way Singles Match - TELEVISION CHAMPIONSHIP</p><p>

Johnny Nitro v Ricochet v Pentagon v Sami Callihan</p><p> </p><p>

Result: Ricochet wins via pinfall on Sami Callihan.</p><p>

*Note: Ricochet is now the ELITE Television Champion.</p><p> </p><p>

3 – Sting introduces the competitors of the United States Championship match. </p><p> </p><p>

3RD Match – 6 Way Singles Match / UNITED STATES CHAMPIONSHIP</p><p>

Brian Cage v Jay Lethal v Rob Eckos v Adam Cole v Carlito Colon v Thomas Latimer</p><p> </p><p>

Result: Carlito Colon wins via pinfall on Brian Cage.</p><p>

*Note Carlito Colon is now the ELITE United States Champion.</p><p>

**Adam Cole sustained a hand injury due to a botched moved by Brian Cage. Adam Cole is out of In-Ring Competition for 14 Days.</p><p> </p><p>

4 – Sting introduces the competitors of the Intercontinental Championship match.</p><p> </p><p>

4TH Match – 6 Way Singles Match / INTERCONTINENTAL CHAMPIONSHIP</p><p>

Cody Rhodes v Jake Hager v James Storm v Mike Bennett v Mr Anderson v MVP</p><p> </p><p>

Result: James Storm wins via pinfall on Mike Bennett.</p><p>

*Note James Storm is now the ELITE Intercontinental Champion.</p><p> </p><p>

5 – A Video Package highlighting the careers of; El Patron, Punk, HM3, Magnus, Mysterio and Barrett</p><p> </p><p>

5TH Match – 6 Way Singles Match / WORLD CHAMPIONSHIP</p><p>

Magnus v Rey Mysterio v Wade Barrett v Alberto El Patron v CM Punk v Hunter Michael III</p><p> </p><p>

Result: CM Punk wins via pinfall on Hunter Michael III.</p><p>

*Note CM Punk is now the ELITE World Champion.</p><p> </p><p>

6 – CM Punk snatches a microphone out of the hands of a ring worker, “I am the Best in the World at what I do today. There have been some in the world that have been called the greatest of all time; Muhammed Ali, Babe Ruth, Hulk Hogan, Bret Hart but I am CM Punk and my name will outlive all of them. I am the test of time, I am Heat to the Cold, I am a God to you Peons.” </p><p> </p><p>

**SHOW RATING**</p><p>

78</p><p> </p><p>

Best Match: World Championship match. - 76</p><p>

Worst Match: United States Championship match. - 58</p><p> </p><p>

Best Segment: CM Punk "I am the best in the world" promo. - 86</p><p>

Worst Segment: Sting introducing the competitors of the United States Championship Match. - 55</p><p> </p><p>

**SHOW NOTES**</p><p>

*Cody Rhodes has praised Adam Cole encouraging me to let him on the microphone more as he is sure to become an incredible asset.</p><p>

*Davey Richards has warned me that Chris Sabin should be let go as he is a sloppy worker and will soon injure somebody.</p><p> </p><p>

**Predictions**</p><p>

KnowYourEnemy: 1/5 Correct Predictions</p><p> </p><p>

Kijar: 1/5 Correct Predictions</p><p> </p><p>

OGpistolpete: 3/5 Correct Predictions</p><p> </p><p>

Winner: OGpistolpete</p><p> </p><p>

*meta note*</p><p>

The quality and substance of Segments will be vastly better in the coming shows, the initial Event was used to provide randomly calculated substance for furthering the shows and company whilst presenting it's own opportunities for Story Lines, with that done. The following show, ELITE Revolution contains in depth segments and has already been written, waiting to be posted.</p></div><p></p><p></p>

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<p>ELITE Revolution WK1 May - Match Listing</p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>---- </strong><strong><span style="text-decoration:underline;">MAIN EVENT - 5TH MATCH</span></strong><strong> ----</strong></p><p><strong>

5 WAY SINGLES ELIMINATION MATCH</strong></p></div><p></p><p></p><p>

<table align=center><tr><td width=200></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/fCDnX9M.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Magnus</span></strong> – <em>COCKY</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=200></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/d8vnAUr.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Rey Mysterio</span></strong> – <em>SHOW STEALER</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/EG9ck6v.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Wade Barrett</span></strong> – <em>MAVERICK</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></p><p>

<tr><td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/kRcw5cR.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Alberto El Patron</span></strong> – <em>SNOB</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/hg9V5mx.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Hunter Michael III</span></strong> – <em>FRANCHISE PLAYER</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></table></p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>---- </strong><strong><span style="text-decoration:underline;">4TH MATCH</span></strong><strong> ----</strong></p><p><strong>

5 MAN BATTLE ROYAL</strong></p></div><p></p><p></p><p>

<table align=center><tr><td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/oneUPC7.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Cody Rhodes</span></strong> – <em>DEGENERATE</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/uB7PIqp.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Jake Hager</span></strong> – <em>LEGITIMATE ATHLETE</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></p><p>

<tr><td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/tiAqG2e.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Mike Bennett</span></strong> – <em>AGAINST THE WORLD</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/BGFcMvZ.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Mr Anderson</span></strong> – <em>ROGUE</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/8OMIJ2k.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">MVP</span></strong> – <em>ARROGANT</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></table></p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>---- </strong><strong><span style="text-decoration:underline;">3RD MATCH</span></strong><strong> ----</strong></p><p><strong>

4 WAY CAGE MATCH - ESCAPE VICTORY ONLY</strong></p></div><p></p><p></p><p>

<table align=center><tr><td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/H6pgjds.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Brian Cage</span></strong> – <em>RAGING BULL</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/1sI9kCH.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Jay Lethal</span></strong> – <em>COOL</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/CZxa6to.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Rob Eckos</span></strong> – <em>SEX SYMBOL</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></p><p>

<tr><td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/cr2Gzs7.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Adam Cole</span></strong> – <em>EGOMANIAC</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/4rNp7A8.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Thomas Latimer</span></strong> – <em>ANARCHIST</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></table></p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>---- </strong><strong><span style="text-decoration:underline;">2ND MATCH</span></strong><strong> ----</strong></p><p><strong>

3 WAY SINGLES MATCH</strong></p></div><p></p><p></p><p>

<table align=center><tr><td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/pQIhl8c.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Johnny Nitro</span></strong> – <em>LADIES MAN</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/Jnl3evS.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Pentagon</span></strong> – <em>PSYCHO</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/FJODJPx.jpg</span><p>

<strong><strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Sami Callihan</span></strong></strong> – <em>LOOSE CANNON</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></table></p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>---- </strong><strong><span style="text-decoration:underline;">1ST MATCH</span></strong><strong> ----</strong></p><p><strong>

3 WAY TOTAL ELIMINATION TAG TEAM MATCH</strong></p></div><p></p><p></p><p>

<TABLE align=center><TR><td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/SVchExc.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Alex Shelley</span></strong></p><p>

<span>http://i.imgur.com/k31zAAe.jpg</span></p><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Chris Sabin</span></strong></p><p>

<strong><span style="color:#008000;">Motor City Machine Guns</span></strong> – <em>PUNK</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/kVpo72i.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Christopher Daniels</span></strong></p><p>

<span>http://i.imgur.com/niwwQTm.jpg</span></p><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Kazarian</span></strong></p><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Bad Influence</span></strong> – <em>OBNOXIOUS</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></p><p>

<td width=300></p><div style="text-align:center;"><span>http://i.imgur.com/ik08Z2h.jpg</span><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Tama Tonga</span></strong></p><p>

<span>http://i.imgur.com/bBuFVSK.jpg</span></p><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Tanga Roa</span></strong></p><p>

<strong><span style="color:#FF8C00;">Guerillaz of Destiny</span></strong> – <em>BAD ASS</em></p></div><p></p><p></td></tr></table></p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p><strong>PLAAAAAAAAAAAAACE YOUR PREDICTIONS</strong></p><p><strong>

ELITE Pro Wrestling Revolution WK 1 May - Results will be posted in 24 Hours.</strong></p></div><p></p>

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<p>ELITE Revolution WK1 May - Results</p><p> </p><p>

</p><div style="text-align:center;"><p>1 – Sting Opens the Inaugural ELITE: Revolution show and announces that all the Championships and matches will be contested in a ranking system, starting tonight! - 76</p><p> </p><p>

2 – CM Punk boasts his winning of the ELITE World Championship declaring he is the best athlete alive today and that no body in the company, country and world can touch him. It doesn’t matter who tops the rankings, no one is taking this Championship away from him. - 80</p><p> </p><p>

1ST – 3 WAY ELIMINATION TAG MATCH - 56</p><p>

<span style="text-decoration:underline;">Bad Influence</span> v Guerillaz of Destiny v Motor City Machine Guns</p><p> </p><p>

3 – After winning Bad Influence grabs a microphone and tell the American Wolves to get their sorry asses out here right now so they can end the crap and just hand over the belts to their rightful owners, the best tag team in Professional Wrestling today, Bad Influence. The wait a few seconds to see if anyone comes out to face them, Bad Influence says that’s exactly what they thought, The Wolves are nothing but a pair of chihuahua bitches. Bad Influence drop the mics and leave. - 62</p><p> </p><p>

4 – Raven warns the entire roster that the wrath of Sami Callihan is unlike anybody has ever seen before but taking names isn’t enough, Ricochet, Sami Callihan will be take your head. - 46 </p><p> </p><p>

2ND – 3 WAY SINGLES MATCH - 58</p><p>

Johnny Nitro v Pentagon v <span style="text-decoration:underline;">Sami Callihan</span></p><p><span style="text-decoration:underline;">

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5 – Adam Cole confronts Sting backstage asking why the hell is Brian Cage still in this company after injuring him at Homecoming I, he is the number one commodity in ELITE and someone as reckless as Brian Cage shouldn’t even be in the industry let alone this business. Sting says it’s a dangerous industry, Cole should’ve known that when he started. Cole replies that if that is Stings answer he will just have to take it into his own hand. - 66</p><p> </p><p>

6 – Sting declares that the following match will take place in a Steel Cage for the safety of all involved. - 75</p><p> </p><p>

3RD MATCH – 4 WAY CAGE MATCH - 54</p><p>

Brian Cage v Jay Lethal v Rob Eckos v <span style="text-decoration:underline;">Thomas Latimer</span></p><p> </p><p>

7 – As Cage is leaving Adam Cole attacks him and hits Cage in the kneecap repeatedly until staff come running from backstage, pull him off and forcibly drag him away. - 52 </p><p> </p><p>

8 – Mike Bennett cuts a promo declaring that he is the best commodity that ELITE has to offer, the sooner everyone realises that, the sooner they’ll realise to just pack their bags and go home. Cody Rhodes interrupts and warns Bennett not to let his ego get too big, or else the weight will topple him over the top rope. - 60</p><p> </p><p>

4TH Match – 5 MAN BATTLE ROYAL - 56</p><p>

<span style="text-decoration:underline;">Cody Rhodes</span> v Jake Hager v Mike Bennett v Mr Anderson v MVP</p><p> </p><p>

9 – Adam Cole is absolutely losing his mind backstage, Sting arrives with a flock of security and order them to escort Cole away from the building. - 70</p><p> </p><p>

10 – Hunter Michael III tells everyone out the back to call this whole ranking system off, CM Punk may as well just come down right now and give him his title shot. Alberto El Patron comes out and tells HM3 that there’s not enough money in the world to make him believe that HM3 is good enough to beat him. Wade Barrett comes out and tells them both to shut their mouth because the only arm they’ll see raised tonight is the arm raising to knock their lights out with a Bull Hammer. - 71</p><p> </p><p>

MAIN EVENT --- 5 WAY ELIMINATION MATCH - 64</p><p>

Alberto El Patron v <span style="text-decoration:underline;">Hunter Michael III</span> v Magnus v Rey Mysterio v Wade Barrett</p><p> </p><p>

11 – Hunter Michael 3 starts talking trash after stealing the win away from Wade Barrett with a low blow, CM Punk storms down the entrance way. Punk aggressively enters the ring and gets straight into HM3’s face telling him to bring it. The two face off for a minute until Barrett comes out of nowhere and hits CM Punk with a Bull Hammer, HM3 rolls out of the ring and runs up the entrance ramp laughing. – 83</p><p> </p><p>

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Show Overall: 63</p><p> </p><p>

Best Match: MAIN EVENT --- 5 WAY ELIMINATION MATCH - 64</p><p>

Worst Match: 3RD MATCH – 4 WAY CAGE MATCH - 54</p><p> </p><p>

Best Segment: 11 – Hunter Michael 3 starts talking trash after stealing the win away from Wade Barrett with a low blow, CM Punk storms down the entrance way. Punk aggressively enters the ring and gets straight into HM3’s face telling him to bring it. The two face off for a minute until Barrett comes out of nowhere and hits CM Punk with a Bull Hammer, HM3 rolls out of the ring and runs up the entrance ramp laughing. – 83</p><p>

Worst Segment: 4 – Raven warns the entire roster that the wrath of Sami Callihan is unlike anybody has ever seen before but taking names isn’t enough, Ricochet, Sami Callihan will be take your head. - 46 </p><p> </p><p>

Other Notes: Alberto Del Rio said Thomas Latimer doesn’t connect with the fans, write him off.</p></div><p></p><p></p>

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First of all, good luck with the ranking system. Very difficult to book and stay into from my experiene.

 

Second, I'm just poking at a few segments from the show, these aren't meant to be harsh just open criticism in hopes of you polishing this thing up into something great!

 

2 - CM Punk talks about how he is the best, but no one comes out to interrupt him and tell him otherwise?

3 - American Wolves win the title but can't come out to face Bad Influence in the ring? Are AW heel or face? I guess it doesn't matter because it was pretty cowardly for the champions on the first tv taping to not even show their face. Same question for BI because this segment blurs the lines in a bad way.

5 - I like this combination of "real world happening" with pro wrestling feud. As long as Cage doesn't poke Cole's girl.

6 - How does Sting get a surprise cage up and ready right before this match? This segment would have been better with a promo and the cage match saved for a blow off match.

8 - Mike Bennet calls himself the number one commodity after Adam Cole just did three segments ago?

 

All in all I like what you have going here, hope to see some more depth to the promos/angles in future write-ups. Can you avoid pulling a round-robin tournament to handle the expected scaling and "fairness" in your rankings?

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<p>First of all, thanks muchly for taking the time to give me notes, they are incredibly valid points and have giving me some food for thought in the coming future with this endeavor. Secondly, sorry about the tardiness of the reply.</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="OGpistolpete" data-cite="OGpistolpete" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="43721" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>First of all, good luck with the ranking system. Very difficult to book and stay into from my experiene.</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> I have an idea where the booking and promotion are heading, in terms of direction for the rankings. Ultimately it is being used to give reason to having the Champions not so active on an week to week basis and allow for more character building for the roster, in a time of a completely new promotion I think character building is the crucial point and will continue to be for at least the first entire year, what you see now may be the top layer to the characters being portrayed and what will be revealed in the coming months. Although it does kill the story of the promotion as a whole a tad to break kayfabe, I do think your question does pose reason to give it the answer, in the hopes that by doing so I have kept a fair share of the anonymity to it. </p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="43721" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Second, I'm just poking at a few segments from the show, these aren't meant to be harsh just open criticism in hopes of you polishing this thing up into something great!</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Once again thank you for taking the time to show care for a fellow forum dweller in the purpose and what I share is the hope that this will become something people will thoroughly enjoy reading. </p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="43721" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>2 - CM Punk talks about how he is the best, but no one comes out to interrupt him and tell him otherwise? </div></blockquote><p> </p><p> I do see the point you are making here, once again a valid point, the only thing I could possibly point to without making excuses for a sloppy newbie mistake is that, from my point of view whilst writing was; at this point of time the entire roster is sure of themselves but not so sure of the rest of their co-workers leading it to it being unanswered as people are scouting, to be fair this wouldn't be a consistent booking feature and was seen more as CM Punk being the centrepiece of the company and peacocking. </p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="43721" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>3 - American Wolves win the title but can't come out to face Bad Influence in the ring? Are AW heel or face? I guess it doesn't matter because it was pretty cowardly for the champions on the first tv taping to not even show their face. Same question for BI because this segment blurs the lines in a bad way.</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Valid point, once again from my point of view writing this which is a bit hard to develope time frames, to which was the time BI allowed to show, BI never really wanted to the confrontation to take place other than being able to big note themselves to drive their characters needs, such a thing I am sure will be answered for and given a payoff in the coming shows. The heel scene in ELITE is very centred towards the majority being the only other Heels existing in the company and some even believing that they are the only people in this company standing on the other side of the faces. Once again as the development continues this will be more explained and understood. I completely understand where you are coming from though, if it was a consistent facet of my booking, I would hang my head in shame.</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="43721" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>5 - I like this combination of "real world happening" with pro wrestling feud. As long as Cage doesn't poke Cole's girl.</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Me as well <img alt=":)" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/smile.png.142cfa0a1cd2925c0463c1d00f499df2.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /> , it was a set back and a gift all in the same note, Adam Cole is someone who I really wanted to nurture in this Dynasty and for the love of all things holy did it piss me off that he was injured in his debut match. But in the same note it has provided me a story to tell. Never fear, there shall be no girlfriend drama and children being swayed by a competitor in anything I write, the last thing ELITE needs is John Cena being filmed in a elevator with AJ Lee <img alt=":p" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/tongue.png.ceb643b2956793497cef30b0e944be28.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /> .</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="43721" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>6 - How does Sting get a surprise cage up and ready right before this match? This segment would have been better with a promo and the cage match saved for a blow off match.</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> This is seriously the biggest point that stuck out for me, the whole addressing of the cage could have been better imo, but I will leave it unedited as I don't want to seem weak by going and editing it to hide a mistake. Hindsight is a cruel mistress and looking back this all could have been solved by a single sentence in the opening promo. Having it happened and out there, I have two options; in the following week have Sting address the Cage in the room or move on and be sure to triple read my shows to not let this happen again <img alt=":cool:" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/cool.png.f00d2562b2c1d873a09323753efdb041.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /> .</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="43721" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>8 - Mike Bennett calls himself the number one commodity after Adam Cole just did three segments ago?</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Oh dear lord, I usually have a way with words as it's part of my profession in doing so. Sometimes I will admit though I can get hung up on a word, from a personal stand point writing at midnight and posting without doing proof reads is a dumb move.</p><p> </p><p> As a writing standpoint and excusing the use of the exact same word to get the point across, I will reveal this as being as being part of Bennett's character in being Against the World, if it is a threat, it doesn't exist in Bennett's mind, narcissism is a beautiful creature.</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="43721" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>All in all I like what you have going here, hope to see some more depth to the promos/angles in future write-ups. Can you avoid pulling a round-robin tournament to handle the expected scaling and "fairness" in your rankings?</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Thank you once again. Once I started re-reading the show a multiple amount of times, I had began picking at the way I wrote it mostly being the depth of the promos written, but will surely be fixed within the next show as I want to have a longer writing period of each given promo to allow for actual development whilst still maintaining a slow burn of features within the character build allowing the reader to learn more about the characters with each show. Once again I did have this in mind when stating in the author notes that I wanted to post a show once every 3-4 days to allow for more writing and proofreading time, thanks for not tearing me a new one over the points given and sorry if it seems that I ended having a reason for everything. 2 major things stood out for me and have been noted to avoid replicate or similar mistakes happening in the future.</p><p> </p><p> As far as the round robin tournament idea, at this point of time I don't think it would be wise or worth the lazy writing style to put the entire company through that with the size of my roster, but not shooting down the concept when the company gets to the next size and starts to hire more wrestlers but would only be done for a singular division that is way down the tracks though. </p><p> </p><p> The Homecoming I event having every match being a multi-man match was my way of being able to establish some form of order without having a tournament, I have written plenty of Tournaments before for personal saves that I have done but and while it does allow for the personal character development but usually prohibits from developing "real world" traits such as how does X handle a certain situation which I personally think is a largely forgotten booking style even in the real world of Professional Wrestling and when it is done, it usually isn't done well. The reader/audience can learn more about the focal point from a payoff of a situation than they can a voiced promo.</p>
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For sure dude I make the points I was picking at all the time. I understand your desire for the long burn angles but to me I would feel like a new major promotion would need to hit the ground running as fast as possible as opposed to giving storylines 4 weeks to build up to the first match.
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<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="OGpistolpete" data-cite="OGpistolpete" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="43721" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>For sure dude I make the points I was picking at all the time. I understand your desire for the long burn angles but to me I would feel like a new major promotion would need to hit the ground running as fast as possible as opposed to giving storylines 4 weeks to build up to the first match.</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> I completely understand, for the time being I will be telling stories within stories. I know at face value a lot of people are turned off by it but I have a plan to make it creative enough to not get the base points lost in the shuffle hence keeping the company at Cult size and the roster small.</p>
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<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="nouratef2000" data-cite="nouratef2000" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="43721" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>this is an interesting universe, looking forward for more, good luck !</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Thank you for the kind comments. <img alt=":)" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/smile.png.142cfa0a1cd2925c0463c1d00f499df2.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /></p>
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