jerlito Posted July 27, 2006 Author Share Posted July 27, 2006 ok i have now decided the 1 p.p.v. and it will be beers babes and dumpters and the matches will be for all 4 bands titles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerlito Posted July 27, 2006 Author Share Posted July 27, 2006 if anybody wants me to do a little crossband like raw smackdown and ecw does with summerslam than i will do more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerlito Posted July 27, 2006 Author Share Posted July 27, 2006 any ideas of angles/storylines going in the 1 p.p.v. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hurricanendp Posted July 27, 2006 Share Posted July 27, 2006 ffs man use the damn edit button! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerlito Posted July 27, 2006 Author Share Posted July 27, 2006 ok i will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nevermore Posted July 27, 2006 Share Posted July 27, 2006 [QUOTE=zigon]u never posted roster 2 and roster 4 sucks[/QUOTE] Dude, if you don't like his diary, don't read it. Or do you get some sort of carnal pleasure out of degrading others? It's so f**king unnecessary! Quote The Raven Nevermore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerlito Posted July 27, 2006 Author Share Posted July 27, 2006 [QUOTE=Nevermore]Dude, if you don't like his diary, don't read it. Or do you get some sort of carnal pleasure out of degrading others? It's so f**king unnecessary! Quote The Raven Nevermore[/QUOTE] nevermore thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
That Crazy Guy Posted July 28, 2006 Share Posted July 28, 2006 Honestly, in a few months I'm sure he will improve drastically. Everyone starts somewhere, do you remember your first pieces of writing on the internet? I do. Not that good. Give constructive critism and be nice, everyone here is equal and you won't get yourself "On the top of the invisible chain" by putting others down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jestor Posted July 28, 2006 Share Posted July 28, 2006 [QUOTE=Dwight Mighton]Honestly, in a few months I'm sure he will improve drastically. Everyone starts somewhere, do you remember your first pieces of writing on the internet? I do. Not that good. Give constructive critism and be nice, everyone here is equal and you won't get yourself "On the top of the invisible chain" by putting others down.[/QUOTE] QFT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extreme_Athlete33 Posted July 29, 2006 Share Posted July 29, 2006 good diary you have going on Jerlito. So this is your first one? It's going pretty good for your first, keep up the good work and I enjoy the storylines you have happening. I'll be reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerlito Posted July 29, 2006 Author Share Posted July 29, 2006 thanks but this not the first the last two didn't go with anything but this one i i plan on doing i like your tna one it's pretty awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extreme_Athlete33 Posted July 29, 2006 Share Posted July 29, 2006 hahah.. thanks dude i appreciate it. I'm about to post my next show Impact actually if you want to check it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerlito Posted July 29, 2006 Author Share Posted July 29, 2006 well i think i will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerlito Posted August 22, 2006 Author Share Posted August 22, 2006 hey i'm leaving this to the members i mean since i am doing this in my head i need some storylines and angles that everybody would to read on this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hurricanendp Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 you're....doing this....in your head? :confused: it's supposed to be a TEW GAME DIARY, not an "In your head" diary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ego Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 Jerlito, your crazy, you cant type, your diary needs to be in "TEWorld" to be valid ( i think), but man i love you!!! Keep up the good work Jerlito, you have come along way!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayden Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 [quote]Dude, if you don't like his diary, don't read it.[/quote] I always hate that comment whenever it comes up. Now, granted, Zigon's comment wasn't in anyway constructive, so it was a pointless and aggressive stab at the diary. That said, just because someone doesn't like a diary doesn't mean they shouldn't read and comment. The weaker diaries could use constructive criticism so much more than the good ones. If you put something up for public reading then you should expect to get some negative feedback (which is ten times more valuable than the mindless positive "i like this great show KUTGW") along the way too. I often read and comment on diaries that I don't think are very good, if I've read, I'll comment and let the author know what I thought whether it's good or bad. If people don't then why do we share all these online anyway? As long as it's constructive then I don't see there's ever any problem as anyone posting something online for others to read, should realise it's not just some given right to get lots of praise and no negativity and suggestion on how to improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nevermore Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 Man, I know that, I write a diary on here but the words "constructive criticism" are often ill defined. In this instance, "Criticism" refers to a critical appraisal that, in order to be "constructive", must present both good and bad opinions within one review. Thus, Zigon, or anyone else leaving a wholly negative review, is not presenting anything constructive. Furthermore, would one really want to give constructive criticism to an author if one did not find any aspect of the respective diary appealing? No. Zigon makes it clear in his post that he feels there is no way of improving this diary. Therefore, any negative comments he were to give would, in fact, not be for the betterment of Jerlito's work. Jayden, I really appreciate your efforts to defend both the readers' and author's rights to leave and obtain a constructive, critical review. However, you must recognise that my post was in relation to a single incident and, therefore, should not be subject to generalisation. If, on the other hand, you are trying defend Zigon's words, I believe you are trying to defend the indefensable. Quote The Raven Nevermore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayden Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 No, I'm definitely not, as I said in my post Zigon's comment was "a pointless and aggressive stab at the diary". I did use your comment in a more general sense, rather than in response to Zigon's specific comment so I apologise for that. [quote]anyone else leaving a wholly negative review, is not presenting anything constructive.[/quote] I disagree with that though, it is possible to see nothing particularly good in a show but give plenty of tips on how to improve. Simply saying it's terrible a hundred times over is no help to anyone, but offering ways to improve it at the same time definitely is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerlito Posted August 22, 2006 Author Share Posted August 22, 2006 ok i was doing this one in my head because i didn't want to end my game than but zigon's comment really got to me but thanks for the help so i don't lose and never come on the website again ans ego i am crazy thanks for the comment:D . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerlito Posted September 24, 2006 Author Share Posted September 24, 2006 ok this thing is not done the first ppv will be up later today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerlito Posted September 24, 2006 Author Share Posted September 24, 2006 ok this thing is not done the first ppv will be up later today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Gadzinski Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 not doing too bad Jerlito just need some better typing skills cuz sometimes i cant understand what you mean to say... ive been trying really hard to read some of this stuff and sometimes it confuses me but i made it through and so far pretty good and how are you doing this 4 brands are you doing like 2 owner modes or all just made up right now? ps anyone out there that thinks John Cena can wrestle I beg to differ [url]http://youtube.com/watch?v=jrOGmke_PEk[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Gadzinski Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 not doing too bad Jerlito just need some better typing skills cuz sometimes i cant understand what you mean to say... ive been trying really hard to read some of this stuff and sometimes it confuses me but i made it through and so far pretty good and how are you doing this 4 brands are you doing like 2 owner modes or all just made up right now? ps anyone out there that thinks John Cena can wrestle I beg to differ [url]http://youtube.com/watch?v=jrOGmke_PEk[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerlito Posted September 24, 2006 Author Share Posted September 24, 2006 [QUOTE=Tyler Gadzinski;149539]not doing too bad Jerlito just need some better typing skills cuz sometimes i cant understand what you mean to say... ive been trying really hard to read some of this stuff and sometimes it confuses me but i made it through and so far pretty good and how are you doing this 4 brands are you doing like 2 owner modes or all just made up right now? ps anyone out there that thinks John Cena can wrestle I beg to differ [url]http://youtube.com/watch?v=jrOGmke_PEk[/url][/QUOTE]i know it's hard and john cena can't fight unless it's street fighting i mean i am a huge fan but after looking at that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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