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In the prose for the new game, you should change alumni to alma mater. Alumni refers to the people that went to the university. Unless that is what you meant. I would assume you meant the university not the people that attend it. Since I'm trying to help out, I would also suggest adding a comma after "Coaching a dynasty". The information about the games refers to work Arlie completed. Thus, the entire clause should be separated with a comma. Jim
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