iujim1 Posted April 9, 2005 Share Posted April 9, 2005 In the prose for the new game, you should change alumni to alma mater. Alumni refers to the people that went to the university. Unless that is what you meant. I would assume you meant the university not the people that attend it. Since I'm trying to help out, I would also suggest adding a comma after "Coaching a dynasty". The information about the games refers to work Arlie completed. Thus, the entire clause should be separated with a comma. Jim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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