Lone Star Wrestling (EffVerse)

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Hoping to post the show today sometime, so last call on predictions.

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[QUOTE][CENTER][B][I][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/TheQuakers.jpg[/IMG] def. [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/DeathAngels.jpg[/IMG] When Crazyquake pinned Death Angel #2[/B] What was expected from the match. An old fashion tag team brawl with The Quakers coming out strong with the win. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E-[/COLOR][/B] [B] [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/Hellscourge.jpg[/IMG] w/ [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/7.jpg[/IMG] def. [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/HarryWilson.jpg[/IMG] via interference from 7[/B] OK match here. Neither worker necessarily performed poorly, nor did they perform greatly. Just a lack of overness here. Wilson had the match won until 7 got involved in the match. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E[/COLOR][/B] As the bell rings and signals the end of the match Hellscourge and 7 begin to quickly make their way away from the ring. A furious Harry Wilson grabs a nearby mic and addresses the two. [B][COLOR="Blue"]Harry Wilson: That’s it! You and your cronies have attacked me twice! But it won’t happen again, oh no. Next month, I’ll take any one, two, or three of you if I have to…but revenge will be mine![/COLOR][/B] Harry Wilson drops the mic as 7 begins to nod. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E-[/COLOR][/B] [B] Texas Death Match[/B] [B][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/BartonStroble.jpg[/IMG] def. [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/BishopRage.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/LSWLonghorn.jpg[/IMG][/B] for the LSW Longhorn Championship Still not great, but we'll get there. Solid for us right now nonetheless. Barton looked good and managed to out brawl Bishop to win the title. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E[/COLOR][/B] The manager of The Big Problem, Victor Russell, walks down the aisle with a mic. He climbs in the ring and begins walking around as he speaks. [B][COLOR="Red"]Victor Russell: It’s a tragedy that The Big Problem wasn’t officially booked for this particular show. Be that as it may, we aren’t leaving until we give everyone out there a taste of what The Big Problem has to offer. That is why we are sending out an open invitation to anyone in the back, hell anyone in the building. If you think you’ve got what it takes, come on out.[/COLOR][/B] After a few moments the music of Leo Davis hits and the crowd erupts. Leo steps out, mic in hand. [COLOR="Blue"][B]Leo Davis: I just heard your little open invitation and I said, why the hell not? I’m back in LSW with a win under my belt and I’m feeling pretty good. I don’t have anything else to do tonight, so sure I’ll try my hand at kicking your boy’s ass. You just tell when.[/B][/COLOR] [B][COLOR="Red"]Victor Russell: How about now?[/COLOR][/B] The Big Problem bursts out from the back and clotheslines Leo Davis from behind. He spends some time beating him up before sliding him in the ring to start the match. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E+[/COLOR][/B] [B][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/TheBigProblem.jpg[/IMG] w/ [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/VictorRussell.jpg[/IMG] def. [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/LeoDavis.jpg[/IMG] via Choke Slam[/B] Not a bad debut for TBP defeating Davis. All things considered this was a great match for us. Both put up a good match and Davis definitely kept face with this match. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E[/COLOR][/B] Backstage you see the Kemble brothers looking at a tv screen that is showing TBP celebrating in the ring after his match. [B][COLOR="Red"]Marlon Kemble: You shoulda accepted that challenge Micah.[/COLOR] [COLOR="Indigo"]Micah Kemble: I have more important things to worry about, I’ve got a title match later.[/COLOR] [COLOR="Red"]Marlon Kemble: But after the way he showed you up last month, shoo I’d been out there for sure. [/COLOR] [COLOR="Indigo"]Micah Kemble: He didn’t show me up, he attacked me from behind after my match.[/COLOR] [COLOR="Red"]Marlon Kemble: Well I wrote a song about if you want to hear it…[/COLOR] [COLOR="Indigo"]Micah Kemble: Not now Marlon…[/COLOR] [/B] Micah then walks away leaving Marlon standing there. Grade: [B][COLOR="Sienna"]D[/COLOR][/B] [B][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/AlanParent.jpg[/IMG] def. [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/CalSanders.jpg[/IMG] via submission[/B] Solid match from two of the newest members of LSW. A nice throw technical match that came out nicely. Alan Parent definitely came out strong with his first win over such a huge vet. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E[/COLOR][/B] Murderous Mikey and the LSW Heavyweight Champion Micah Kemble are in the ring, waiting for the ring bell. The music of The Big Problem hits as he walks out and down to the end of the ramp. He stands there and watches as the match begins. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E+[/COLOR][/B] [B]LSW Heavyweight Championship [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/MicahKemble.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/LSWHeavyweight.jpg[/IMG] (c) def. [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/MurderousMikey.jpg[/IMG] via pinfall[/B] These two have no chemistry at all and still put out a decent effort. Micah has the ability to make whoever he works with look better…at least when he wants to. He did so in this match and made Murderous Mikey look like a true threat. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E+[/COLOR][/B] Better than last show but still not where we want to be. I don’t think this show will really help or hurt us so we’ll call it a wash. Final Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E+[/COLOR][/B] [/I][/CENTER][/QUOTE] Prediction Winner: [B]mistaken[/B]

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So every so often I'll ask for feedback to see what I need to work on, how to improve, and things like that. This is so that I can make a much more enjoyable read for all those out there. This is one of those times. Just let me know what you like or don't like. Let me know how I can make things more entertaining. Feel free to comment on any aspect of the diary. I'm still learning this diary stuff so I'm always looking for ways to make it better. This is also the time if anyone wants to ask how a particular worker is doing. Be them on my roster or not. Keep in mind that this is based on the EffVerse though.

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I've enjoyed the story and the fact it is from the effnverse. That fact alone means it's something that not been done to death. and brings it's own unique flavor to the table. The Graphics have been great. both the pictures and show banners. and definitely not over done (i personally dislike the diaries with a video for every wrestler, bogs down my load times) For they style of diary your going for, the text and character build seems to be going in the right direction. and the lay out of the diary is very easy to read. your back stage segments fit well, and don't distract from the show, so it's well balanced in that regard. I know I'm not helping much, the critique is mostly positive, i think you just have to make sure your brining the most compelling story, but that take time in most diary's to build into. and what you have now is not bad by any means. It's like most sitcoms they take 4 or 5 episodes to feel out who they are, so that every actor can learn to bring that little extra to the table. and really bring their character to life. I know that's not much to go on, but it's what i have to offer, maybe others will be more helpful. :)

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[QUOTE=mistaken;415798]I've enjoyed the story and the fact it is from the effnverse. That fact alone means it's something that not been done to death. and brings it's own unique flavor to the table. The Graphics have been great. both the pictures and show banners. and definitely not over done (i personally dislike the diaries with a video for every wrestler, bogs down my load times) For they style of diary your going for, the text and character build seems to be going in the right direction. and the lay out of the diary is very easy to read. your back stage segments fit well, and don't distract from the show, so it's well balanced in that regard. I know I'm not helping much, the critique is mostly positive, i think you just have to make sure your brining the most compelling story, but that take time in most diary's to build into. and what you have now is not bad by any means. It's like most sitcoms they take 4 or 5 episodes to feel out who they are, so that every actor can learn to bring that little extra to the table. and really bring their character to life. I know that's not much to go on, but it's what i have to offer, maybe others will be more helpful. :)[/QUOTE] Very much appreciated, any feedback is good feedback as far as I'm concerned.

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[QUOTE][CENTER][I]Today was the day I'd been dreading for months. Bob Bryan was relieved of his duties as Head Booker. I feel so horrible about it but at the same time I must be doing something right around here. Bitter sweet. I've not talked to Bob, he apparently left the building as soon as he was told. I don't know whether or not he's going to quit or not but I've already begun looking into a replacement for a road agent. I'm a little worried about some of the roster leaving though, even if Bob stays. Solidhawk has already spoken to me about it, thankfully I talked him into staying though. All it took was a pay raise and a contract extension. That's business I guess. I guess it's a game of wait and see on who may or may not be leaving. I better start contacting some indie guys just in case. I guess now is the time to start pushing my vision for LSW and I think I'm going to start at our next event. I'm planning a bookers meeting later this week and I'd like to talk about instating a yearly tournament for us. If its something people seem to like then we may see some qualifiers at the next event and the remaining matches the next event. It's a lot of pressure having the weight of the company squarely on my shoulders now, but I think I can handle it.[/I][/CENTER][/QUOTE] *Finals are almost over for me, so hopefully updates will be more frequent.

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[QUOTE][CENTER][I]It's official. Bob quit. I can't blame him, but I certainly wish he'd have stayed. The locker room really looked up to him. It's always nice to have someone like him with us and he will be missed. With Bob gone I had to bring in a new road agent, I got a few responses, many way out of my price range. However I did take a leap of faith and huge chance on someone. I offered the job to Sheik Mustafa, and he accepted. From what I hear, he certainly isn't a Bob Bryan as far as personality goes, but I think he will be able to help further our wrestlers careers and help us put out a better product. He cost a little more than I wanted to spend, but I think he might just be worth it. I just hope his working with USPW won't get in the way of his work with us. I was surprised that only one worker asked for his release, but I think he was just using Bob as a front for wanting out. I granted it on the condition that he at least work our next event. He agreed. I fired someone this week too. Samantha Redenbaugh is no longer with the company. We just didn't have anything for her and it just didn't make any sense keeping her around. I also let Clyde go. He signed on with MAW and immediately no showed us at Highway to Hell. That sort of thing will not be tolerated by me. I made another big signing this week though, at least I think I did. Primus Allen. He just entered the world of wrestling after a stint with college football. This kid is a beast. He has star written all over him. Lucky us for getting to him first. The booker meeting went surprisingly well this week, despite Bob not being there. It's definitely different leading the meetings. All things are go for us and the tournament and we booked our next event. We're calling it High Noon, and I think it might be our best yet...at least I hope so. This next one is going to mean a lot to me since it's all on me. If it fails I might not be in this chair much longer. [/I][/CENTER][/QUOTE] [CENTER][B][U][SIZE="5"]LSW High Noon[/SIZE][/U][/B] Primus Allen vs. Demonio [B][U]Tournament Qualifiers[/U][/B] Bishop Rage vs. Crazyquake Murderous Mikey vs. Death Angel #1 Alan Parent vs. Firequake Rico Flemming vs. Hellscourge Vlad Von Drack vs. Delbert Bryan The Big Problem vs. Cal Sanders [B][U]High Noon Ladder Match for LSW Heavyweight Title Shot[/U][/B] Marlon Kemble vs. Solidhawk vs. Delmer Bryan[/CENTER]

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[B]Primus Allen[/B] vs. Demonio boys got to start of on the right foot if he's "going to be a big star" one day. Tournament Qualifiers [B]Bishop Rage[/B] vs. Crazyquake [B]Murderous Mikey[/B] vs. Death Angel #1 Alan Parent vs. [B]Firequake[/B] [B]Rico Flemming[/B] vs. Hellscourge Vlad Von Drack vs.[B] Delbert Bryan[/B] [B]The Big Problem[/B] vs. Cal Sanders High Noon Ladder Match for LSW Heavyweight Title Shot [B]Marlon Kemble[/B] vs. Solidhawk vs. Delmer Bryan Hawk and Delmer get in each others way allowing Marion to win.

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LSW High Noon [B]Primus Allen [/B]vs. Demonio Tournament Qualifiers [B]Bishop Rage [/B]vs. Crazyquake [B]Murderous Mikey [/B]vs. Death Angel #1 [U][B][I]Push Mikey!!!!![/I][/B][/U] Alan Parent vs.[B] Firequake[/B] [B]Rico Flemming[/B] vs. Hellscourge [B]Vlad Von Drack[/B] vs. Delbert Bryan [B]The Big Problem[/B] vs. Cal Sanders High Noon Ladder Match for LSW Heavyweight Title Shot [B]Marlon Kemble[/B] vs. Solidhawk vs. Delmer Bryan In the interest of not having the exact same predictions as Mistaken. I changed one of mine lol

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[QUOTE=Imarevenant;419650] [B]Murderous Mikey [/B]vs. Death Angel #1 [U][B][I]Push Mikey!!!!![/I][/B][/U][/QUOTE] I'll push him as the fierce Mexican beast, El Bate!! [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/EffVerse/Alts/MurderousMikey_alt1.jpg[/IMG]

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[QUOTE][CENTER][I] [B][U][SIZE="5"]LSW High Noon[/SIZE][/U][/B] [B][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/primus_allentemp.jpg[/IMG] def. [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/Demonio.jpg[/IMG][/B] [B]via Running Powerslam[/B] Not a bad debut at all for the rookie. Few complaints here, but he was slightly off his game and can do better. But if this was an off night for him, then we may have struck gold when he is on his game. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E+[/COLOR][/B] Backstage Micah Kemble is rounding a corner and bumps into The Big Problem and Victory Russell. No words are exchanged as the two men stare each other down. Those in the back and sense that things are about to escalate and get in between the two men. After a few moments the two men are seperated and walk off. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E+[/COLOR][/B] [B][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/BishopRage.jpg[/IMG] def. [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/Crazyquake.jpg[/IMG] via submission[/B] This match wasn't as good as I had hoped. They just seemed to not click together in the ring at all. Bishop finally got off his losing streak however and at a good time, advancing to the tournament next month. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E-[/COLOR][/B] [B][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/RicoFlemming.jpg[/IMG] def. [img]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/Hellscourge.jpg[/img] via interference from Harry Wilson[/B] Solid match from these two, with Rico advancing. Hellscourge nearly had the match won, but a well timed run in from Harry Wilson nipped it. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E[/COLOR][/B] [B][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/AlanParent.jpg[/IMG] def. [img]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/Firequake.jpg[/img] via pinfall[/B] Not exactly happy with this match, as I thought Parent may be able to get a better match out of Firequake. Hopefully he'll figure out how to make the best out of his opponent and make the best of the match. He's a solid talent for us. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E-[/COLOR][/B] Backstage Vlad Von Drack is heading for the entrance ramp, getting ready for his match. Out of nowhere Harry Wilson smashes a chair into the skull of Vlad. Harry continues to mercilessly beat on Vlad until security and a medic team come to the rescue. Grade: [B][COLOR="DarkRed"]F[/COLOR][/B] As Harry begins to walk off he begins to start talking with himself in an aggressive tone. After his argument with himself ends he begins to beat himself in the face with the chair he had just used to bludgeon Vlad with, busting himself open. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E-[/COLOR][/B] The commentary team announces that Delbert Bryan has won via forfeit and will advance. Grade [B][COLOR="DarkRed"]F+[/COLOR][/B] [B] [img]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/MurderousMikey.jpg[/img] def. [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/DeathAngel1.jpg[/IMG] via submission[/B] These two really worked well off each other, which is always nice to see. Mikey continues to impress and Death Angel #1 showed that he can work by himself if he needs to. Both guys were made better off with this match, but it's Mikey who gets to advance. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E[/COLOR][/B] [B][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/TheBigProblem.jpg[/IMG] w/ [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/VictorRussell.jpg[/IMG] def. [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/CalSanders.jpg[/IMG] via Choke Slam[/B] These guys didn't exactly have "it" together in the ring, but a solid match nonetheless. The Big Problem continues his dominance in LSW and advances in the tournament. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E[/COLOR][/B] [B][IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/MarlonKemble.jpg[/IMG] def. [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/Solidhawk.jpg[/IMG] and [IMG]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/nlw2006/LSW%20Dynasty/DelbertBryan.jpg[/IMG] via contract retrieval[/B] The match came off really well, and could have been better had the commentators been able to keep up. All three of these men really shined. I was extrememly surprised with how well Marlon came off, lets see how he does though when he isn't being carried. He does get a shot at his brother and the LSW Heavyweight Championship now though. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E+[/COLOR][/B] 7 comes out to the ring. [B][COLOR="Red"]7: Well, well, well. It seems as though you've bested my men Mr. Wilson, and all that is left is for you to get your grubby little hands on me now. So here I am. Come, do your worst.[/COLOR][/B] The music of Harry Wilson hits and he heads walks out onto the entrance ramp, dried blood on his head and his chair still in hand. He begins to walk towards the ring when Hellscourge rushes behind him and lays him out. Scourge puts the boots to him as 7 makes his way towards them. Hellscourge is now holding Harry so that he can look at 7. [B][COLOR="Red"]7: Did you take me for a complete fool, Mr. Wilson? I offered you a chance to join my menagerie and you declined. You can turn me down no longer, Mr. Wilson. Now look into the eyes of your new master, you're new GOD! [/COLOR][/B] 7 slightly pulls back the hood from his head, allowing Harry to see him. Harry looks terrified before collapsing into unconciousness. 7 orders Hellscourge to take him away and he obliges, carrying Wilson as they leave the area. Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E-[/COLOR][/B] Final Grade: [B][COLOR="Red"]E+[/COLOR][/B][/I][/CENTER][/QUOTE] Prediction Winner: [B]mistaken[/B]

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[SIZE="5"][CENTER][B][U]LSW Breakdown![/U][/B][/SIZE] [B][U]LSW Young Hoss Semi-Finals[/U][/B] Delbert Bryan vs. Bishop Rage vs. Alan Parent The Big Problem vs. Murderous Mikey vs. Rico Flemming [B][U] LSW Longhorn Championship[/U][/B] Cal Sanders vs. Barton Stroble (c) Leo Davis vs. Harry Allen [B][U]LSW Young Hoss Finals[/U][/B] ??? vs. ??? [B][U]LSW Heavyweight Championship[/U][/B] Marlon Kemble vs. Micah Kemble (c)[/CENTER]