Marcos25063 Posted September 25, 2014 Share Posted September 25, 2014 Hey guys, this is my first Dynasty. I've read several good dynasties here, and I decided to create my own, so here we go: ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Monday Night RAW Wrestling Observer Newsletter After the NOC PPV, Vince Mcmahon fires the Head booker of the wwe , and he rewrote the script of the show (RAW) at the last minute. WWE is receiving application on your executive site . . . tuesday Wrestling Observer Newsletter As we noted, WWE is scheduling interviews with candidates ... And no, Vince Russo is not one of them . . . Thursday, Interview time Marcos: Hello sir Vince: Hi,so you want a job here ? Marcos: Yes, I would love to work here, and I'm a big fan of your job and the WW... Vince: Bla Bla Bla, How many soap operas have you written? Marcos: Any, but I am big fan of wrestling and I like .... Vince: You already said that. Look, I have some demands for you, if you get the job Marcos: Ok. Vince: When the time expires, we must not have fallen below #1 in the company rankings. Vince: Chris Jericho must have reached at least 83 overall popularity in america. Vince: Alberto Del Rio must have reached at least 77 overall popularity in America. Vince: Jack Swagger must have reached at least 71 overall popularity in America. Vince: And you can't hire any wrestler who is classed as being an MMA Crossover,Luchador, Spot Monkey and midget Marcos: Wait... Vince: and most importantly, never EVER LISTEN TO THE INTERNET!!! Marcos: o o o ok si si sir. Vince: Ok i will give you a month to show me what you are capable of When leave the room Marcos encounter Triple H, who says: Triple H: Hey, book your show the way you want ok? And HHH enter Vince's room: Triple H: Vince, what are you doing?! Vince: I WANT MUSCLE MAN'S ON MY SHOW DAMMIT And Marcos leave the building ROSTER: FACES Adam Rose *AJ Lee--- Divas Champion Big E Brie Bella Chris Jericho XDaniel Bryan---Neck nerve damage( 2 months and 3 weeks off) XDarren Young---Torn ACL ( 3 months and 1 week) Dean Ambrose Diego *Dolph Ziggler--- Intercontinental Champion El Torito Emma Eva Marie XFernando---Ankle ligament damage(25 days off) *Goldust--- Tag Team Champion Jack Swagger Jey Uso Jimmy Uso John Cena Kofi Kingston Layla Mark Henry Mike Chioda Naomi Natalya Nikki Bella Rey Mysterio Rob Van Dam Roman Reigns R-Truth *Sheamus--- United State Champion Sin Cara *Stardust--- Tag Team Champion Summer Rae The Big Show The Great Khali Xavier Woods Zack Ryder HEELS Alberto Del Rio Alicia Fox xBad News Barrett--- Shoulder injury(2 months and 2 weeks off) Batista Bo Dallas Bray Wyatt *Brock Lesnar--- WWE World Heavyweight Champion Cameron Cesaro XChristian---Concussion (25 days out) Curtix Axel Damien Sandow David Otunga Erick Rowan Fandango Heath Slater Kane Luke Harper Randy Orton Paige Rosa Mendes Rusev Ryback Seth Rollins Tamina The Miz Titus O'neil ------------------------------------------------------- Later today the first show Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
franticloser Posted September 25, 2014 Share Posted September 25, 2014 Welcome to writing a dynasty, my biggest advice, run everything through a spell and grammar check. It helps people stay focused on the story. My only other thing is, find the balance of keeping guys in character, while using your own voice, it's a hard balance, but once you find it, it will make reading a joy. Good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marcos25063 Posted September 25, 2014 Author Share Posted September 25, 2014 Welcome to writing a dynasty, my biggest advice, run everything through a spell and grammar check. It helps people stay focused on the story. My only other thing is, find the balance of keeping guys in character, while using your own voice, it's a hard balance, but once you find it, it will make reading a joy. Good luck Thank you for the advices, will definitely help me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marcos25063 Posted September 25, 2014 Author Share Posted September 25, 2014 http://www.pwmania.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/arena-3a.jpgThe shows open as Michael Cole welcome everybody to Monday Night RAW, and we’re live from Ottawa Civic Centre( Ontario) a sell out crowd of 10,000 people on their feet and ready! http://i.gyazo.com/005964c1fc919b0fcdd85c5ec174ce6a.png The intercontinental champion Dolph Zigler comes out, grab a mic, and says how he is in a good mood today and want a fight, he says that he will put the title on the line on an open challenge... Rob Van Dam shows up and accept the challenge, and this fight is next. Rating: 74 ... http://i.gyazo.com/a7134c2e5c79b6bbbe47fecd16199b61.pngVShttp://i.gyazo.com/005964c1fc919b0fcdd85c5ec174ce6a.png Rob Van Dam VS Dolph Ziggler In the end Dolph is on the top turnbuckle, RVD shake the ropes, Dolph falls off, and RVD goes to the top and hit a five star frog splash for the pin. Winner and the new IC champ : Rob Van Dam (17:42) Rating: 72 http://i.gyazo.com/e56ec7b0d2716bc84ab0f5f3714d3652.pnghttp://i.gyazo.com/12eac31106b29d922eeebe5433ec73ed.png After a short celebration The camera goes to the backstage as we hear two divas arguing,as the camera enters the room we see AJ and Paige hugging each other, and we heard a "good luck", "Good luck to you too" Rating: 69 http://i.gyazo.com/e56ec7b0d2716bc84ab0f5f3714d3652.pnghttp://i.gyazo.com/4d394d0d487a85963a58f5e9af3f8432.pngVS http://i.gyazo.com/12eac31106b29d922eeebe5433ec73ed.pnghttp://i.gyazo.com/efa5e9493be63804af0d5b098b8f2409.png AJ and Brie Bella VS Paige and Nikki Bella In the end Paige is coming from a hot tag, send AJ to the ropes, as he comes back, AJ jump on Paige and connect the Black Window… Paige Taps out. After the match, AJ , on the stage, sent a blow kiss to Paige, who looks anger in the ring Winner: AJ and Brie Rating: 56 (10:16) After%20the%20commercial,%20The%20camera%20is%20in%20the%20backstage,%20Xavier%20woods%20is%20talking%20with%20some%20staff%20guys%20and%20he%20sees%20Sin%20Cara.%20He%20goes%20and%20make%20a%20question/joke%20about%20the%20Sin%20Cara%20failure%20in%20the%20USA.%20Sin%20cara%20respond%20VShttp://i.gyazo.com/b2613619553342278c9c08bcd424065a.png Xavier Woods VS Sin Cara Xavier Woods Wins via rollup Rating: 18 (08:21) http://i.gyazo.com/ac352889fa9900328b2aa7cadcafaa71.png Renee young is hosting Cesaro for an interview, Cesaro Grabs the microphone before Renee says anything. He says that he will grab the US title, the title belongs to him and no one will stop him to do so Rating: 64 http://i.gyazo.com/37e6f1ba9527649569d997e2a4b35364.pngVS http://i.gyazo.com/da24307fd8accc8beb291fe561a3b7e9.png Sheamus VS Alberto Del Rio In the end Sheamus hit Alberto Del Rio with a with the white noise goes for the cover but ADR kicks out… Sheamus is getting up when Cesaro theme song play, Sheamus is distracted and Alberto Try a enzegury kick, fall, when he was getting up took a brogue kick. 1..2..3!! Winner: Sheamus Rating: 65 (13:05) http://i.gyazo.com/946027e8bde584f929e670c43127e657.png VS http://i.gyazo.com/479915eb46aa640f5f490ddac5010725.png Bo Dallas VS Fandango Short match, Bo defeat Fandango with a running bulldog. Winner: BO Dallas Rating: 56(08:44) http://i.gyazo.com/80be13121ea2da2d6a3f54206b0e33a9.pnghttp://i.gyazo.com/144e36e1ffc6a8a9454d2801978f9ef2.png Backstage with Renee Young, she interviews the Usos. She asked about the Tag Team Title, The Usos says that they will be champions again, it's just a matter of time, and they will prove by beating the Wyatts tonight Rating: 41 http://i.gyazo.com/80be13121ea2da2d6a3f54206b0e33a9.pnghttp://i.gyazo.com/144e36e1ffc6a8a9454d2801978f9ef2.png VS http://i.gyazo.com/8fb27cc501c1fee1bf722b1c503e520e.pnghttp://i.gyazo.com/d81397176b52f8aab7242611547ee000.png The Wyatt Family VS The Usos In the end Jimmy jumps off the third rope, as his brother jump for the splash, Luke Harper raises the knee And connects with the Clothesline to the Pin Winner: The Wyatt Family Rating:72 (11:38) http://i.gyazo.com/5c7cb03e3d492bcabe38d1e8b2742635.png Stephanie McMahon comes out to the ring, she put over the authority and say that we will have a 1#contender match for the Lesnar title at HIC, between Cena and Orton Rating:90 http://i.gyazo.com/1c5a95d331dfe549ff92544003e83424.png VS http://i.gyazo.com/71adc2cbea0859450ac06e121d6f309d.png Bray Wyatt VS Chris Jericho Short Match, Bray Wins after distraction from Luke Harper Winner: Bray Wyatt Rating:73 (09:21) http://i.gyazo.com/a169e6b70812c451d72e7de687c687b6.png Seth Rollins comes down to the ring, he says that Dean Ambrose is not here, and start mocking Dean Ambrose, and said if he wanted he could have done much worse with Ambrose, and that Ambrose should thank him…. Ambrose appears on the screen, in a dark place and say a single sentence "You will never be a champion, because I will not let you." Rating: 82 http://i.gyazo.com/9f2864d5e6e6991d2ea66bfcc55f1649.png VS http://i.gyazo.com/0dd9b840f8e89179a7a43fc932bbaf65.png John Cena VS Randy Orton #1 contender for the WWE championship A good wrestling match, at the end both wrestlers are on the ground… Kane music hits, here come THE DEMON… Orton look to him and we can hear Orton saying “Get out, I can handle myself “ When Orton turns around Cena hits the AA, 1.. 2.. 3 Kane can’t get in the ring fast enough. Cena is the 1# contender for Brocks title. After Cena gets out the Ring, Orton looks to Kane with a look of disapproval as he is walking to the backstage and the show's end Rating: 85 (18:03) Show Rating: 74 Not enough storylines ................................... Any advice is welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marcos25063 Posted September 26, 2014 Author Share Posted September 26, 2014 http://oi62.tinypic.com/2wdwsxc.jpg Backstage sources informed us that RVD got an injury on Monday Night RAW, we will try our best to get more information. Raw had a 7.29 rating WWE.com confirmed that we will have the rematch of Cena Orton on SD. Beside Cena-Orton we have: Gold and Stardust VS Rybaxel Rusev VS Titus O’Neil Sin Cara and The Miz VS Bo dallas and Xavier Woods Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
franticloser Posted September 26, 2014 Share Posted September 26, 2014 Again I'll say, running everything, through a grammar and spelling check will do wonders. I'm sure English isn't your first language, but using the spell check and grammar check, can help you learn faster, but case in point. In the end Paige is coming from a hot tag, send AJ to the ropes, as he comes back, AJ jump on Paige and connect the Black Window… Paige Taps out. After the match, AJ , on the stage, sent a blow kiss to Paige, who looks anger in the ring Winner: AJ and Brie This would read better like this In the end, Paige gets a hot tag, she whips AJ into the ropes, but AJ counters on the rebound locking in The Black Widow(you don't connect a submission hold, and it's widow not window) causing Paige to tap. After the match, AJ skips up to the stage, blowing a kiss to Paige, who glares back. It's just little things, in flow that can help us as readers enjoy and get into the story you are trying to tell. Also pick a format and stick with it. In your news article, you jump between Orton Cena, Orton-Cena, and then in the other matches its, Wrestler vs. Wrestler. The phrasing would have worked better as, "We can confirm that on Smackdown, Orton and Cena will have a rematch from Raw, also announced for the card are. Wrestler vs Wrestler Wrestler and Wrestler vs Established Tag Name Just read up on a couple of actually wrestling news sites. On a positive note, you had a good show, and I am excited to see what you have planned. O, and either make storylines or turn of the strict storyline option, so you don't get that ding Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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