IPW Getting exposure

[NickC13573]

[FONT="Century Gothic"][CENTER][IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/IPWWeeklyInvasion.jpg[/IMG] WAR Memorial Auditorium Attendance: 1700 ( :( )

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[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/NickClements_alt.jpg[/IMG] We see Nick entering the building... WHEN ... ... ... [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/SilverShark.jpg[/IMG] SILVER SHARK [COLOR="red"]takes a sledgehammer to the back of Nick's knee. Nick Crumbles in the pain. Silver Shark runs off.[/COLOR] [B]GRADE:[/B] E

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[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/ElementalIII_Alt.jpg[/IMG] vs. [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/CanadianDragon.jpg[/IMG] Elemental III vs. Canadian Dragon [B]WINNER:[/B] Elemental III [B]GRADE:[/B] C [B]NOTE:[/B] Will make sense in about 4 scrolls of the mouse.

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[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/SnapDragon.jpg[/IMG] vs. [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/ElementalII.jpg[/IMG] Snap Dragon vs. Elemental II [B]WINNER:[/B] Snap Dragon [B]GRADE:[/B] C- [B]NOTE:[/B] Two more segments

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[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/CanadianDragon.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/SnapDragon.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/ElementalII.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/ElementalIII_Alt.jpg[/IMG] Four Way Wild Brawl. Security has to come break it up. [B]GRADE:[/B] F

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[COLOR="Blue"]Rip Stands up with a mic[/COLOR] [COLOR="SeaGreen"]You Guys want to fight eh? You guys want to kill each other? I have no problem with that. However, you have to do it on another night. I have an Idea. We currently are missing an undercard for IPW: Renaissance. We will have the first match in a BEST of 5 Tag team Series. The Dragons vs. The Elementals. Oh and by the way Elementals, keep your Rock friend out of this.[/COLOR] [B]GRADE:[/B] E-

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[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/KidToma_alt.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/RhinoUmaga_alt.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/RokuSotomura.jpg[/IMG] vs. [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/WaelHossam.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/JuniorYouth.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/SuperFalcon.jpg[/IMG] Wild Samoanz vs. Wael/Junior/Falcon [B]WINNER:[/B] Wild Samoanz [B]GRADE:[/B] D [B]NOTES:[/B] I love the Samoanz. If I had a trio belt, I would never let them lose

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[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/BeetleKimura.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/MagnumKobe.jpg[/IMG] vs. [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/JesseGilbert-1.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/JoeGilbert-1.jpg[/IMG] J.O.B. Squad vs. Gilbert brothers [B]WINNERS:[/B] Gilbert brothers [B]GRADE:[/B] D- [B]NOTES:[/B] Tryin to get the J.O.B. Squad to not be hated by our fans.

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[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/SilverShark.jpg[/IMG] vs. [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/FoxMask.jpg[/IMG] Silver Shark vs. Fox Mask [B]WINNER:[/B] Fox Mask, after Silver Shark put a steel chair to his head. [B]GRADE:[/B] D+ [B]NOTES:[/B] Someone tell me. WHats your opinion on this angle with Silver Shark.

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[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/JoeyPoison.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/TheIncredibleKoyama.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/PRIDEKoiso.jpg[/IMG] [SIZE="6"][COLOR="Red"]INSANE Cruiser X Action[/COLOR][/SIZE] Koyama vs. Poison vs. Koiso [B]WINNER:[/B] INSANE! Koiso [B]GRADE:[/B] C+ [B]NOTE:[/B] Belt... Belt... Definently need a belt for this divison

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[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/MaskedRebel.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/DarkFalcon.jpg[/IMG] vs. [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/CameronVessey.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/LarryVessey.jpg[/IMG] Pure Villainy vs. The Vessey's [B]WINNERS:[/B] Vessey's [B]GRADE:[/B] E+ [B]NOTE:[/B] yep!

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[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/FumihiroOta.jpg[/IMG] vs. [IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o138/NickC13573/MarioHeroic.jpg[/IMG] Ota vs. Heroic [B]WINNER:[/B] Heroic [B]GRADE:[/B] C [B]NOTES:[/B] Dont Click... yet still a C!

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FINAL SHOW RATING: D+[/CENTER][/FONT]

[NickC13573]

[FONT="Century Gothic"][CENTER][B][SIZE="6"]IPW: Renaissance[/SIZE][/B] *Card Subject to Change* [COLOR="Lime"]Tag Team Cage Scramble[/COLOR] ??????? vs. ??????? vs. Los Heartbreakers vs. FilTHY AniMALZ J.O.B. Squad vs. Chaos Demon*/Lead Belly* [COLOR="Red"]interpromotional action[/COLOR] JIM FORCE vs. Joey Minnesota [B]9 Man Gauntlet for the Universal Championship[/B] First man in the Gauntlet: Bulldozer Brandon Smith Plus Many more to appear. Final Card to appear in Near future[/CENTER] *not guaranteed to show[/FONT]

[The Stallion]

OK brother, you wanted me to check this out and I did. Clarity had the right idea when he gave you his input, and I can tell you are following his lead. Just a couple of suggestios of my own. Dont get discouraged if this, your first diary, does not go over to well. The boards are FULL of diarys and you have to do something to stand out, and to be honest, doing a C-Verse diary does not stand out unless you do something special. Its just that the C-Verse is not as popular as the real world ones and because of that, not much is known about these workers. Here are my suggestions: Write out your stuff in advance in Word or whatever text program you have. Do it a couple of months in advance so you can see where you are going and carefully go over each "storyline" to make sure you are not missing something. In order to get people into this, you need to give these guys personalitys. The advantage of doing a real world diary over a C-verse diary is that all the workers in the real world already have a personality that people are familiar with. In the C-Verse, the workers are a blank slate for the most part that YOU need to fill in. Give us a reason to care about your roster. Give us a reason to care that Siver Shark is going crazy and attacking everyone. You have a good foundation brother, you just need to start laying more levels to really get people interested. I hope this did not come out too harsh. I just want to give you my honest opinion. Like I said, you have a good start brother, not its time to go to the next step.

[Chuck]

[FONT="Century Gothic"][CENTER][B][SIZE="6"]IPW: Renaissance[/SIZE][/B] *Card Subject to Change* [COLOR="Lime"]Tag Team Cage Scramble[/COLOR] ??????? vs. ??????? vs. Los Heartbreakers vs. [B]FilTHY AniMALZ[/B] Rey Mysterio and Konnan were excellent back in the day! [B]J.O.B. Squad[/B] vs. Chaos Demon*/Lead Belly* I wouldn't put Demon Belly over especially if there is no true guarantee they will show! [COLOR="Red"]interpromotional action[/COLOR] [B]JIM FORCE[/B] vs. Joey Minnesota Call me Biased but I cant help but go with the FORCE!!! [B]9 Man Gauntlet for the Universal Championship[/B] The 3rd man!!!! Sorry NWO Flashback!!! Plus Many more to appear. Final Card to appear in Near future[/CENTER] *not guaranteed to show[/FONT]