I think having segments that flow together so well is best. Makes the show a seamless reading experience (Hogan is a devious little sod, btw).
Also, grrr at the Hotline idea! Wish I'd come up with that
Great show! To be honest, I was one of those expecting a massive swerve, run ins etc at the end
Also, love your writing. Some of it is genuinely funny. Will keep up to date with this for sure.