wooodaddy Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 hey, I did a diary for 2 months and never got any feedback.. I hate that your's has been sorta negative, but don't change anything.. I will be reading.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wooodaddy Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 hey, I did a diary for 2 months and never got any feedback.. I hate that your's has been sorta negative, but don't change anything.. I will be reading.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astil Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 I'll read as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astil Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 I'll read as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nimo34 Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 I'm not going to tell you that I'm gonna read it, probably because I won't, but don't stop, try and get better, and take the criticism and make it for the better. Good luck, TG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nimo34 Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 I'm not going to tell you that I'm gonna read it, probably because I won't, but don't stop, try and get better, and take the criticism and make it for the better. Good luck, TG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaynes23 Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 I'm gonna second that...if you follow the suggestions here a little bit you will have a reader in me. GRATUITOUS PLUG ALERT!!!! Go put up your predicitions in my ultra sweet dynasty for No Mercy. END OF GRATUITOUS PLUG....We now return you to your regularly scheduled dynasty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaynes23 Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 I'm gonna second that...if you follow the suggestions here a little bit you will have a reader in me. GRATUITOUS PLUG ALERT!!!! Go put up your predicitions in my ultra sweet dynasty for No Mercy. END OF GRATUITOUS PLUG....We now return you to your regularly scheduled dynasty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Gadzinski Posted October 10, 2006 Author Share Posted October 10, 2006 well the only thing id add is some pictures.. not really change the set up of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Gadzinski Posted October 10, 2006 Author Share Posted October 10, 2006 well the only thing id add is some pictures.. not really change the set up of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Gadzinski Posted October 11, 2006 Author Share Posted October 11, 2006 big update coming on thursday if not sooner... damn work getting in the way of fun:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Gadzinski Posted October 11, 2006 Author Share Posted October 11, 2006 big update coming on thursday if not sooner... damn work getting in the way of fun:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaynes23 Posted October 11, 2006 Share Posted October 11, 2006 Alright, TG, the big update better bring the heat....If it does, consider me a full time reader. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaynes23 Posted October 11, 2006 Share Posted October 11, 2006 Alright, TG, the big update better bring the heat....If it does, consider me a full time reader. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djthefunkchris Posted October 11, 2006 Share Posted October 11, 2006 I kind of like it so far... You bought out the WWE, kept everyone there so far, and are going to bring in new talent, that will be headliner's. I don't understand the critique's so far really. I expected someone to say something about where the segment's appeared on your card, more then anything. I think the last match would have been better without the segment before it of Cryme Tyme for example, but it's actually something I think would have happened on the regular show. Gamewise though, if you would have put that closer to the beginning of the show, you would have probably got a better rating on the Cena match. I would like to see a Cena handicap match btw, so that I liked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djthefunkchris Posted October 11, 2006 Share Posted October 11, 2006 I kind of like it so far... You bought out the WWE, kept everyone there so far, and are going to bring in new talent, that will be headliner's. I don't understand the critique's so far really. I expected someone to say something about where the segment's appeared on your card, more then anything. I think the last match would have been better without the segment before it of Cryme Tyme for example, but it's actually something I think would have happened on the regular show. Gamewise though, if you would have put that closer to the beginning of the show, you would have probably got a better rating on the Cena match. I would like to see a Cena handicap match btw, so that I liked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sebsplex Posted October 11, 2006 Share Posted October 11, 2006 I have to admit the backstory is a little bit of a struggle to accept off the bat. I understand that this is your diary and you can have the WWE ran by aliens from another planet if you want, but the only thing I'd suggest is somewhere along the way throw in a bit more explanation for things. I know it's very hard to create a believable story where a player would take sole control of the WWE and keep all the McMahons around, but a little bit more depth would somewhat help. Why did Vince sell it? Is he broke? Why's he sticking around? Do you have dirt on him? etc Show-wise, I realise you're running things your way, but again, the TLC match with Edge and Carlito seems to just come out of nowhere with no build whatsoever, then there's the main event that lasts for 20+ minutes without anything really happening to justify that. Also you mentioned that you rushed to get the show out before work. To be honest, I'd suggest not rushing anything. It's always tempting to get things posted as quickly as possible and plough through event after event, but it a well throught out update that takes longer to post will often be received better than one that is just rushed and slapped up at the earliest opportunity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sebsplex Posted October 11, 2006 Share Posted October 11, 2006 I have to admit the backstory is a little bit of a struggle to accept off the bat. I understand that this is your diary and you can have the WWE ran by aliens from another planet if you want, but the only thing I'd suggest is somewhere along the way throw in a bit more explanation for things. I know it's very hard to create a believable story where a player would take sole control of the WWE and keep all the McMahons around, but a little bit more depth would somewhat help. Why did Vince sell it? Is he broke? Why's he sticking around? Do you have dirt on him? etc Show-wise, I realise you're running things your way, but again, the TLC match with Edge and Carlito seems to just come out of nowhere with no build whatsoever, then there's the main event that lasts for 20+ minutes without anything really happening to justify that. Also you mentioned that you rushed to get the show out before work. To be honest, I'd suggest not rushing anything. It's always tempting to get things posted as quickly as possible and plough through event after event, but it a well throught out update that takes longer to post will often be received better than one that is just rushed and slapped up at the earliest opportunity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Gadzinski Posted October 13, 2006 Author Share Posted October 13, 2006 promise the update will be up tomorrow work is really getting to me right now and wont be able to produce a good show. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Gadzinski Posted October 13, 2006 Author Share Posted October 13, 2006 promise the update will be up tomorrow work is really getting to me right now and wont be able to produce a good show. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaynes23 Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 Just take your time and don't rush it. If you rush it then it will turn out crappy, and nobody wants that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaynes23 Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 Just take your time and don't rush it. If you rush it then it will turn out crappy, and nobody wants that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Gadzinski Posted October 13, 2006 Author Share Posted October 13, 2006 I know thats why im holding off for now and just brainstorming some shows and segments for ECW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Gadzinski Posted October 13, 2006 Author Share Posted October 13, 2006 I know thats why im holding off for now and just brainstorming some shows and segments for ECW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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