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  1. <p>Great show Eisen-verse. I'll start off by saying I think I've liked your previous versions of Bret Starr better. The character you had for him in your diary where he was in that group Undeniable was golden. I said all of that to say that this might be the most entertaining Bret Starr you've written. He's smug and a complete idiot. I love it. I WANT to see him get beat to a pulp.</p><p> </p><p> You continue to kill it with ATOMIC. Hopefully he can ride his wave of momentum to something really cool. Awesome tough guy moment from. </p><p> </p><p> I looked closer at that render of Krissy Angelle that you're using. You're right! It is much more sexy than I originally thought. All is forgiven. </p><p> </p><p> Valiant and Rogue continue their epic story. Valiant is on the edge of breaking like John Cena time and again. Will he break?</p><p> </p><p> Main event was a great angle. Scythe is truly frightening here. Can't wait to see how the heroes begin discussing how to deal with him.</p>
  2. 'The Disco Stud' Robbie Retro [vs] 'The All American' Des Davids w/ The New Pain Alliance Mikey Lau & ZWB [vs] Hollywood Bret Starr & Randy Unleashed w/ The Unleashed Rat Pack 'Fast Ball' Oliver Kobb [vs] Dominic DeSousa w/ Joe Sexy The Sharp Shooters (Gilmore & Morgan) [vs] Fame and Money (Huntingdon & Trescarde) Brett Biggins [vs] 'The Eighth Deadly Sin' John Greed w/ Scythe Rocky Golden & Spencer Spade w/ Dulce Moreno [vs] Tommy Cornell & Robbie Wright w/ The Trust
  3. Did not expect the Underworld to go down that fast. Great show. Once again, the ending was brilliant. The interactions between the characters is what makes this so good. Loved the thing between Theseus and Artemis. Something's brewing there. Also, it was really interesting to see all of those gods rally around Poseidon. Hades & The Three Graces vs. The Golden Children (Apollo, Artemis & Hermes) & Dionysus Ares vs. Poseidon © For the Throne of the Gods
  4. <blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="RKOwnage" data-cite="RKOwnage" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="52251" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>*salute to Jungle Lord* my prediction prize has been fulfilled.</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> You got Jungle Lord fired?! How dare you! You're welcome!</p>
  5. Really awesome opening. Loved ATOMIC wrecking Starr after he won the briefcase. Can't wait to see how you characterize Starr in his buildup with the contract. Man I didn't even see the Boys in the tag title match. Glad I was wrong there! Time to watch them crack beers and kick ass! Loved their beatdown of the Rat Pack. Awesome showing by Lenny Brown despite the loss. Surprised they pulled a 77 there. You've made him look really good here in the early going of this story. Great win for Mikey. Hopefully he moves on from James to something else. (PS: We need a hotter pic for Krissy Angelle. This is SUPREME AGGRESSION after all.) Sir, you've gone to another level with this Rogue vs Valiant thing. The match itself was simply brutal. The aftermath? It may be one of the best things I've seen you write. Rogue is finally the ROTTEN scoundrel he should be here. Can't wait to see how far you take this with him. Poor Hannah. Great writeup for Rocky vs Remo. Loved the shift in the colors when Scythe becomes involved. The graphics for this one were amazing. I've got a feeling Scythe is gonna be huge here.
  6. Whoops. Missed reading the last show for some reason. Great once again. Man, things are really heating up amongst the gods. The deception, trickery, and bickering amongst them gets worse and worse every week. Interesting to see the Underworld get ran off this early into their pairing. Crazy that it took so many gods just to fend them off. It would be crazy see a huge match between the two groups although one is loose-knit. Do you have someone in mind for Zeus already? Can't wait until he arrives. Athena vs. Hera Hades © vs. Poseidon For the Throne of the Gods
  7. Great previous show Lloyd. I was gonna pick Scythe to take down Rocky Golden via shenanigans, but I didn't think you'd actually do it. Giving Rocky his first loss on TV and to Scythe in a opening match? That takes balls. Did he complain? 'The Dragon' Mikey Lau [vs] 'The King Of Charisma' Robbie Wright w/ Eric Eisen 'The Hawaiian Strong Man' Ekuma w/ High Flyin' Hawaiian [vs] 'The African Assassin' Makutsi Remo Richardson, Matty Faith & Masked Patriot [vs] Atom Smasher, Brandon James & American Machine w/ Kristen Pearce 'The Show Stealer' ZWB [vs] Hollywood Bret Starr w/ The Unleashed Rat Pack Jungle Lord [vs] Dominic DeSousa w/ Joe Sexy Valiant & Rogue w/ Willy LaRoux [vs] The Keith Twins w/ Tommy Cornell
  8. Woodsmeister, it absolutely was. Glad somebody caught that lol.
  9. You guys are all WRONG here. I know EXACTLY who's gonna win ALL of these matches. Alright, so let's get started. Bret Starr isn't quite ready to be the World Heavyweight Champion but what better way for him to build himself than to sneak in and win the New Year's Revolution contract after ATOMIC implodes, setting up a new feud with the meathead. Can you imagine ATOMIC kicking Starr's tail for months only for Starr to find a way to retain his contract every time? I mean it simply writes itself. Primus smashes. I'm getting a Batista vibe from him with that Primus Bomb. Can't wait to see what he does. Push him to the moon! The tag match is a tough one. Fame & Money suck, and so they don't really deserve the titles. Can't think of what kind of story would actually need them to hold the titles so I'll go with the Awesomeness dethroning them. No good to have heels beat heels straight up, so it'll give Hawaiian Crush something to chase with a more interesting matchup. Big D ALWAYS wins this match so I'm going with Lenny Brown this time despite the popularity disparity. Does Lenny deserve it? HECK NO. But it would be a damn good story to have him roll up a very protected Davids only to get a MASSIVE beatdown following the match. Book it! Lau vs Big Money is always a tough one because this story could go in a number of directions. It's very early here so I'll say Lau wins to get this story out of the way to move him onto other things. Rogue beats Valiant viciously in the rematch to set up something later. Finally, the main event. Once again, you all are WRONG. Because I know EXACTLY what's going to happen here. We've got ourselves a good old fashioned sports entertainment ending with Scythe finally showing up and wrecking EVERYTHING here. The match ends in a messy draw and the show ends with Scythe standing over Rocky Golden's lifeless body. See, told you guys I know EXACTLY who's gonna win ALL of these matches.
  10. Ehh. I can see this. Some of them look fantastic like Dulce and Faith and Glory. Some of them are kind of hard to keep up with I guess because we're so used to the old style. Anyway, on to my comments about the show. Dulce better not be trying to screw Spade! That ending was very suspicious. Looking forward to Rocky vs Scythe on TV. As always, I love our hero Atom Smasher out there. Crazy that he's made his own twisted Heroes Guild. Great show. PS: We need Krissy Angelle!
  11. <p>Man I love the small little things about their personalities that you throw in there like Hera's rage, the Deadeye being Artemis's finisher, etc. Also love the CONSTANT betrayals and conniving of the Gods. Fits them perfectly. </p><p> </p><p> Nice main event there, keeping Athena strong. Man she's the beast that she should be! </p><p> </p><p> Did NOT see that coming with Hades winning. Thought he would summon Cerberus for a moment there. </p><p> </p><p> Great show! Definitely can't wait for more. The Dark King is here!</p><p> </p><p> PS: Please use that as a nickname for Hades. <img alt="" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/wink.png.686f06e511ee1fbf6bdc7d82f6831e53.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /></p>
  12. <blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="The Lloyd" data-cite="The Lloyd" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="52251" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>I just wanted to stop on here, and say a huge thank you to anyone who voted for me or my work in DOTY. I came second a bunch, for this diary, my previous RAW diary and WWE current day diary... and for my two-player WWF vs WCW WAR against Togg...<p> </p><p> But to win Writer Of The Year, when there are so many great writers on the boards, is a huge honour. These boards are amazing right now! The quality is better than it's ever been!</p><p> </p><p> I'll wait to post the show, because there's still a few regulars to predict <img alt=":)" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/smile.png.142cfa0a1cd2925c0463c1d00f499df2.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /></p></div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Congratulations brother. Keep on keeping on. You've still got it! <em>Clap clap clapclapclap!</em></p>
  13. <p>First, welcome back Eisen-verse. Second, great start to this diary. Finally got a chance to read, and I have to say I like where we're going with the start here. Go ahead and get Rocky Golden vs Remo out of the way so we can get to some other stuff. Looking forward to what you do here. It's definitely a different feel than your last couple of diaries. </p><p> </p><p> <strong>Randy Unleashed</strong> vs Steven Parker</p><p> </p><p> Masked Patriot vs <strong>Primus Allen</strong></p><p> </p><p> <strong>Angry Gilmore</strong> vs Mainstream Hernandez </p><p> </p><p> Makutsi vs <strong>Mikey Lau</strong></p><p> </p><p> <strong>Bret Starr & Des Davids</strong> vs Lenny Brown & ??</p><p> </p><p> <strong>Rogue</strong> vs Valiant</p>
  14. <p>Aphrodite & Ares vs. <strong>Hephaestus & Poseidon</strong></p><p> <strong>Achilles</strong> vs. Heracles (Arm-Wrestle)</p><p> <strong>Apollo & Artemis</strong> vs. Hera & Hermes</p><p> Athena © vs. <strong>Hades</strong></p>
  15. Sensational' Steven Parker [vs] 'Platinum' James Prudence Faith and Old Glory [vs] Atom Smasher & American Machine w/ Kristen Pearce Jungle Lord [vs] 'The Con Man' Sammy Smoke 'The Dragon' Mikey Lau [vs] 'The Eighth Deadly Sin' John Greed w/ Scythe Hawaiian Crush [vs] Makutsi and Dominic DeSousa w/ Joe Sexy 'Every Woman's Dream' Valiant w/ Rogue [vs] Randy Unleashed w/ The Unleashed Rat Pack
  16. Loving the rivalry (or lack thereof) between Achilles and Heracles. I'm actually thinking Athena will be dethroned at this next show. The Underworld could be on the verge of ruling!
  17. Great show Lloyd. Think I got almost all my picks wrong. I'm scared for Spade now. Will he be "made" with a win over Cornell or will the legend topple him? Scary stuff for the future there. I still feel like there's something off about Rocky Golden. I don't think it's been mentioned for a few weeks, but is he in on the Trust? Guess we'll find out eventually. Speaking of the Trust, great name for that faction. I can see Cornell taking the group from right under Eisen's feet. This is heading for something really awesome at Supreme Challenge with all the moving pieces and intricate storylines.
  18. Another great show. That ending was waaaaaay awkward with Achilles. Can't wait to see what happens with him and Heracles. Dionysus throwing up had to be the funniest part here. Is the Underworld going to be the name for the Hades-Persephone-Ares-Aphrodite faction?
  19. Six Man Tag Team Match: Remo Richardson, Valiant & Mikey Lau w/ Rogue [vs] Tommy Cornell & The Keith Twins I feel like this is a match Cornell & co. could lose and not be hurt but they shouldn't lose just yet. North American Title Match: 'The Show Stealer' ZWB © [vs] 'Mainstream' Jimmy Hernandez ZWB has been taking the shots in this one. He finally turns things around here. If Smasher wins, James works for him... If James wins, he gets Smasher's 'SWF Injuries' dossier: 'Big Money' Brandon James w/ Krissy Angelle [vs] 'Your Hero' Atom Smasher w/ Kristen Pearce YOUR Hero wins here. You're welcome! Grudge Match: 'The Disco Stud' Robbie Retro [vs] 'All American' Des Davids SWF World Tag Team Title Match: The Sharp Shooters [vs] The Dallas Cowboys w/ Hannah [vs] The Awesomeness © [vs] Randy Unleashed & Hollywood Bret Starr I think these guys will screw their stablemates out of victory here. Everything To Gain Upgrade Attempt: 'The Supreme Star' Spencer Spade © w/ Dulce Moreno [vs] 'The King of Charisma' Robbie Wright w/ Eric Eisen & Emma Chase Spencer Spade has a rocket strapped to his butt, and is going STRAIGHT to the top! SWF World Heavyweight Title Match: 'The Living Legend' Rocky Golden © [vs] 'The Eighth Deadly Sin' John Greed w/ Scythe Rocky has something else in store...the title stays with him. Bonus Questions: 1). Which Match will be the Match Of The Night? Opener 2). What will the Overall Rating of the show be? (Within five, 1 point. Spot on, 2 points) 90 3). How Many Championships will change hands? (out of a possible three, not including the ETG Contract) 1
  20. Angry Gilmore w/ Joey Morgan [vs] Hollywood Bret Starr w/ The Rat Pack Spencer Spade, ZWB & Robbie Retro [vs] Robbie Wright, Jimmy Hernandez & Des Davids The Dallas Cowboys [vs] Fame and Money w/ The Rat Pack Bear Bekowski [vs] Dominic DeSousa w/ Joe Sexy 'Fast Ball' Oliver Kobb [vs] Primus Allen 'The Living Legend' Rocky Golden [vs] Randy Unleashed w/ The Rat Pack
  21. Another good one. I agree, the angles are killing it here. That smile from Aphrodite would've gotten me but I LOVED Poseidon's response. Artemis vs. Hera Aphrodite vs. Athena © for the Throne of the Gods Bonus point: Which Hero will be summoned at the end of the show? Adonis? Athena should win this one but I've just got a feeling Aphrodite's cunning and seductiveness is gonna get her the upset win.
  22. Another great show Lloyd. We need Krissy Angelle! Can't wait to see what Cornell and the Keith Twins do. Are you considering a name for their little group? Surely SWF doesn't have the money to buy the Syndicate trademark from TCW.
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