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<p>Took a little bit of time to re-charge my batteries with this one. I'm loving the project but felt that we weren't really pulling in much readers as of late. There are a lot of great projects here; so, I thought a little time and space may be good. Either way, I'm firing this one up again in the next few days or so. </p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="DevilofNG" data-cite="DevilofNG" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="52803" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Really liked the opening here. The odds are obviously stacked against him with all these opponents coming for him. He turns to the only guy here that he's known a long time. Good rub for the Boys.</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> I had the mindset of putting these three together for some time now (just wanted to see how I could best do it). In the end, RDJ is the common link between the two. If all goes well, I foresee this being a long-term burn; working together as they come to trust one another as a team.</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="DevilofNG" data-cite="DevilofNG" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="52803" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Good face turn for Des Davids there. Danger seems like the kind of guy the fans would cheer despite him being a heel. Same with Remo of course. Fans love badasses.</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Exactly. The 'Bad Ass' persona will always get a pop from some within the crowd. That's why Remo is not universally hated. He's a heel because he wrestles babyfaces (and in a cold, unforgiving manner). That said, he's equally liked due to the nature that he seems legit (i.e. Brock Lesnar). </p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="DevilofNG" data-cite="DevilofNG" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="52803" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Ok, Starr is officially a complete idiot. He was already an idiot. But he's gone full blown, complete idiot now. This is hilariously entertaining!</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> This version of Bret Starr 100% feels like a guy who EXPECTS to be at the top of the card; however, isn't all that ready yet. In a way, if he were honest with himself, he'd KNOW he wasn't ready for the limelight. That said, that's not going to stop him from doing whatever it takes to get there. </p><p> </p><p> His segment on SupremeTV this past episode (quasi-praying) was one of my favorite segments I've ever written. It was a lot of fun!</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="DevilofNG" data-cite="DevilofNG" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="52803" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Awesome segment with ATOMIC and Lau. That lunatic took a good beating but the fans will love him more for it. Lau making the save awesome. They could be an interesting pair, if only for a one off tag match. </div></blockquote><p> </p><p> I've thrown these two together in the past due to their shared rivals. This time feels much the same. They aren't cohesive in the sense that they are similar in ANY way. They are opposites in a lot of ways. That said, they BOTH have an axe to grind with Crips, Rogue, and James. That should take them pretty far!</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="DevilofNG" data-cite="DevilofNG" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="52803" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Man Gilmore was intense in that match with Spade. Guess Spade mouthing off got him in trouble here. </div></blockquote><p> </p><p> I'm a BIG fan of Spade. Even with that said, I don't want him walking all over the main event scene to get him to the top. He talks a big game, and can back it up in the ring, but here he barked up the wrong tree. Gilmore puts him BACK into his place and now we can see what happens from here...</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="DevilofNG" data-cite="DevilofNG" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="52803" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>That alliance between Rogue, Crippler, and Brandon James threw me for a loop. That's a powerful grouping if used correctly. They're going to make someone's life HELL. </div></blockquote><p> </p><p> I really like the three of these guys together. I'm keeping with the Rogue storyline saying that his 'days are numbered' due to this 'unknown injury.' That should align pretty well with the tone of the group (as we will see).</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="DevilofNG" data-cite="DevilofNG" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="52803" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Very sports entertainment style ending there. Match is thrown out but the writeup for the aftermath was great. Scythe truly is a monster here. I like what you're doing with him here better than in your previous diaries. That big boot/choke combo was sick!</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Yea, I wanted to go straight SE with this one. I haven't really used that card yet. That said, in this case, we are able to get Scythe into action for the first time but ALSO not have a clear winner or loser. Then, the closing segments makes him seem more human; being put on his heels. That said, he's still overwhelmingly destructive; able to fend off everyone before disappearing into the darkness. More to come!</p><p> </p><p> </p><blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="DevilofNG" data-cite="DevilofNG" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="52803" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>The graphics here continue to kill it. Gives a nice touch to the presentation of the characters.</div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Thank you for this!</p><p> </p><p> I know that reading text isn't everyone's favorite thing to do. That said, I try to spruce it up to make it closer to an engaging form of entertainment.</p>
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Took a little bit of time to re-charge my batteries with this one. I'm loving the project but felt that we weren't really pulling in much readers as of late. There are a lot of great projects here; so, I thought a little time and space may be good. Either way, I'm firing this one up again in the next few days or so.

 

it's a ghost town around here at times, your writing is amazing. it's just not as many people are invested in 20. there's another sim some have shifted too. regardless I'll read every word you right, hopefully the views increase. You do incredible work

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it's a ghost town around here at times, your writing is amazing. it's just not as many people are invested in 20. there's another sim some have shifted too. regardless I'll read every word you right, hopefully the views increase. You do incredible work

 

I've said this for years. Legitimately... YEARS!!! And it just keeps getting better.

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Joey Morgan vs Randy Unleashed

 

Awesomeness vs Fame & Money vs Hawaiian Crush vs Biggins & Faith

 

BEAR vs Lenny Brown

 

Remo vs ZWB

"Good God, he's broken in half!"

 

The Crippler vs Valiant

Crippler has the numbers advantage here. Good psychological challenge for Valiant with Rogue lurking somewhere.

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After mulling over projects, I feel as though this is the best one to keep going. I already have a number of characters that I like and some budding storylines that could be a lot of fun to flesh out. The 'time aspect' is still a problem but, as long as people know it may take awhile between shows at points, then I think we should be okay.

 

In which to help others jump back into the project, here are some important links:

 

Also, here are the ongoing storylines thus far (giving insight into where we are and how we got here):

 

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Good to see you continuing this one man. Always look forward to reading your work. Not to put any pressure on you, but the work of guys like you and Lloyd is what motivates me to play TEW2020. Haven't had a single long term save since the game came out because of life, family, work, etc, but reading you guys' work helps me work on my database. Take as much time as you need between shows because you'll always have at least one reader.
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QUICK CARD

 

Rocky Golden© vs. Bret Starr

[sWF World Heavyweight Championship Match]

 

Injustice vs. ATOMIC, Mikey Lau, and Valiant

[3 vs. 3 Tag Team Match]

 

Des Davids© vs. Primus Allen w/ Joe Sexy

[sWF North American Championship Match]

 

Remo vs. ZWB

[Grudge Match -- Non-Title Match]

 

The Boys© vs. The Awesomeness

[sWF World Tag Team Championship Match]

[barroom Brawl]

 

Angry Gilmore vs. Spencer Spade w/ Dulce Moreno

[‘Knock Out’ Match]

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Rocky Golden© vs. Bret Starr

[sWF World Heavyweight Championship Match]

 

Injustice vs. ATOMIC, Mikey Lau, and Valiant

[3 vs. 3 Tag Team Match]

 

Des Davids© vs. Primus Allen w/ Joe Sexy

[sWF North American Championship Match]

 

Remo vs. ZWB

[Grudge Match -- Non-Title Match]

 

The Boys© vs. The Awesomeness

[sWF World Tag Team Championship Match]

[barroom Brawl]

 

Angry Gilmore vs. Spencer Spade w/ Dulce Moreno

[‘Knock Out’ Match]

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Great return show Eisen-Verse. Rocky Golden seems a bit different from your previous incarnations of him. Whereas in the past he was more of a Hollywood, Golden boy type figure, here he seems like more of an All-American, blue collar guy. Great distinction there.

 

Rocky Golden© vs. Bret Starr

[sWF World Heavyweight Championship Match]

 

Injustice vs. ATOMIC, Mikey Lau, and Valiant

[3 vs. 3 Tag Team Match]

 

Des Davids© vs. Primus Allen w/ Joe Sexy

[sWF North American Championship Match]

 

Remo vs. ZWB

[Grudge Match -- Non-Title Match]

RIP in pieces ZWB

 

The Boys© vs. The Awesomeness

[sWF World Tag Team Championship Match]

[barroom Brawl]

 

Angry Gilmore vs. Spencer Spade w/ Dulce Moreno

[‘Knock Out’ Match]

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Good to see you back mate! I was watching from the bleachers previously, but will definitely be more involved moving forward.

 

Rocky Golden© vs. Bret Starr

[sWF World Heavyweight Championship]

 

Injustice vs. ATOMIC, Mikey Lau, and Valiant

[3 vs. 3 Tag Team Match]

 

Des Davids© vs. Primus Allen w/ Joe Sexy

[sWF North American Championship Match]

 

Remo vs. ZWB

[Grudge Match -- Non-Title Match]

 

 

The Boys© vs. The Awesomeness

[sWF World Tag Team Championship Match]

[barroom Brawl]

 

Angry Gilmore vs. Spencer Spade w/ Dulce Moreno

 

Also on a side note - id love to know what your future plans were for your previous diary!

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Great return show Eisen-Verse. Rocky Golden seems a bit different from your previous incarnations of him. Whereas in the past he was more of a Hollywood, Golden boy type figure, here he seems like more of an All-American, blue collar guy. Great distinction there.

 

Yea, this is the version I always want to 'get to'; however, never made it far enough to do so. In this version of the SWF, Golden is less 'pretty boy' mega-star and more roughneck powerhouse. His growing alliance with Blood, Sweat, and Beers (RDJ, American Machine, & The Boys) furthers this narrative.

 

As time goes on, I look forward to furthering this persona for Golden (and his allies as a whole).

 

Good to see you back mate! I was watching from the bleachers previously, but will definitely be more involved moving forward.

 

Ignited! :)

 

It's really great to see you in here! I've always enjoyed your insight/feedback.

 

Also on a side note - id love to know what your future plans were for your previous diary!

 

Do you mean my previous project -- ala IPW? If so, I don't quite remember where I was with that.

 

If you mean the SWF, this is a continuation of the project that I started in March. I took a bit of a break; however, instead of starting a new project, I wanted to keep this one going (as I was really happy with the progress of some of my characters & stories).

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<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="Eisen-verse" data-cite="Eisen-verse" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="52803" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Do you mean my previous project -- ala IPW? If so, I don't quite remember where I was with that. <p> </p><p> If you mean the SWF, this is a continuation of the project that I started in March. I took a bit of a break; however, instead of starting a new project, I wanted to keep this one going (as I was really happy with the progress of some of my characters & stories).</p></div></blockquote><p> </p><p> Yeah was more talking about your last SWF project (pre IWF)! Though I assume some of the storyline outcomes are slightly similar in a sense and you don’t want to give away some of your stories. Anyways, I’m just a sucker for a E-V story/character arch!</p><p> </p><p> I’m really enjoying this so far, Starr’s character is a highlight for me and have always loved the OOC notes you place at the end of every show - it’s a great way to engage the readers on another level and give us an insight into how you tick.</p>
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Yeah was more talking about your last SWF project (pre IWF)! Though I assume some of the storyline outcomes are slightly similar in a sense and you don’t want to give away some of your stories. Anyways, I’m just a sucker for a E-V story/character arch!

 

You're right in thinking that there are some parallels between the two projects; so, I won't give away those insights. :)

 

I’m really enjoying this so far, Starr’s character is a highlight for me and have always loved the OOC notes you place at the end of every show - it’s a great way to engage the readers on another level and give us an insight into how you tick.

 

I really enjoy the OOC section as well. It allows me to explain my thinking/perspective as to why matches/angles were booked as such. I'm a fan of storytelling from an entertainment aspect but also value the 'behind the scenes' messaging as well.

 

I just want to say great work Eisen-verse ! Really enjoy the storytelling and presentation.

 

Thank you, Miyk! I really appreciate it! :)

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Rocky Golden© vs. Bret Starr

[sWF World Heavyweight Championship Match]

 

Injustice vs. ATOMIC, Mikey Lau, and Valiant

[3 vs. 3 Tag Team Match]

 

Des Davids© vs. Primus Allen w/ Joe Sexy

[sWF North American Championship Match]

 

Remo vs. ZWB

[Grudge Match -- Non-Title Match]

 

The Boys© vs. The Awesomeness

[sWF World Tag Team Championship Match]

[barroom Brawl]

 

Angry Gilmore vs. Spencer Spade w/ Dulce Moreno

[‘Knock Out’ Match]

 

My thinking - Golden has to retain, Starr is the cocky guy who can’t get it done as you said, his character arc shouldn’t be complete until he realises this and figured out a way to better himself… Golden is the ace I feel he is building towards a huge match with Remo for the belt down the road.

 

If you are building up Injustice to establish a top heel group they need to win, they need to be the baddest of the bad before they get brought back down - if that’s the way your going of course.

 

Primus is on fire, he has a winning streak, he had a mouth piece and I think he goes over here, maybe Davids and Brown are going to team up…

 

Remo wins, it would feel like a massive shock to lose to ZWB, I feel he needs to give a better account of himself after he was disrespected and his belt was but in the end Remo needs to be the monster.

 

The Boys retain, I love The Awesomeness but The Boys only recently won the belts and it’s a bar room brawl so gives them the edge, gets them over that bit more.

 

Spencer Spade to get the W, 9/10 of my games Gilmore skills are declining so I assume he will be putting over the stars of tomorrow, should retain his pop with strong angles.

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What a whirlwind. I feel like after my predictions I may have no idea after all LOL.

 

Starr winning the title was by far my favourite moment. As soon as the lights went out I just had this feeling turning the page he was going to win, and you delivered. The fact I was so venomously sure that Golden was going to win, that shock factor of Starr winning is so good.

 

The other shock for me was Primus losing. I definitely thought Davids was going to push to the ME, but with the likes of Val, Lau and Atomic - I assume you’ll go for more of a slow build with Des for now. I’m dying for that match against Remo though!

 

Overall a really good show as usual, the Spade win will do well for his pop and liked to see Huntingdon on the show. He is so underrated for me, so much so that I find I don’t use him as much as I like in my games!

 

Keep it up!

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SWF Genesis coming in the next day or two!

Great show, some unexpected twists and turns. Looking forwards to where this goes

 

What a whirlwind. I feel like after my predictions I may have no idea after all LOL.

 

Starr winning the title was by far my favourite moment. As soon as the lights went out I just had this feeling turning the page he was going to win, and you delivered. The fact I was so venomously sure that Golden was going to win, that shock factor of Starr winning is so good.

 

The other shock for me was Primus losing. I definitely thought Davids was going to push to the ME, but with the likes of Val, Lau and Atomic - I assume you’ll go for more of a slow build with Des for now. I’m dying for that match against Remo though!

 

Overall a really good show as usual, the Spade win will do well for his pop and liked to see Huntingdon on the show. He is so underrated for me, so much so that I find I don’t use him as much as I like in my games!

 

Keep it up!

 

looking good EV. happy to see you are back and at a high level, gotta catch up on what I missed

 

Thank you (to all 3 of you) for your feedback/comments! :) I really appreciate it!

 

Bret Starr winning has been the plan ever since I started the project. I love his character and wanted to tell that story.

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