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Who will confront Blake Belushi? Swoop!?

Joe Zucco vs ???

Cole Taylor vs Thurston Darcy III

I love the detectives :D

Will Will & Momma Wayne get married? YES

I think Momma Wayne and Will Will get married. Will Will come out unscathed though? Probably not. Kal and Kian are going to be there for sure!

What will be the name of previously the unseen Wayne sister? (hint: Of course it will start with a K)

This is amazing! There's a couple of routes I could go down here. 'Kill' would be quite funny. Rhymes with Will and starts with a K. But knowing you, it's going to be Kerri. Just Kerry with an I :D

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Who will confront Blake Belushi?

 

Surely Swoop as he is one of the only guys to care about Frogue but I am going with Rick Stantz. No reason why.

 

Joe Zucco vs ???

 

Love Zucco he is a fighter but a return or debut against Zucco is a good way to set yourself in the company.

 

 

Cole Taylor vs Thurston Darcy III

 

Tailor Made baby!

 

Will Will & Momma Wayne get married?

 

I hope so, but you just reminded me that all Wayne members start with a K. Wills first name doesnt have a K so it jist wouldnt be right. So no.

 

What will be the name of previously the unseen Wayne sister? (hint: Of course it will start with a K)

 

Anything that isnt Karen... but I like the Kath idea earlier and going along the same vein. Kim, or Kimmi.

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I'll get my early prediction in now. Swoop will break the curse in episode 39.

 

I assume that's a random number or is there any logic behind that I'm missing?? Either way, you just might be right who knows! I don't yet anyway!

 

Amazing episode, and I'm glad the curse is finally getting some focus. It is so weird how many 4-time Champs there have been!! :D

 

Loved the Stag doo (Buck Night), and really, really loved how all the stories continued. Loxley and the pirate could be amazing!!

 

Thank you, yeah I don't know what it is about it but I think she might bring more out of Loxley, there's a few ways it might still go but either way should make Loxley a more interesting character.

 

This is amazing! There's a couple of routes I could go down here. 'Kill' would be quite funny. Rhymes with Will and starts with a K. But knowing you, it's going to be Kerri. Just Kerry with an I :D

 

It's crazy how your logic here was absolutely spot on, you just picked the wrong Wayne Brother to apply it to!

 

Love Zucco he is a fighter but a return or debut against Zucco is a good way to set yourself in the company.

 

Good call with the return. I do sort of like Joe, but I'm definitely not doing great by him, he's lost I think every match, although when I think about it he is still being featured. To have a mini storyline and matches in 'The Main Event Hour' is a pretty decent spot even if it's not actually going well for him.

 

 

 

Definitely interested to hear any thoughts on the Wedding Episode. Parts of it were decided and written right at the beginning of the diary so it's one I've personally looked forward to posting for quite a while!

 

P.S Thanks to anyone who nominated/voted for this in DOTM. I'm confident this diary has some legs to it, so it's definitely fitting that it's got me my first win, hopefully I can keep improving it though, there's definitely some big changes coming soon anyway. ;)

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Episode 19

 

After a shocking episode, expect to see the fallout from the wedding which saw
Will Beaumont
leave
Momma Wayne
waiting at the alter and the
RAW TV Champion
Rahmel Goode
suffer a heart attack. How will the
Wayne Family
be feeling and how will the entire RAW roster react to losing their champion in such a way?

 

Picking up the win his in return last week was big for
Gladiator
who had a new face in his corner, this week he will hope to keep momentum going against
The Master of Fu
's
Echo
.

 

Also a huge main event will see two men in great form clash.
'Big Mac' Nathan McKenzie
is fresh from his feud with Monty Croft and has picked a fight with
'Beautiful' Blake Belushi
. Two men with impressive form, both surely on the verge of title contention, there's a lot to fight for on this week's episode of RAW Attitude!

 

Prediction key

Gladiator vs Echo

Nathan McKenzie vs Blake Belushi

What will the status of the RAW TV Title be at the end of the show?

a) Rahmel Goode will still be the champion

b) There will be a new champion

c) The title will be vacant

 

P.S The current prediction contest will be drawing to a close after next week's episode.

 

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Wow. I wasn't ready for Will to stand her up, let alone the song. That was such an amazing piece and can't wait to hear it on the radio. Everything about that event was so good, but the turn by Will is amazing.

 

Gladiator vs Echo

 

It should be Echo, but he is steadily moving down the card while Glad is a new man, with a new woman.

 

Nathan McKenzie vs Blake Belushi

 

Probably by DQ after Heartbreak gets involved in the match. This is a nice little feud for McKenzie to move onto and it is nice to see him stick up for the Cluesome Twosome.

 

What will the status of the RAW TV Title be at the end of the show?

a) Rahmel Goode will still be the champion

b) There will be a new champion

c) The title will be vacant

 

It could start vacated but with the bad blood between Swoop & Captain it would be nice to see them get a title reign out of this.

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<p>Back up to date now, and while I didn't make notes as I went through this time, everything on the shows is so enjoyable. Everyone having such a defined character is something I always strive for, but have never done to such a degree as this. </p><p> </p><p>

Will and The LibertTeens/Croft stand out in my memory, Big Mac looking a monster too. The Buck Night Brawl was fantastic, with the segments around it as well. </p><p> </p><p>

Captain and Swoop at the wedding felt like a huge moment. The wedding, particularly the song. Wow. There is one quote I wanted to post, but it might get me banned <img alt=":D" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/biggrin.png.929299b4c121f473b0026f3d6e74d189.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /> was it supposed to be sung to the tune of "I Want It That Way"? Because that's naturally what I went with <img alt=":)" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/smile.png.142cfa0a1cd2925c0463c1d00f499df2.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /></p><p> </p><p>

Then you top it off with that ending. Loved it.</p>

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Oh man, that is the best wedding I've ever been to! (apart from my own). Loved the entire show!

 

Prediction key

Gladiator vs Echo

DQ to keep Glad strong, but tough one to call

Nathan McKenzie vs Blake Belushi

Should be a great match!! Love them both!!

What will the status of the RAW TV Title be at the end of the show?

a) Rahmel Goode will still be the champion

b) There will be a new champion

c) The title will be vacant

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If it doesnt spoil a future plot point to say so, what was the reason Goode had a heart attack and vacated anyway?

 

Some sort of injury in-game or he unexpectedly died or something? Just curious if this all to do with something that happened out of the blue given he only won the title recently, or if I'm just getting worked :)

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Captain and Swoop at the wedding felt like a huge moment. The wedding, particularly the song. Wow. There is one quote I wanted to post, but it might get me banned :D was it supposed to be sung to the tune of "I Want It That Way"? Because that's naturally what I went with :)

 

Really happy to get some good feedback for the wedding and the song. In my mind the song has become a mini viral success, at least in Australia, so it's fitting for it to get a reaction.

 

I've always tended to * out any swearing, but I'm thinking RAW is on late night on a channel that's targeting young males. It just didn't seem right. So I didn't want to suddenly start swearing for the sake of it and having super risque angles, but I definitely intend on slowly making it just a little more edgy. I don't know what the forum rules are, tbh I've got a feeling on these actual messages we aren't supposed to swear? But hey I'm linking to somewhere else and even had a warning so... surely it's fine.

 

Ahh the prestigious Television title, decided in a paintball fight. Im so excited.

 

As someone who tends to play as performance heavy promotions, something like this does feel odd to me, in general the quest title (at least whilst Lynx holds it) is where you'll get most the wacky stuff, and the TV title is supposed to be a bit more traditional, it's hard to comment more on my reasoning without spoilers but in general things like this will be rare for the top title.

 

It's a fun episode to write so hopefully it's an enjoyable one!

 

If it doesnt spoil a future plot point to say so, what was the reason Goode had a heart attack and vacated anyway?

 

Some sort of injury in-game or he unexpectedly died or something? Just curious if this all to do with something that happened out of the blue given he only won the title recently, or if I'm just getting worked :)

 

Good question... I'm torn how much to explain.

 

All I'll say is... I like the idea that RAW allows me turn some wrestling logic on it's head. Like you say he'd just won the title, was the leader of a big stable which were doing well, but could perhaps do with a dominant championship reign, all signs point to him keeping the title. So the reign ending like this is hopefully much more shocking. I definitely want to cultivate the feeling that anything can happen.

 

That said, I'd like to think I'm not just making decisions for the sole reason of being shocking, I think the storyline both for the TV Title, and Rahmel going forward would be more interesting than the title reign he's been robbed of.

 

So yeah he's alive, but whether you'll see him wrestle again is perhaps a different story.

 

However I do have an instance of the game throwing me a curve ball that I can share. In his match with Brodie Lachlan that has just been posted, he suffered a major concussion and is out for 13 months. I'm not paying him to sit around when he was already very much on the chopping line. So George LiberTeen is not just fired from the band, but in fact from RAW.

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However I do have an instance of the game throwing me a curve ball that I can share. In his match with Brodie Lachlan that has just been posted, he suffered a major concussion and is out for 13 months. I'm not paying him to sit around when he was already very much on the chopping line. So George LiberTeen is not just fired from the band, but in fact from RAW.

 

Oh God, I read that and was like: WHEN WAS GOODE IN A MATCH WITH BRODIE?!?! 13 MONTHS?!?! OH WOW!! NO WONDER YOU STRIPPED HIM OF THE TV... Oh wait... It's just George LiberTeen... Thank the Lord!! :D

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Oh God, I read that and was like: WHEN WAS GOODE IN A MATCH WITH BRODIE?!?! 13 MONTHS?!?! OH WOW!! NO WONDER YOU STRIPPED HIM OF THE TV... Oh wait... It's just George LiberTeen... Thank the Lord!! :D

 

Yeah that was really weirdly put together sentence wasn't it!

 

But exactly, if I could pick anyone on the roster to lose like that he'd be very high on the list. I liked the idea of a George face run but in reality his stats are just way too low.

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However I do have an instance of the game throwing me a curve ball that I can share. In his match with Brodie Lachlan that has just been posted, he suffered a major concussion and is out for 13 months. I'm not paying him to sit around when he was already very much on the chopping line. So George LiberTeen is not just fired from the band, but in fact from RAW.

 

You've just made a big mistake. That might fly with any of the other LiberTeen's but Lawyer George is definitely all over this:

https://fairworklegaladvice.com.au/terminating-the-employment-of-employees-on-workers-compensation/

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You've just made a big mistake. That might fly with any of the other LiberTeen's but Lawyer George is definitely all over this:

https://fairworklegaladvice.com.au/terminating-the-employment-of-employees-on-workers-compensation/

 

It's so weird you say that, the initial plan of George's mini face run was actually going to involve him suing Croft for wrongful termination just to get at him, but until you pointed it out I never saw the irony of the whole situation!

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<p>Ruthless from JT and the Main Event Mafia, really like the mentions of the situation with the locker room segment and Lynx. Really added to the gravitas of what happened last week. The TV title felt all encompassing on this show, which I liked.</p><p> </p><p>

Huge win for Blake Belushi. Is that Big Mac's first pinfall loss or am I forgetting something?</p><p> </p><p>

Love The Wayne family being brought together by Will. Never thought we'd see them all back on the same page, but this is as good a reason as any!</p><p> </p><p>

Luke Steele continues to entertain, and a paintball fight for the RAW TV Title. This company is insane <img alt=":D" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/biggrin.png.929299b4c121f473b0026f3d6e74d189.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /> and I mean that in a good way! Can't wait to see that unfold. It's stuff like this that makes me wonder if the CornellVerse has someone like Jim Cornette. I'd pay to see a version of Cornette react to some of this stuff!</p>

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was it supposed to be sung to the tune of "I Want It That Way"? Because that's naturally what I went with :)

 

Forgot to answer to this before, Backstreet Boys are definitely an inspiration to LiberTeen but in my mind Will is a bit cooler. It's weird in my mind I know the beat and a little melody for Motherlover but I'm bad at describing it. Maybe one day if I have too much time I'll use some online keyboard to record it. (Without me singing, naturally!)

 

I think it should set Goode up for one big final run when he is ready to retire against Mo Jax speaking of which how old is Goode now? I also love when things happen like that re. George injury changing plans or how everything goes.

 

Goode is 41, now when you consider my second older wrestler is 36 (a few people) it shows that his age does stand out. That said he isn't in decline, on the contrary his stats have actually improved over the past few months.

 

So if he ever makes it back to in ring competition, he's got the ability and the story to go after the title. He would though have a long list of younger stars to compete with.

 

And I agree about plans being forced to change, granted if it was a more important plan with someone I love I may be less positive! But in general it's great to be reminded that no matter what plans I have for the diary, it's all rooted in game and that can change everything.

 

Ruthless from JT and the Main Event Mafia, really like the mentions of the situation with the locker room segment and Lynx. Really added to the gravitas of what happened last week. The TV title felt all encompassing on this show, which I liked.

 

Huge win for Blake Belushi. Is that Big Mac's first pinfall loss or am I forgetting something?

 

Love The Wayne family being brought together by Will. Never thought we'd see them all back on the same page, but this is as good a reason as any!

 

Luke Steele continues to entertain, and a paintball fight for the RAW TV Title. This company is insane :D and I mean that in a good way! Can't wait to see that unfold. It's stuff like this that makes me wonder if the CornellVerse has someone like Jim Cornette. I'd pay to see a version of Cornette react to some of this stuff!

Yeah it's been a little too rare that the focus has truly been on the TV title, so it's nice to change that.

 

That is Big Mac's first loss. The game says RAW have pushed him hard since he signed in late 2018, so I've always said that he's never been pinned clean. My thinking being if he had literally beaten everyone for over a year, you'd think he'd be close to the title contention when you start the game. So I've gone with the story that he's been hugely dominant but has been screwed over a few times. So I suppose you could say this was his first proper loss, obviously there was a mini-distraction but still, it's definitely an important moment for him.

 

Luke Steele is 100% the easiest person to write for. It's never clever, or anything particularly special, but it's also never hard to think of what he would say in any situation! He's also been gaining a lot of popularity in game to say I've not really put any effort into that, so he's fast become one of my favourites.

 

And definitely, a lot of diaries, like your own and Lloyd's make good use of dirtsheet style posts every so often. One reviewing RAW from someone like I don't know Eric Tyler perhaps would definitely be fun.

 

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Episode 20

 

Swoop McCarthy wasn't at last week's TV taping. Busy helping Loxley and Frogue to prepare for their in ring returns...

 

When he goes into The A.S.N Studios mid-week to grab something from his locker he finds a lot more than he expected...

 

Join us for RAW Attitude! PAINTBALL FIGHT!

 

Prediction key

Who will end the show with the RAW TV Title?

Which member of the roster, not seen for quite some time, will make a return?

Yet another family member makes a debut this week, but WHO are they related to? And HOW? (2 points) Clue: The wrestler is a star/major star in game.

 

 

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Who will end the show with the RAW TV Title? Maurice Jackson

Which member of the roster, not seen for quite some time, will make a return? Urrmmm... Skyscraper?

Yet another family member makes a debut this week, but WHO are they related to? And HOW? (2 points) Gaaah'd this is hard. Could be anyone... Let's say Matty Wills has another sister!?

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Who will end the show with the RAW TV Title? Blake Belushi

Which member of the roster, not seen for quite some time, will make a return? Isaac Taylor

Yet another family member makes a debut this week, but WHO are they related to? And HOW? (2 points) Snake Belushi, Blake Belushi's brother, played by Snake King

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Who will end the show with the RAW TV Title?

 

Maurice "The Beast" JACCCKCKKKSSSONNN!!!!

 

Which member of the roster, not seen for quite some time, will make a return?

 

Tombstone, too good to be off TV.

 

Yet another family member makes a debut this week, but WHO are they related to? And HOW? (2 points)

 

I want it to be Joe Zucco, but it is going to be Nicky Gilberts Step-Brother

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<p>Episode 20 will probably still be a couple of days, it's turning out to probably be my longest episode yet, but it's pretty action packed so hopefully it's still a good read, it's definitely an enjoyable one to write anyway. </p><p> </p><p>

In the meanwhile I wanted to get some opinions/show a preview of things to come. I've been working on changing all the worker images. It's been quite the undertaking but I'm currently through 90% of the roster. I just want to explain my thinking throughout it all, I had 3 guiding rules in an order of importance when I was making them. </p><p> </p><p>

<strong>1)</strong> Most importantly they <strong>had to reflect in game stats</strong>. I've worked out a height and weight for all members of the roster and these new looks will hopefully reflect these well. Especially whether a character is flabby/toned/muscular/ripped should translate to the new look. Ideally I want the reader to know who is in the best shape, who is the most menacing etc without me having to actually state it. This also works because if somebody transforms in game, this allows me to change it in the actual diary too, so I love the flexibility. Another way in game has affected me is star quality and sex appeal it's been hard to try and translate that into the new looks, but I've tried. </p><p> </p><p>

<strong>2)</strong> <strong>What the default c-verse renders look like</strong>. For example nothing in the actual game text says Frogue has an afro... or Will Beaumont has blonde hair... But I obviously wanted to reflect the default renders so that hopefully you all know who these pictures below are, or at least you'd be able to pick 80% or so out on the roster. But this hasn't been the most important factor as I've always put the actual game data as the top priority. An example off the top of my head is Kal Wayne in the render I've been using looks like a pretty huge dude. Whereas he's only a middleweight in game (albeit muscular). Most the renders did a great job in portraying how the game describes the worker, but in any instances where I thought something was off, I always picked to go with the game data.</p><p> </p><p>

<strong>3) </strong><strong>How I see them/have been portraying them</strong>. This is impossible to put into words really but things like Steele always having a permanently angry expression, it's nice to actually have the pictures fit their characters but this only came after ensuring the top 2 priorities were met.</p><p> </p><p> </p><p>

A main reason I'm posting all this now is to bring an end to the current prediction contest and begin a new one.</p><p> </p><p>

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New Contest Rules</strong></div></div><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;"> </div></div><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;">

From now on each week will have a winner. When you win you get a point. You can then cash in the points for different things. </div></div><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;"> </div></div><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;">

</div></div><div style="text-align:left;"><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;"><strong>1 Point:</strong></div></div><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;"> A minor cosmetic change to a worker. I'm not going to define this things exactly, but in my mind this is something small like changing the colour of what they are already wearing, maybe new gloves, maybe a hair cut but not a major change like giving Tombstone a huge blonde wig. </div></div><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;"> </div></div><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;">

</div></div><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;"><strong>2 Point:</strong></div></div><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;"> A medium cosmetic change. Again just in my mind this is something like perhaps a new tattoo, maybe a new fancy jacket? Maybe they swap from long tights (ala early Jericho) to short pants (ala later Jericho) although who knows why you'd want to do that. But you get my point, a more substantial change. </div></div><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;"> </div></div><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;">

</div></div><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;"><strong>3 Points: </strong></div></div><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;">A big cosmetic change. This is more a completely new outfit, maybe a more noticeable hair cut. Things like that. </div></div></div><p></p><p></p><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;"> </div></div><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;">

Obviously you will be welcome to request any changes and I'll let you know how many points you'll require for that, so you can decide whether to use up a point at a time or try to save up.</div></div><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;"> </div></div><p></p><div style="margin-left:25px;"><div style="margin-left:25px;">

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I'm hoping that this system still rewards my small number of regular readers, but might appeal to lurkers/new readers as you can drop in and out, and if you miss a bunch of shows it's not like you can't win the contest as you'll still have your points. </p><p> </p><p>

So although Episode 20 will still be using the old renders, the competition is starting from now, so is including Episode 20 (prediction key for that is on last page). I'll post the results to the current contest which is ending now. </p><p> </p><p>

But for now here are the new look RAW stars! There's still some tweaking for some people but these give a good idea of how people are going to look. </p><p> </p><p>

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