Babes of Sin City - Through the Looking Glass

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2nd Sunday of September 2008: The Piper Casino

Attendance:300

 

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Announcers: Honey Golightly and Sara Silver

With Special Color Commentary from Sean Wolfe

 

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Hollywood Magic

 

Hollywood Magic kicked off the show by coming down and putting on a dance for the crowd. There was really nothing else to this, although I do have to say that it is nice that all the girls get at least fairly good reactions when they get up there and dance, even if it makes me wonder why be bother putting together storylines and don't just become a strip joint at times.

{Rating: C-}

 

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Roxy Kitten vs. Paige Croft

 

This also was a strait forward match with no real story to back it, although there was a bit more of a reason for it to not have anything attached. Paige's contract was up and I wasn't sure I was going to renew it. Either way, Roxy didn't completely dominate the match, but still came out far ahead. A Backstage Pass followed by a pinfall ended everything rather quickly.

 

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While Roxy was getting up from the match, Alexis came running in and jumped on her, stripping her down to her underwear, before making off again. This bit at least some kind of storyline too it, although that didn't really seem to help very much. Alexis just didn't have ability to put on that entertaining of an attack. I was torn between giving her someone to help her and just dropping the storyline.

{Match Rating: E ~ Winner: Roxy Kitten / Striping Rating: D}

 

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Thinking about it, this entire show didn't really have that much in the way of story, except maybe for the last match. This was a simple video that showed Raven at her best, winning the title, defending it, hitting Wanda with it and everything else. I did find it a bit weird that that the crowd found watching Raven on the screen hanging above the entrance more entertaining them Britney and Sprite dancing right in front of them though.

{Rating: C}

 

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Alison Capone &

 

Alison came out just as Roxy was running back up the stage. She stepped in front of her a few times, keeping her from getting back through the entrance before stepping aside and letting her pass.

 

"You aren't even worth the time little Kitten. The only reason your merry band is still together is because I haven't bothered ripping it apart yet. I, however, do have someone here that actually is worth humiliating. Charlize, would you want to come out now?" She turned to the side and held her arms out as if introducing a model when Charlize did come out still wearing the same gag and leather outfit she had been for the last few episodes. "Now, unfortunately, this is the last night that I get my own little pet, but we're going to make the best of it, right my little Angelle?" She said, pinching Charlize's cheek. Alison had her dance all the way up to the ring and finish the tease with having Charlize giving Honey a lap dance before she let her go back up the ramp.

{Rating: C-}

 

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Battle Royal Lingerie

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Including: Alison Capone, Amy Galaxy, Coco De La Soleil, Dharma Gregg, Jen Neptune,

Kathy Neptune, Lindsay Sugar, Officer Goodhead, Vampella and Wanda Fish

 

Just as the girls were coming out for this, I stood and announced that the winner of this would get a shot at the title in a match of their choice on the up coming major show, With The Lights On Bright. That of course pretty much sealed the winner for anyone that watched most of our shows. A god bit of the fight came from The Neptune Twins and Sweet As Candy facing off. Most of the girls got ejected either by getting between them, or getting too close to Wanda. The final four came down to Wanda, Alison, Coco and Lindsay when Sweet As Candy managed to knock Jen out after Wanda tossed Kathy over the ropes. Once it was down to that, Wanda and Alison looked at each other, making a pact to take Sweet As Candy out first, which is exactly what they did. Wanda tossed out Lindsay while Alison handled Coco. Just was Alison was getting Coco over the top rope though, Wanda came running in and knocked them both out.

with Alison Capone being the final elimination.

{Rating: D- ~ Winner: Wanda Fish}

 

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Sean Wolfe

 

I stood up and congratulated Wanda on winning the match. "You've actually managed to prove yourself, although considering the competition you faced, it shouldn't have been that difficult. Either way, you'll get your match when it comes around." After a bit of back and forth I asked if she had decided on what kind of match she was going to face Raven in, but she refused to answer. The show ended with me yelling at her, telling her that she need to tell me, but her just laughing and saying I'd find out when the time was right as she walked away.

{Rating: D-}

 

{Final Rating: D-}

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We have just received two interesting bits of news from the Babes Of Sin City. The first is that BSC Original, Officer Goodhead (Janet Mayer) was just fired for an incident that happened on their last 'Sunday Sins' show. While there are conflicting reports on what actually happened (and apparently BSC booker Sean Wolfe has told the girls to keep quite about it as no one is saying anything), it is known that the incident was some kind of conflict between Charlize Angelle and Janet, and Charlize is apparently very glad to see her gone. On a related note, Sean has also announced that they will be once again stopping their 'Sunday Sins' shows for the time being citing financial reasons. While unconfirmed, rumor is that he is planing to set 'Sunday Sins' as a tour with one month on and one off.

 

{OOC: I've fired Goodhead for the incident, and now Charlize is loyal to me. Oh and I have removed Sunday Sins for now and am planning to use a one month on one off cycle for it from now on. As always, thoughts and comments are welcomed and encourage.}

[The Final Countdown]

On a related note, Sean has also announced that they will be once again stopping their 'Sunday Sins' shows for the time being citing financial reasons. While uncomfortable rumor is that he is planing to set 'Sunday Sins' as a tour with one month on and one off.

I'm assuming you meant "unconfirmed"? (Not trying to nitpick; not a major mistake or anything. I only pointed it out because you've asked for feedback, both positive and negative, and I figure this could fall into that category.)

 

Wise decision to fire Goodhead. She's not worth keeping around if she's going to cause trouble. Plus, having Loyalty from one of your bigger stars doesn't hurt.

[Remianen]

God, why couldn't it have been Dharma that was Goodhead's target? Now there's a worker you'd want loyal to you!

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@ The Final Countdown: What... I see not mistake there... you're trying to sabotage my show! Heathen! ... (But no seriously, thanks.) I was probably going to end up firing Goodhead anyways too, but just hadn't gotten around too it (and her contract was more than a year off). Even though she had great chem with Sprite and Good chem with Lindsay, it just wasn't enough to make up for her C in looks and no other redeeming qualities.

 

@ Remianen: Yea Wanda/Dharma would have been better, but it also could have been worst. She could have picked a fight with Amy Galaxy or Nurse Hope Daye, or worst of all, Paige Croft, and I wouldn't have gotten anything from the loyalty (cause I've pretty much decided that Paige is gone. She isn't in any story or anything else, so at the end of the next show... poof. Not even a news article.)

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Honey Golightly & Sean Wolfe

Not Present but Important:

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Sprite

 

"Sean, thanks for coming." It was not as though I really had a choice, but I took the seat she indicated none the less. "You've been taking the company in new and great directions, but I want to make it clear that I still own the BSC. While I cannot thank you for all the work you've put in, I still have my own idea's of how things should be done. And I've been talking to Wanda, Raven and Sara and we've all thought that there is someone that could really use some pushing to get her to become one of the main stars of the BSC. Sprite. Now let me be clear, while it dosn't have to happen right away, I want Sprite to have some solid momentum with her for the next months to a year or two." I just nodded stood and left without a word.

 

{New Relationship: Sprite has a Strong Friendship with Honey Golightly. ~ New Owner Goal: Sprite must have reached at least C+ grade momentum when the time expires: 17 months 3 weeks: High Importance ~ And lets not forget that she is #1 on my Hot Prospects chart}

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4th Friday of September 2008: The Piper Casino

Attendance:300

 

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Hard Candy: Roxy Kitten & Sweet as Candy

 

This was an expected normal opening to the show. Hard Candy came out and put on a dance for the crowd. As Roxy was getting to be our most popular BSC original and both Coco and Lindsay played side kicks to her, she got most of the attention. Overall it was a decent bit to get the crowd ready.

{Rating: C-}

 

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Alison Capone

 

Once the dance was over and Sweet As Candy was leaving, Roxy got a mic and rolled back into the ring. She did a bit of hyping, announcing that in addition to the the main event of Wanda vs. Raven for the Queen Of The Ring championship, Dharma would be going against Paige right before it. Also, in just a moment, Sprite would be facing off against Nurse Hope Daye.

 

Roxy then got serious, saying, "But before that, I have something to say. Alison, you might want to come out here and listen to this." Roxy waited for Alison to come out and pose a little before continuing. "Alison, you think you own this place, but you're wrong. You've gotten shots at the title, and came out well in things like the Battle Royal we had a few weeks ago. But every time it comes down to the line and you have an important match, you choke. You think that one win over me, considering all the times I have beaten you, makes you better than me? You think you can just attack me whenever you want to try and prove a point? Well let me tell you, you're wrong. No matter what, I'm better than you, and I plan to prove that tonight."

 

Alison then pulled out her mic and said a few words back. There were some back and forth insults before they finally agreed to have a match later that night.

{Rating: D}

 

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Sprite vs. Nurse Hope Daye

 

I picked this match because I needed to start putting Sprite on a bit more and giving her some wins, so to start out I put her in a match with someone she had good chemistry with, Hope. Sprite of course pinned Hope at the end, but the match itself was fairly even.

{Rating: E+ ~ Winner: Sprite}

 

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(Video)

 

I was planning on having the twins come out and put on an actual dance, but, for some reason, seemed to forget to tell them, so Charlize threw together some footage to hype them and their win over Sweet As Candy for the titles. It was actually pretty well done too.

{Rating: C- (I have both a hype angle with two girls on and off the air named the almost the same thing, I accidentally chose the wrong one.}

 

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Wanda Fish

 

This was a solid, if somewhat unusual, bit for BSC, which is probably part of the reason it wasn't received all too well. Wanda came out and basically went off on Raven, saying how she didn't deserve the title and how she just couldn't beat Wanda. She ended it with an exasperate sigh before saying that it was her job to call out Alison and Roxy for their match.

{Rating: D-}

 

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Alison Capone vs. Roxy Kitten

 

While a fairly good match for BSC, the actual execution of the match was less than great. There were a few points where the match just drifted around. At just past the eight and a half minute mark, Alison whipped Roxy into the ropes then tried to clothesline her, only for Roxy to slide out of the ring. Taking a moment to stand up, Roxy turned only to see Alison taking a flying leap over the top rope at her. The wrestled a bit outside the ring before Alison again whipped Roxy, except this time it was into the ring itself. She then got someone to stand up, took their chair and nailed Roxy with it.

{Match Rating: D- ~ Winner: Roxy Kitten by DQ}

 

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Just as Alison was hitting Roxy with the chair again, Charlize came running out. Alison tried to run, but was cut short by Vampella who knocked her down and rolled her into the ring. Charlize grabbed a mic and started yelling about how Alison had been treating her before both Charlize and Vampella got to stripping Alison. Once they had her top off, though, Alexis came running in. Charlize and Vampella bailed and Alison started to get up, seeming to move closer to Alexis, as if wondering why she was there. Alexis then turned to her, knocked her down, and finished the job Charlize and Vampella had started before getting out of there herself.

{Stripping Rating: D}

 

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Dharma Gregg vs. Paige Croft

In a Bra & Panties match

 

For anyone paying actual attention to the BSC (all five of them) the outcome of this match was obvious from the beginning. Dharma ruled most of the match, and pinned Paige to pick up the win. Paige just rolled out of the ring and Dharma put on a strip tease to get the crowd hyped back up a bit.

{Match Rating: E ~ Winner: Dharma Gregg / Stripping Rating: C-}

 

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Wanda Fish vs.

For the BSC Queen Of The Ring Championship

 

This was a great match for BSC, but as a one on one between Raven and Wanda, that was pretty expected. Both got their near falls and their big hits before we passed the nine minute mark and had to wrap things up. Raven whipped Wanda into a turnbuckle and in one smooth motion climbed to the top and threw Wanda down to the mat. She paused a moment before leaping out into a moonsault, only to have Wanda roll out of the way. Wanda then got up, hit Raven with the Dish Of The Day, and pinned her. Wanda then put on a good upbeat celebration as I helped Raven out of the ring and back up the ramp. In the end, I'm pretty sure that match between them had a lot to do with how well the show actually did.

{Match Rating: C- ~ Winner: Wanda Fish / Celebration Rating: C}

 

{Final Rating: D+}

[Reaper_ofall]

Okay... Honestly, I think I see at least one reason there aren't a lot of sustained BSC Dairys. There isn't a whole lot that can be done with it without straying too far out of the formula. Now, I want to keep doing a diary, but I don't think I'm going to be able to keep up a BSC Diary. However, my last show (not yet up) jumped me to High Reputation, so I've been thinking, maybe it would be best to just jump ship and open my own promotion... (Currently I am mostly considering making a performance promotion with a women's division/possibly integrated women's.) That means, however, that I'll been needing belts (I can do without a promo icon, as I'll never post it, but I do use the belts images). I have noticed that there are a handful of unused belts in the default data (Particularly the NEW belts). Are those open for use, or where they made specifically for some other diary, or what?

[Reaper_ofall]

I had this typed, but when I closed FFox, it disappeared (it normally shows back up).

 

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4th Friday of October 2008: The Snake Pit

Attendance:587

 

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Wanda Fish & Roxy Kitten

 

 

Wanda came down to the ring and strutted around with her title for a bit. After a few moments, she introduced

,

and Hollywood Magic, letting each team come down to the ring before she announced the opening match of a three vs. three with the main tag teams of the division facing their partners and teaming with their enemies. Just as she was about to get them all up into the ring though, Roxy stepped out and immediately demanded a title match, citing her recent wins over Paige, and Alison Capone. While the entire argument was fairly good, it was less than captivating because it wasn't as though anyone actually believed that Roxy was going to actually win in the end. She still got the match though.

{Rating: D+}

 

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Jen Neptune, Coco De La Soleil & Sprite vs. Kathy Neptune, Lindsay Sugar & Britney Hollywood

 

This match was actually my favorite for the night. The girls put on a great show of hating each other, but still having to work together to win. Kathy and Lindsay even spent a bit of the match fighting outside the ring will Kathy worked over Britney. The end came quickly when Coco reached over and managed to tag herself in by slapping Kathy's back. There was a moment as the started at each other and Britney tried to make it back to her corner, but was stopped by Coco pulling her up and hitting her with a suplex. Jen and Lindsay looked over and forgot their quarrel to jump into the ring as Kathy leapt over Coco to Jen and Lindsay them from stopping the pin. Hollywood magic bailed from the ring right away, but the four left got real close and were shouting at not only the other team, but their own teammates as well. Heather got in between then and after a moment they pulled apart, Sweet As Candy heading back up the ramp and The Neptune Twins fetching their titles from the announcers' table before following.

{Rating: D- ~ Winner: Jen Neptune, Coco De La Soleil & Sprite}

 

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Dharma Gregg vs.

in a Bra & Panties match

 

The next match and its surrounding parts were a bit more drawn out then I liked but considering how well the entire thing did compared to what I thought it was going to be, I can't really complain. We started it off with Dharma coming out to dance in her normal 'girl-next-door' tight jeans and top to warm the crowd back up a little. After a few minutes she rolled out of the ring and grabbed a mic and called Alexis out. After a moment of waiting Alexis did come out, and walked all the way down to face her. Dharma then accused her of being a coward with her attacks and challenged her to a match right then and there. She then added that because Alexis had a habit of stripping the girls she attacked, it would only be fair for them to face off in a bra and panties match. Alexis didn't even both answering, but instead just kicked Dharma in the gut and rolled her into the ring.

 

The match itself is what really caught my attention though. People seemed to actually be into it, as Alexis and Dharma rolled back and forth in the ring. Dharma, still fully dressed, managed to toss Alexis into the ropes and rolled her up, pulling on all the little bits and pieces of her outfit before she managed to pull both strips of leather, her top and bottom, off, to show that she only wore some tightly wound bandaged over her breasts and a thong under her outfit. Dharma then rolled her out of the ring and started celebrating, but Alexis wasn't quite done and jumped back in, hitting Dharma from the back and stripping her. This was the point where I went from thinking that Alexis had very little in the ability to act, to realizing that she really had no acting ability whatsoever. The fact that it was with Dharma was probably her only saving grace. After stripping Dharma, Alexis ran from the ring once again.

Dharma comes out and dances / Dharma then challenges Alexis to a match / Dharma beats Alexis / Alexis strips Dharma (Had no really ability at acting)

{Dancing Rating: C- / Challenge Rating: D / Match Rating: D+ ~ Winner: Dharma Gregg / Stripping Rating: D+}

 

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vs.

 

Raven and I came out first and started right in on hyping the match she was going to have against Nadia. As I though the last few segments were going to do a lot worst, I decided that we should try to really pick up the show with this, but as it was already so good, it probably did little to help. After a final jab at Wanda, saying how we were going to take back the title the second we got a shot at it, Nadia came out. There were no real surprises in this match, and while Nadia was doing good and part of our main event scene, Raven was just far beyond her, unless it was part of the storyline, no one really expected her to win. So after some rolling around, Raven hit Nadia with a Night Faller and pinned her.

{Hype Rating: C / Match Rating: D+ ~ Winner: Raven Nightfall}

 

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Wanda Fish vs. Roxy Kitten

 

This was a good match, although, like most of the show, it was mostly an exhibition with an obvious ending the whole way down. However, something did happen backstage. Alison hadn't come in by the time we started the show, so I had written it off as a broken down car or something, although I was pretty annoyed that she didn't at least call or something. However, at about the seven minute mark, she showed up. She didn't give an explanation of why she was late or anything, just said that she was sorry. After a few expletives I told her that if she was late again, I was firing her, then told Raven to hold up on her run in on Wanda.

{Match Rating: C- ~ Winner: Wanda Fish}

 

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Alison Capone &

 

Alison got quick dressed and came running out just as Wanda hit the Dish Of The Day and pinned Roxy. Wanda backed up as Alison slid into the ring, grabbing her title to defend herself, but instead of Wanda, Alison went after Roxy, stripping her down to a pair of torn bra and panties. She then started yelling about how Roxy was trying to hold her win over Alison as some real victory, when all she did was get hit by a chair.

 

However, just as she was starting in on her rant, Charlize same running out, while Sienna stayed at the top of the ring, accusing Alison of being weak and worthless as she had to humiliate Charlize just to get a chance at anything. Charlize stripped Alison, and while Roxy didn't help, she did keep Alison in the ring until Charlize could get there, and then bailed. After stripping her and tossing her around a bit, Charlize finally left and was quickly followed by Alison.

{First Stripping Rating: D / Second Stripping Rating: D+}

 

{Final Rating: D+}

[Self]

Okay... Honestly, I think I see at least one reason there aren't a lot of sustained BSC Dairys. There isn't a whole lot that can be done with it without straying too far out of the formula. Now, I want to keep doing a diary, but I don't think I'm going to be able to keep up a BSC Diary. However, my last show (not yet up) jumped me to High Reputation, so I've been thinking, maybe it would be best to just jump ship and open my own promotion... (Currently I am mostly considering making a performance promotion with a women's division/possibly integrated women's.) That means, however, that I'll been needing belts (I can do without a promo icon, as I'll never post it, but I do use the belts images). I have noticed that there are a handful of unused belts in the default data (Particularly the NEW belts). Are those open for use, or where they made specifically for some other diary, or what?

 

Meant to reply to this but it slipped my mind.

 

For any diary to go a decent length of time, there has to be an aim, a goal beyond "booking" that the readership can follow and root for. It could be getting your promotion to National by any means necessary. It could be raising your finances to a certain amount. Or, like my diary, it could be more kayfabe, with the actual in-ring storylines taking center stage. If you don't have a long term goal when you begin, it's very easy to get bored and want to move on.

 

If you're going to continue with BSC, you'll need to figure out your goal. What do you want to accomplish with the promotion? What do you want the readers to be rooting for? Tell that story. If you've got a finish line in sight, you'll be much more inclined to take every single little step towards it.

 

How many shows have you done thus far? You're putting them out pretty quick. It would shock me if you were closing in on the number I've done for my diary, and I've been running since February.

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Meant to reply to this but it slipped my mind.

 

For any diary to go a decent length of time, there has to be an aim, a goal beyond "booking" that the readership can follow and root for. It could be getting your promotion to National by any means necessary. It could be raising your finances to a certain amount. Or, like my diary, it could be more kayfabe, with the actual in-ring storylines taking center stage. If you don't have a long term goal when you begin, it's very easy to get bored and want to move on.

 

If you're going to continue with BSC, you'll need to figure out your goal. What do you want to accomplish with the promotion? What do you want the readers to be rooting for? Tell that story. If you've got a finish line in sight, you'll be much more inclined to take every single little step towards it.

 

How many shows have you done thus far? You're putting them out pretty quick. It would shock me if you were closing in on the number I've done for my diary, and I've been running since February.

 

Well that was pretty much my problem. I didn't really have a goal, and I'm not into wrestling itself enough to really pull a Kayfabe diary (that would completely bore me to write, even though I do like reading them). I just sort of jumped in and made it up as I went along. The reason I started was because I love writing, but it normally takes me forever to get something down, and I always change it around until I just don't like it anymore, so I thought 'hey, I see all these diaries, why can't I do that? I can't change things after I've written them because everyone would have already read it and I have a reason to get everything down and out there all the time, so it should help to teach me some discipline in my writing.'

 

But the problem is that was my only goal, which is why I've been thinking of making a jump to anouther diary. (If I do, it will be a continuation of this one, but with an actual goal in mind rather than, 'hey BSC isn't normally done that much, why don't I do that?' Probably as mentioned before, just jump to anouther promotion).

 

(My number of shows is 26 in 10 months, although that would be a mix of one hour small and 1 1/2 hour medium shows.)

 

Thinking about it, I'm pretty sure I want to jump to anouther diary. This just isn't holding my attention. My goal was probably able to be only really be defined as 'lets get as high as we can' and I just find booking BSC to be repetitive and work rather than fun now.

 

Which brings me back to my original question: are the Titles in the default data labeled NEW_American/HighImpact/Tag/Undisputed/Vixen able to be used, and if not, who can I ask for renders (I've looked around and the only one I've seen is ReapeR who has his requests closed.) Also, should I make a new thread for it, or just alter this one?

[Self]

Well that was pretty much my problem. I didn't really have a goal, and I'm not into wrestling itself enough to really pull a Kayfabe diary (that would completely bore me to write, even though I do like reading them). I just sort of jumped in and made it up as I went along. The reason I started was because I love writing, but it normally takes me forever to get something down, and I always change it around until I just don't like it anymore, so I thought 'hey, I see all these diaries, why can't I do that? I can't change things after I've written them because everyone would have already read it and I have a reason to get everything down and out there all the time, so it should help to teach me some discipline in my writing.'

 

I'm much the same way. I'm always working on ideas for movies or tv pilots or erotic novels but without a strict deadline to work to, nothing ever gets done. By having to post a show every 7 days, it keeps me focused, sharp, motivated and smoothes out any perfectionist tendencies.

 

(My number of shows is 26 in 10 months, although that would be a mix of one hour small and 1 1/2 hour medium shows.)

 

I just posted episode 22 of mine today, so in that respect this diary has ran about as long as mine.

 

Which brings me back to my original question: are the Titles in the default data labeled NEW_American/HighImpact/Tag/Undisputed/Vixen able to be used, and if not, who can I ask for renders (I've looked around and the only one I've seen is ReapeR who has his requests closed.) Also, should I make a new thread for it, or just alter this one?

 

If it's in the default data, you can use it. That's what I've always gone by.

[ampulator]

Here's how I feel about changing the product. First, I can't see Babes of City being a male promotion at all. Second, an element of Risque and T&A seems to BSC's trademarks. You weaken them, but they should be (my own opinion) always be there to a certain extent.

 

Otherwise... you can change it, as long it makes sense.

[Reaper_ofall]

You know what... I don't know if anyone else has done this, (and I know it flies in the face of what I just said) but I'm just going to start a second diary and work on both of them. I don't want to give up on this, but I also want something with a bit more freedom, so I'm just going to do it. (Show is being written then I'm going to write the intro to the other one later today or tomorrow).

 

@Self: While I have the same number of shows, mine are nowhere near yours in quality or length though, I'd probably have to have 2-3 times the number of shows before that's even really close to the same in terms of effort.

[The Final Countdown]

You know what... I don't know if anyone else has done this, (and I know it flies in the face of what I just said) but I'm just going to start a second diary and work on both of them. I don't want to give up on this, but I also want something with a bit more freedom, so I'm just going to do it. (Show is being written then I'm going to write the intro to the other one later today or tomorrow).

 

@Self: While I have the same number of shows, mine are nowhere near yours in quality or length though, I'd probably have to have 2-3 times the number of shows before that's even really close to the same in terms of effort.

It's been done; I've definitely seen people have more than one ongoing diary. Heck, I may do it myself once TEW2010 comes out, because I don't want to halt my ongoing ROH diary, but I don't think I want to take all the time to convert my data to 2010, either. If you want to try something else out, but you're not ready to throw in the towel on this yet, I say go for it. I'll definitely continue to follow this diary as long as it's running, and I'll be sure to check out your new one as well. Good luck with the juggling act .

[Zeel1]

You know what... I don't know if anyone else has done this, (and I know it flies in the face of what I just said) but I'm just going to start a second diary and work on both of them. I don't want to give up on this, but I also want something with a bit more freedom, so I'm just going to do it. (Show is being written then I'm going to write the intro to the other one later today or tomorrow).

 

@Self: While I have the same number of shows, mine are nowhere near yours in quality or length though, I'd probably have to have 2-3 times the number of shows before that's even really close to the same in terms of effort.

 

Oh, it's been tried quite commonly. Just not suceeded at most of the time..myself, I've actually considered doing a less time-consuming diary on the side, but decided against it, as it would likely end up being neglected if I did it alongside Total Control.

 

If it's the way you want to go, though, I won't try to discourage you. Good luck with whatever you plan on doing alongside this.

[BigRed0427]

I think I want to give a BSC Diary a chance. Ive always been alittle hesitant to do it because I though many here would think that a diary about a promotion like BSC would be considered creepy.

 

Seeing this though, I definetly want to give it a try.

[Reaper_ofall]

FYI: The names of the worker's are links to their intro song.

 

http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/3156/bscplayhard.jpg

4th Friday of November 2008: The Snake Pit

Attendance: 759

 

http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/7313/vampella.jpg (w/http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/8554/siennadeville.jpg) vs. http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/1817/nursehopedaye.jpg

Vampella w/Sienna DeVille vs. Nurse Hope Daye

 

We opened with a decent match, although I have to wonder what would have happened if we had instead had opened with something to spice it up. It doesn't really matter in the end though, as the match was still pretty good. Vampella came out, looking to open the show with Sienna, but after getting in the ring, was instead cut off by Nurse Hope's entrance. I do have to wonder about out choice of music for Hope though. It was pretty far into the 'tech' side of 'techno', but it was the best I could find. But I guess that didn't really matter either. In the end, Hope picked up the win over Vampella with a quick pinfall. Vampella then cleared the ring for Nurse Hope to put on a dance for the crowd. It was all in all, a pretty good showing from two of the girls stuck at the bottom of the roster.

{Rating: E+ ~ Winner: Nurse Hope Daye / Dancing Rating: D+}

 

http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/4206/bscgirlpower.jpghttp://img14.imageshack.us/img14/4206/bscgirlpower.jpg

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/1162/jenneptune.jpghttp://img190.imageshack.us/img190/2228/kathyneptune.jpg vs. http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/5776/cocodelasoleilalt.jpghttp://img16.imageshack.us/img16/1207/lindsaysugaralt.jpg

vs.

In a Bra & Panties match

For the Girl Power Tag Team Titles

 

The Neptune Twins came out to really open the show, going on a bit about how they were excited to be putting on matches for the Babes of Sin City, and how they really loved working for Honey and were going to do everything to defend the honor of the titles. Just as they were about to start adding more, Sweet As Candy came out. Their insults and tearing down of Jen and Kathy just didn't do as well as I thought they would. I don't know whether it was because they were coming out and insulting the twins while still trying to appear as faces, or whether it was because they kept on about how Roxy could take on both of the twins (as their gimmick was supposed to be that they were pretty much sidekicks of Roxy) or what the problem was, but I just thought the segment was going to do a lot better.

 

They finally just climbed in the ring though, demanding not only a match, but a bra and panties match for the BSC tag team championships. Kathy tried to oppose it, dodging the question when Jen asked her why, but eventually caved in and whispered to Jen (right into the mic of course) that she wasn't wearing anything underneath her jeans and top. Just as she was saying that though, Lindsay made a crack about 'twincest' and Kathy snapped and forgot about protesting the match leaping right at her. Heather jumping into the ring to start the match and that was all the agreement that was needed. About five minutes into the match, Coco managed to flip Jen into the ropes and ripped off her clothes. She also grabbed her bra and ripped the back of that off too, forcing Jen to run back up the ring with her arms covering her, leaving Kathy all alone.

 

Kathy jumped right after Coco and cleared her out of the ring after that though. While Coco was trying to get back in Kathy turned to Lindsay and stripped her quickly, ripping her panties so that she also had to run from the match. That just left Kathy and Coco. After anouther five minutes, Coco managed to roll up Kathy and pull her pants down a bit, revealing that, just as she said, Kathy wasn't wearing anything under her jeans. However, she kept rolling, keeping Coco from completely stripping her. She then tossed Coco into the ropes, and to the crowds dismay, stripped her down to her underwear. Coco ran out of the ring as Kathy tossed the clothes around the ring into the crowd before grabbing the titles and leaving.

{Challenge Rating: D- / Match Rating: E+ ~ Winner: The Neptune Twins}

 

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/8403/dharmagreggalt08.jpghttp://img34.imageshack.us/img34/4885/alexisleelittlefeathera.jpghttp://img11.imageshack.us/img11/7025/britneyhollywood.jpghttp://img188.imageshack.us/img188/1060/spriteb.jpg

&

& Hollywood Magic

 

I do have to mention that I am really glad we finally chose a song for Dharma, rather than recycling the dead beats that Honey had used years ago when BSC first came out. Dharma came out to her new song and put on a good show for the crowd, dancing around and teasing everyone. As her dancing came to a close though, Alexis came running out. However, just as Alexis reached the ring, Britney and Sprite came running down too. When Alexis turned around around to see what was happening, Dharma jumped her from behind and the three of them stripped Alexis. Dharma then danced her around the ring a bit before finally letting her go. I have to say that I was actually disappointed in how bad the segment did. I don't even really know why they didn't like it. Dharma did give a short thing about how Alexis should watch out though, as Dharma and Hollywood Magic were going to keep her from terrorizing the girls anymore.

{Dancing Rating: C- / Stripping Rating: D}

 

http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/9383/nadiasnow.jpg vs. http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/4978/alisoncaponealt4.jpg

vs. Alison Capone

 

This match, for some reason, actually went over very well. Alison came down and was taking off her coat when Nadia came stripping down the aisle. She didn't try to get her a fair chance, but just went right after Alison. The comeback was quick after the coat was gone though, and the match really went back and forth. The end was a pretty nice change though. While I had a tendency too book matches to end with a simple pin then build the story around that, Instead I went with an old standby of wrestling...

 

http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/2489/charlizeangelle.jpg (w/http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/8554/siennadeville.jpg)

 

...and had Charlize come running in as Nadia tossed Alison from the ring. Nadia then kept Heather's attention as Charlize worked over Alison outside the ring before throwing her back in. Nadia then hit the Snow Ball and pinned Alison. Charlize, however, didn't stick around for all of that, and instead headed back up the ramp as soon as she had rolled Alison into the ring. Nadia then got up and looked around, as if wondering where Charlize was before...

{Rating: D ~ Winner: Nadia Snow}

 

http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/5072/roxykittenalt3.jpghttp://img198.imageshack.us/img198/5776/cocodelasoleilalt.jpghttp://img16.imageshack.us/img16/1207/lindsaysugaralt.jpg

Hard Candy

 

Rock You Like A Hurricane hit and the whole Hard Candy stable came running down to strip Alison down to her underwear. This has to be the segment that confused me more than anything else. I really thought this was good. In the end though, the crowd didn't like it and I was sure it was going to drag down the rest of the show. Roxy did yell some things about how Alison shouldn't be trying to take on both her and Charlize at the same tight though, and was going to have troubles since she decided to turn everyone against her.

{Rating: E+}

 

http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/5072/roxykittenalt3.jpg vs. http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/8443/ravennightfall.jpg (w/http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/6682/jackavatarc.jpg)

Roxy Kitten vs.

 

Thankfully, however, my fears about the last segment dragging things down were unfounded. Raven and Roxy put on a good match, that, while by no great marvel, put the entire show right over the top. Not only that, Roxy had twisted her ankle a bit before the show and it threw her completely off her game. Although with Roxy, it was pretty hit or miss when it came down to how good she was going to do. In the end Raven hit the Night Faller and pinned Roxy, just as everyone expected. Raven then hit her with it again and stripped Roxy down, showing her off for the crowd. It mostly because I was thinking that Raven wasn't really acting like a heel, so I needed to inject a little random violence in her before I could really consider her one. And with that we ended the show.

{Match Rating: D ~ Winner: Raven Nightfall / Stripping Rating: C}

 

{Final Rating: D}

 

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http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/4978/alisoncaponealt4.jpg

 

I stepped out the back for a smoke when I Coco came to the door. That in itself wouldn't have been that strange, as she always came to find me after the she showered with most of the girls after the show. What was strange was that for some reason she decided to come and find me right after the shower. Not only did she not dry off, she didn't even wrap a towel around her. As soon as I stepped in she explained what happened and I went strait for the little rec room we had set up.

 

"F*ck it Alison!" I yelled as soon as I saw her. "Where the h*ll are the girl's towels and clothes!?" She jumped up, startled and just pointed to a small pile of things, which Coco, still dripping from her shower, which admittedly made it very hard, to tell off Alison. I just yelled a bit, careful to stay away from the 'fired' word, along with anything that could really indicate it was her last chance. I was already pissed and didn't want to say anything that would completely shut her down.

 

"Fine. It was just a prank though, I can't believe everyone is taking it so seriously." She said when I finished. I just let her brush past me and leave. I decided to start looking for anouther worker, just in case.

 

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{I just have to say thank you for all the support guys. Seriously, if anything, I have to say the community here is probably the single best thing about playing TEW.

 

{@BigRed: I think it's all about how you go about it, and particularly depends on whether you go full kayfabe or not. If you do go full kayfabe, you can probably get a little bit more... out there. However, if you, like me, don't do heavy kayfabe, having to 'much' can probably make it more creepy than anything else. I think as long as you don't go too heavy into something like describing every girls pair of panties, the fact that you sound like you don't want to cross that line is probably enough to make sure that you don't}

[Self]

I think I want to give a BSC Diary a chance. Ive always been alittle hesitant to do it because I though many here would think that a diary about a promotion like BSC would be considered creepy.

 

Seeing this though, I definetly want to give it a try.

 

I have a Women's division in my diary, and initially I was going for the BSC-risque product with it. Mud-Wrestling. Bra & Panties. Nudity on PPV. The division quickly evolved to have a more wrestling-orientated flavour, but in the early goings it was purely intended to be unapologetic eye candy.

 

I bring this up because I did get one complaint... well, less of a complaint, more of a misgiving, about the Risque element. If I recall correctly they thought it came off as childish. We discussed the issue for a while and came to an understanding... but the point is that the Product didn't come across as I intended. There's a line between immature wish-fulfillment and meaningfully presenting your product, and that line is blurry.

 

It's a product that isn't going to appeal to everyone. Not in TEW. Not in a diary. Whenever you're dealing with issues of Sexuality or Race or Religion or even Swearing, everyone's opinions are different, and you're going to alienate someone. That's what you've got to consider.