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Oh well the only way is up. In a TEW 2016 save JT Ace proved to be a grade one A-hole and I wondered if he would be the same in this diary <img alt=":)" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/smile.png.142cfa0a1cd2925c0463c1d00f499df2.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" />
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Overall, really enjoyed this episode. Probably your best one yet, and that's saying something :)

 

Thank you! I think that's one of the fun things about RAW...

 

Normally when I'm booking, I'd be always focused on the PPV, yeah you might put some big matches on TV every so often, or even do it a lot. But you're always working towards the PPV. And in the grand scheme of things even the PPVs in some way are all working towards a big Wrestlemania style show.

 

But with none of that to think about, it forces me to make sure each show is good. I can't just think oh this is a throwaway week just to hype up the week after or anything like that. Now that's not to say that every single week I'll be able to actually provide a good show! That's another matter. But at least it won't be for a lack of trying!

 

Oh well the only way is up. In a TEW 2016 save JT Ace proved to be a grade one A-hole and I wondered if he would be the same in this diary :)

 

Well technically there's always the chance you'll get 0 next but let's not consider that possibility!

 

For me JT used his powers to thaw Gladiator out of a block of ice. So he's firmly in my good books for that, but I'm pretty sure he can play a heel in game so I'd definitely never say never.

 

Haha that was a lot of fun... I’m loving this series!

 

Thanks for following along!

 

 

I suppose now is as good a time as any to ask hows the format? I'm definitely sticking with the whole PDF thing, I know in some ways people might prefer it to be just posted on here, but I find it a fair bit faster for me. But I more mean like is the font ok? Can people always read everything? I know sometimes with the backgrounds perhaps the writing is a little less clear?

 

But basically if anyone has any issues or tips for things I could/should change and improve then I'd always appreciate them!

 

 

 

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Episode 5

 

Main Event

Swoop McCarthy vs Luke Steele

 

Nicky Gilbert vs Manhunter

 

2 fan favourites are in action including the return of Nicky Gilbert. But there's more!

 

Loxley Robbins is set to be interviewed by The Masterminds, in order to try and clear his name. Is he telling the truth that he didn't tamper with the shampoo?

 

What roster member will take a look at the Tag Team Speed Dating flyer this week? Skyscraper, Rod Sullivan, Spiffy Stan Standish, Montgomery Croft, Big Mac, Will Beaumont or Tye Liberteen?

 

The team formerly known as The Brat Pack (Artemis and Thurston) will return to RAW, but what will their gimmick be? Dentists, Dietitians, Detectives, Decorators or Database Administrators?

 

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Main Event

Swoop McCarthy vs Luke Steele

It's Swoop!!

 

Nicky Gilbert vs Manhunter

This one is a LOT tougher to call... But I'll give it to Ken

 

2 fan favourites are in action including the return of Nicky Gilbert. But there's more!

 

Loxley Robbins is set to be interviewed by The Masterminds, in order to try and clear his name. Is he telling the truth that he didn't tamper with the shampoo? I know this one, I shouldn't really predict but I enjoy it so damn much!!

 

What roster member will take a look at the Tag Team Speed Dating flyer this week? Skyscraper, Rod Sullivan, Spiffy Stan Standish, Montgomery Croft, Big Mac, Will Beaumont or Tye Liberteen? It was Manhunter last week wasn't it? So maybe Tye?

 

The team formerly known as The Brat Pack (Artemis and Thurston) will return to RAW, but what will their gimmick be? Dentists, Dietitians, Detectives, Decorators or Database Administrators? Haha!! All of those would be great!! I'll go with Detectives...

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Thank you! I think that's one of the fun things about RAW...

 

Normally when I'm booking, I'd be always focused on the PPV, yeah you might put some big matches on TV every so often, or even do it a lot. But you're always working towards the PPV. And in the grand scheme of things even the PPVs in some way are all working towards a big Wrestlemania style show.

 

But with none of that to think about, it forces me to make sure each show is good. I can't just think oh this is a throwaway week just to hype up the week after or anything like that. Now that's not to say that every single week I'll be able to actually provide a good show! That's another matter. But at least it won't be for a lack of trying!

Yeah, that’s what I’ve really enjoyed about booking RAW this time around too, the weekly episode format. In previous games I’d add the monthly event and switch back to the “traditional” weekly tv show building to a PPV schedule, but this time around I stuck with weekly tv, meaning every show is as important as the last, and you really can book week to week.

 

That, and the new product settings really make it feel different to other games. I’m just starting a WWE 2004 save and it already feels COMPLETELY different...

 

I suppose now is as good a time as any to ask hows the format? I'm definitely sticking with the whole PDF thing, I know in some ways people might prefer it to be just posted on here, but I find it a fair bit faster for me. But I more mean like is the font ok? Can people always read everything? I know sometimes with the backgrounds perhaps the writing is a little less clear?

The format is absolutely BRILLIANT. I genuinely love it, from the layout to the pace, to the writing style... it really feels like an episode of RAW (well, how I’d imagine it anyway!).

 

It’s so good, in fact, that if I’m ever tempted to start another diary with this game (I’m thinking a January 1998 WWF save?) I might be tempted to hit you up for some ideas?

 

 

Main Event

Swoop McCarthy vs Luke Steele

 

Nicky Gilbert vs Manhunter

 

Loxley Robbins is set to be interviewed by The Masterminds, in order to try and clear his name. Is he telling the truth that he didn't tamper with the shampoo? I think so. I think someone else did with a bone to pick with Belushi (Rick Stantz perhaps?)

 

What roster member will take a look at the Tag Team Speed Dating flyer this week? Spiffy Stan Standish

 

The team formerly known as The Brat Pack (Artemis and Thurston) will return to RAW, but what will their gimmick be? Detectives

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I am so excited for Tag-Team speed dating. What the hell happened with Tombstone. The bloke is a monster, and he lost to LYNX! Travesty.Frogue once again looking like a Chump.

 

Main Event

Swoop McCarthy vs Luke Steele

 

Swoop was afraid of Luke so a clear sign he is a star and should get a win after some shenanigans.

 

Nicky Gilbert vs Manhunter

 

Gilberts future is becoming more clear.

 

2 fan favourites are in action including the return of Nicky Gilbert. But there's more!

 

Loxley Robbins is set to be interviewed by The Masterminds, in order to try and clear his name. Is he telling the truth that he didn't tamper with the shampoo?

 

He is being framed by the men interviewing him. Also genuinely made me laugh that Blake is panning for cash because he only has enough for Economy at this stage.

 

What roster member will take a look at the Tag Team Speed Dating flyer this week? Skyscraper, Rod Sullivan, Spiffy Stan Standish, Montgomery Croft, Big Mac, Will Beaumont or Tye Liberteen?

 

The rest are involved in things. Unless its a twist and really Skyscraper so The RAW Giants get back together.

 

The team formerly known as The Brat Pack (Artemis and Thurston) will return to RAW, but what will their gimmick be? Dentists, Dietitians, Detectives, Decorators or Database Administrators?

 

Theyre nerds, computer nerds.

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It’s so good, in fact, that if I’m ever tempted to start another diary with this game (I’m thinking a January 1998 WWF save?) I might be tempted to hit you up for some ideas?

 

Definitely feel free. Early 1998 would be in interesting time too. I assume Tyson would be in the mod and I think he's just about to turn up. Triple H's DX hasn't started yet. And Rock still in NoD.

 

I am so excited for Tag-Team speed dating. What the hell happened with Tombstone. The bloke is a monster, and he lost to LYNX! Travesty.Frogue once again looking like a Chump.

 

Me too to be honest! I knew I wanted to do something as there's a few teams I want to/have split up so I need replacements. It was going to just happen naturally but I thought this way fits RAW more.

 

I knew Tombstone's booking wouldn't go down well with everyone, Lynx is actually as popular as him so it's not too weird, but yeah in my mind Tombstone is the bigger star. I wouldn't worry though he's moving on to other things.

 

 

Episode 5 coming in next few hours.

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Oh man, that line about Rod Sullivan's Golden Age made me laugh :D Hahahaha!!!

 

Lie Detector was class!! Needed more BINGs at the end though. Loxley kind of asked two questions and got one bing. There's a character on CBBC (kid's tv in the uk) called bing and I HATE that guy!!

 

You're right about Swoop Main Eventing five weeks in a row. Was this a conscious decision because he's amazing? Or did you notice it after the five weeks? He's Main Evented I think 3 out of 6 of my shows. Off the top of my head. Could be 4.

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You're right about Swoop Main Eventing five weeks in a row. Was this a conscious decision because he's amazing? Or did you notice it after the five weeks? He's Main Evented I think 3 out of 6 of my shows. Off the top of my head. Could be 4.

 

It was conscious decision actually, how long the run will go on for only time well tell! But I wanted to make it really clear that it's the Swoop show (in fact I was originally going to call it The Swoop Hour instead of The Main Event Hour a little bit like how Smackdown was pretty much named for The Rock to be his show. Of course I'm running the risk of people tiring of Swoop, but he won't necessarily always be at the forefront, I just wanted to make sure he was early on in the diary to firmly establish him as the figurehead for anyone who isn't familiar with RAW.

 

Another fantastic show, great work!

 

Thanks for continuing to follow, there's a lot of stuff I'm excited about in the future!

 

Speaking of, here are the predictions for the next show.

 

 

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Episode 6

 

Main Event

Swoop McCarthy vs Maurice Jackson

 

Tag Team Number 1 Contendership

Heath & Horton vs The Masterminds vs Will Beaumont & Kerry Wayne vs New Generation

 

But that's not all!

 

Which member of the roster will look at the Tag Team Speed Dating flyer this week? Loxley Robbins, Isaac Taylor, Brodie Lachlan, Matty Willis or Luke Steele

 

A group of the roster will be out for drinks together, but who will pay the bill? The 3AM Boys, JT Ace, Heath Murdock or Kerry Wayne?

 

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Main Event

Swoop McCarthy vs Maurice Jackson

He's not Swoop,but he's over like rover. A win over Swoop, would put him in another bracket... Even if he has help from the MEM

 

Tag Team Number 1 Contendership

Heath & Horton vs The Masterminds vs Will Beaumont & Kerry Wayne vs New Generation

Strongest team there, because Kerry.

 

But that's not all!

 

Which member of the roster will look at the Tag Team Speed Dating flyer this week? Loxley Robbins, Isaac Taylor, Brodie Lachlan, Matty Willis or Luke Steele Isaac!! Steele would eat it if he saw it!!

 

A group of the roster will be out for drinks together, but who will pay the bill? The 3AM Boys, JT Ace, Heath Murdock or Kerry Wayne? Kerry. He's the father figure to that lot.

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Main Event

Swoop McCarthy vs Maurice Jackson

 

Tag Team Number 1 Contendership

Heath & Horton vs The Masterminds vs Will Beaumont & Kerry Wayne vs New Generation

 

Which member of the roster will look at the Tag Team Speed Dating flyer this week? Isaac Taylor

 

A group of the roster will be out for drinks together, but who will pay the bill? JT Ace

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Main Event

Swoop McCarthy vs Maurice Jackson

 

Swoop is a god, but he cant just beat the three biggest heels in the company that are all teaming up together. Has to involve some shenanigans.

 

Tag Team Number 1 Contendership

Heath & Horton vs The Masterminds vs Will Beaumont & Kerry Wayne vs New Generation

 

Could easily be any team really but Will needs a strong win to help continue his build.

 

Which member of the roster will look at the Tag Team Speed Dating flyer this week?

 

Isaac Taylor - A nothing guy who could certainly do with some character development.

 

A group of the roster will be out for drinks together, but who will pay the bill?

 

JT Ace - For sure it will be JT he is just a nice dude. Though the 3AM boys may party well into the night and be the last ones standing, leaving them with the tab.

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Really like the nickname WorldStar for Maurice. Love the MEM dynamic, they all feel unique rather than three big tough guys thrown together to be scary.

 

The Brat Pack's transformation is fantastic. Really funny segment with Mac. Poor Rod Sullivan, nice way to promote the tag speed dating, which is a great idea (don't know if I mentioned it first time round).

 

I notice there's a lot of playground gossip around the locker room too, which suits how I'd like to imagine backstage at a RAW show. Lie Detector was done really well. Liked the red and green. Reminded me a little of Moe in the Simpsons, and of course the Vince lie detector. another very good segment.

 

The Gimmick Doctor :D this show gets more ridiculous by the week...

 

Looking forward to the MJ/Swoop blow off, though I think there's plenty of legs in the storyline yet.

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<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="20LEgend" data-cite="20LEgend" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="48157" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Really like the nickname WorldStar for Maurice. Love the MEM dynamic, they all feel unique rather than three big tough guys thrown together to be scary.<p> </p><p> The Brat Pack's transformation is fantastic. Really funny segment with Mac. Poor Rod Sullivan, nice way to promote the tag speed dating, which is a great idea (don't know if I mentioned it first time round).</p><p> </p><p> I notice there's a lot of playground gossip around the locker room too, which suits how I'd like to imagine backstage at a RAW show. Lie Detector was done really well. Liked the red and green. Reminded me a little of Moe in the Simpsons, and of course the Vince lie detector. another very good segment.</p><p> </p><p> The Gimmick Doctor <img alt=":D" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/biggrin.png.929299b4c121f473b0026f3d6e74d189.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /> this show gets more ridiculous by the week...</p><p> </p><p> Looking forward to the MJ/Swoop blow off, though I think there's plenty of legs in the storyline yet.</p></div></blockquote><p> </p><p> </p><div class="ipsEmbeddedVideo"><div><iframe width="200" height="150" src="https://www.youtube-nocookie.com/embed/iQGwrK_yDEg?feature=oembed" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen="" title="The Simpsons - Moe and the Lie Detector"></iframe></div></div><p> </p><p> It's really weird you say that as assuming you mean that scene above, it definitely crossed my mind when I was writing it. To be the point where the lie detector was supposed to be a one off but will definitely make a return.</p><p> </p><p> Glad MEM have gone down well, again they were initially put together partly just to give something for Swoop to do, and because I wasn't sure individually what to do with them all, but I've surprised myself how much I enjoy them.</p><p> </p><p> It's definitely easy to make Rod a sorry little character from his bio/history, at least this time I'm getting sympathy for the faces rather than heels!</p><p> </p><p> I wasn't sure if The Gimmick Doctor was a little too on the nose, I suppose I could have just as easily done the exact same gimmick but without completely smashing the 4th wall. But meh, I liked it and perhaps I'm already past of the point of no return with regards to the 4th wall. </p><p> </p><p> Show 6 will be up in the next few hours so last chance for predictions. I'm still not certain what the prize will be for it but there's actually a good chance it will involve the gimmick doctor whether that be picking someone you think needs a change, or coming up with a new gimmick.</p>
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Hinting at Echo becoming Quest champion by mixing Lync and Him up huh!!!!!!!!!

 

Goddamn it! I'm not writing another name screw up into the storyline so this time I've just edited it!

 

 

Prediction results

 

HiPlus 3/4

The Nickman 3/4

The Lloyd 3/4

Portilus 1/4

 

 

In a way it's a shame for everyone to predict correct that Swoop was losing, part of me wanted his first loss (at least proper loss) to be shocking, but like some of you said I couldn't neuter Main Event Mafia by having him just steamroll through them all and there was the storyline with him slowly accumulating damage over the 6 weeks.

 

I was tempted to have Steele/Goode get involved like a few of you predicted but I wanted the win to really affect Maurice's career and so it needed to be clean (obviously a little tainted due to all of Swoop's injuries).

 

Predictions for Episode 7 will be up today. I'm enjoying getting them out at a decent pace. I imagine when lockdown ends they could settle down to something like 1 a week. But I've got at least another 6 weeks before starting work again so looking forward to getting deep into this.

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Episode 7

 

Main Event

Nicky Gilbert vs Luke Steele

 

Loxley Robbins vs Mark Question

 

But that's not all!

 

Will Frogue Element answer the Captain's challenge and meet him in the ring?

 

And it's time for Tag Team Speed Dating, including Rod Sullivan, Manhunter, Rick Stantz, Isaac Taylor and many more. Can you predict any of the teams that will be made? (feel free to guess plenty)

 

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Nicky Gilbert vs Luke Steele

Just booked this match in my RAW :D

 

Loxley Robbins vs Mark Question

 

But that's not all!

 

Will Frogue Element answer the Captain's challenge and meet him in the ring? Nooo!! he's a coward!!

 

And it's time for Tag Team Speed Dating, including Rod Sullivan, Manhunter, Rick Stantz, Isaac Taylor and many more. Can you predict any of the teams that will be made? (feel free to guess plenty) Sullivan and Stantz might make sense as former 4-time Tag Champs... They could be good together... The Next Big Blondes

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Nicky Gilbert vs Luke Steele

 

Steele is a beast, he is a monster who would watch a child starve.

 

Loxley Robbins vs Mark Question

 

Tag-Team guy vs a guy who id breaking out into a singles career. Loxley is being built really well.

 

But that's not all!

 

Will Frogue Element answer the Captain's challenge and meet him in the ring?

 

He will answer it with a beat down.

 

And it's time for Tag Team Speed Dating, including Rod Sullivan, Manhunter, Rick Stantz, Isaac Taylor and many more. Can you predict any of the teams that will be made? (feel free to guess plenty)

 

This is so hard. I have no idea who teams up together but I am most curious about Manhunter. He can play a straight face deadpan type guy really well so would love to see him turn to a face with a wacky guy like Isaac Taylor.

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