Movie Tycoon 1.0

Goliath764 · October 20, 2013

The Heist

Malcolm D. Lee(1.05 SP)

- How about 700,000 + 7%?

Christoph Sanders(0.80 SP)

- 720,000?

Alphonso McAuley(0.85 SP)

- Deal.

Jacqueline MacInnes Wood(0.90 SP)

- Deal.

- I do plan to do an award show but I am not sure if we have enough players for voting purpose. Alternatively, I guess you can base the requirement on SP gain or amount of profit.

Mike Epps(0.90 SP)

- 525,000.

Craig Robinson(1.15 SP)

- He would take 650,000.

- He is really eager to stay active in the business so if you can provide him with another role in your next 5 films, he is willing to do this for 400,000.

Chris D'Elia(0.85 SP)

- 340,000 is already a pretty low price in his opinion. The lowest he could give is 325,000.

- Alternatively, if you can provide him with another supporting role in future, he could get as low as 225,000.

Dan O'Brian(0.35 SP)

- He doesn't want to take the risk of losing a job so he will accept the 120,000.

Dave Franco(0.60 SP)

- 200,000 is fine.

Bob Saget(0.90 SP)

- Nah, he don't see this working for him. Maybe he can work with you in future but he will pass on this one.

Thomas Lennon(1.25 SP)

- Deal on a role in future movie. Within next 7, no rush.

Dana White(N/A SP)

- Dana White will do it for free if you can plug some UFC product placement into the movie.

- Anything is fine, you can have people watching UFC, or just let the fight run on a TV on the background, or have some guys betting on UFC events and so on. Feel free to be creative and you only need 1 scene - you can do more if you want to but I doubt so- with said product placement.

Quinton Jackson(0.90 SP)

- Rampage is one egotastical dude so he would pass on the offer.

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Your updated studio capital is $19,323,122.

EddieFnG · October 20, 2013

Can I get a feeler out to Friedberg and Seltzer, just to see what they're looking for?

Goliath764 · October 20, 2013

I will just put them in pair. A tough pair to rate though but I guess when you are making a profit with your movies, you are winning.

Seltzer & Friedberg(1.25 SP)

- They would take 1,250,000 + 8%. Or you can give them an alternative.

Russelrules44 · October 20, 2013

<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="Goliath764" data-cite="Goliath764" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36553" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div><div style="text-align:center;">Isiah Review by: Mr.G</div> Isiah is another attempt to captivate on the children market. A claymotion animated picture, it is like a tribute to old school animation out here this year with all sort of the more classic approaches. Well, how did Isiah fare? Let's start with an overview of Isiah. Isiah is basically the story of a demigod boy and his battle against the villain, Claw Hiller. It gets its core concept right, as it is all about how Isiah becoming a hero that ultimately saved his kingdom. You will get what you expect: growth of Isiah -> quest to gain power -> return to defeat the villain. However, it can be a mess at times and that's what I am going to break down next. For one, Isiah can be confusing because the studio seems to put too many things into it, which is not really helpful to a children film. You see, one of the major advantage in making a G-rated movie is that you don't need to worry about subtlety - in fact, too much subtlety and the children will not get it - so you can be as straightforward and as simple as you want with the story. Isiah though, has too many things happening at once, some can be very unrelated and makes this kind of like a spoof film more than an original creation. Some obvious example includes a cameo by The Rock and wrestling promo by Isiah against the villain...what? Yes, I read it right, wrestling promo. I honestly wonder if too many kids would get that or perhaps enjoy that. There's also a huge case of repetition in this one. The villain, Claw Hiller, only has like one plan -- kidnapping. It's his go-to move throughout the entire movie and trust me when I say that you can find more kidnapping in this film than crime films. I think there's like three to four kidnapping at the very least. Claw Hiller needs variety in his plan, no one is going to care about it if he just kidnap people again and again and again and yet failing many attempts of it. There are also cases of questionable plot holes, which I guess is less of a problem in children movie since they won't really question too much of the details but one at laest has to get the basic stuff right. One thing that will solve the problem is to provide more conclusive explanation. When Nathan(Claw Hiller's assistant) is told to kidnap the baby Isiah, baby Isiah fought back in a comedic way...and then the scene just ended there? Why? How? Why Nathan doesn't just insist and grab Isiah away? Maybe the guards arrive and scare Nathan away? The scene needs more conclusive ending. Another example is Isiah decided to go on a trip to improve himself and he has to say good bye to Samantha. It seems a bit forced as there's no clear reason why Samantha can't follow him. I guess the parent can always make up some reason if their children ask them but it's better if the movie just explain it on screen that perhaps Isiah doesn't want to put Samantha in danger and et cetera. I also don't get why he is living with Samantha instead of his family. They are not married either. Again, it doesn't deflect the story too much but it just baffles me on occassion. And then his conscience asked Isiah to marry Samantha before the big battle. Okay, seems plausible but...why? Why must he do that? Any specific reason? You see, the movie skips over a fair share of the explanation and it just feels like some sort of "feel in the blank" game where the audience has to explain to themselves over multiple things, which is not really a good sign of fine storytelling. The "false" final battle(because the real one happens later) is lacking in any form of excitement. So Claw Hiller just "accidentally" let Isiah go because his assistant flipped out? How does the work? The King and Queen suddenly appears and send Claw Hiller to Hell...how? The final part of the movie is definitely the most confusing part, the earlier part are at least explainable, the finale is just a mess. So, Claw Hiller returns for the "true" final battle and he kidnap(Yes, kidnap, again) his assistant, Isiah and Samantha and followed by a Queen reference, which I am pretty sure majority of the children won't get it. Okay, we are at the final fight. I have just one question: why is Nathan the main hero in the final fight? THIS IS SPARTA...opps, wrong one. THIS IS ISIAH, that's the name of the movie and the protagonist for the 90% of the film. Shouldn't he be the one that goes against Claw Hiller at the end? When we watch Batman, we expect him to do major things in the final fight, not his sidekick Robin. So, overall, the film actually does okay in the earlier portion, the middle part has too many stuffs blended in and the ending portion is guilty of bad design. One way to make this better is to just keep it simple. One, it's a fantasy world, so don't put real life stuff(like The Rock) into it. Two, don't just try to throw every idea into it, filter some that are not suitable out of the fray. Three, keep the fight straightforward. The children are unlikely to expect twist or multiple side conflicts. Just give them one good guy and one bad guy and have them clash with each other. Now, what about the production value and stuff? The animation quality is actually not too bad, it definitely isn't great looking due to the budget restraint but Tim Burton's knowledge on this subject really improves the overall quality of the animation. The actors are fine in their role. While no one stands out in the pack, they all did a decent job in their character. Of course, Sasha Grey isn't doing as good but her character is small enough that no one will really pick up on her performance. I wouldn't blame the actors for the overall performance of this film, they did their job. As I mentioned earlier, Isiah's core concept is actually suitable for a G-rated movie, it's just that the studio tries to do too much at once and the execution leave much to be desired.I would say this is sadly, an 1.25 star. I liked Tribal Survival more than this one and that's a 1.5 stars so I have to go lower than that. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Misc. Information - You can just form a fantasy world without any real life fact. It's easier that way and it's error-free for sure. There are some historical inaccuracy in this one but I am not going to pick about that in the actual review. The time frame between ancient Greece and Rome is later than 876 BC and Greek's currency unit is "Drachma" instead of "Dollar". I also don't see how you pay your conscious(it's imaginery) but that's another topic. - Actually, you are still overbudget after the help. Your movie budget when released is 6,062,000 while you only have 5,959,000. To compensate, I have reduced your budget to fit in: your adjusted production value is 1,472,750 and your new marketing value is 174,250. - This film suffers from a rather mild marketing campaign. As the family market are covered by other earlier films, the families are not as eager to watch Isiah so the box office performance is merely average. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Revenue: 8,431,120 Budget: 5,959,000 ---------------------------- Gross Profit: 2,472,120 Post-release: 6,960,000 13% Bonus: 321,376 10% Co-Studio: 247,212 ---------------------------- Net Loss: 5,056,468 RKO Productions' budget = $2,459,000 - $5,056,468 = -$2,597,468 MPAA is giving you a chance to redempt yourself. They see that you are more used to larger budget so they decided to lend your $5M. You will be needed to pay back the same amount plus the $2,597,468(so a total of $7,597,468) you owed by your next 4 films. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Impact - Dev Patel's SP isn't affected as no one expects him to be on every great film out there but his momentum takes a slight hit from this one. - The less significant talents like Nathan Jones, Sasha Grey and Selena Gomez are spared. - John Travolta, while did a decent job this time, takes a 0.20 SP hit for continuing his slump. Eddie Murphy and Russell Crowe takes a 0.10 SP hit because their characters are less significant. - Tim Burton's SP takes no hit as some appreciates his overall effort in this one but he doesn't look good coming out of this one and he will definitely need a big project next. He decided that he would go cheaper if his next film is one he can do well - a film with dark theme or/and dark element.</div></blockquote> Darn, My best work yet and I still get 1.25 stars......what am I doing wrong?........At least John redeemed me (I have hope for you again man!) Tim Burton = Freakin' Awesome. I'm a little surprised at Russel though, He's an awesome dude....... I've got it! To ensure sucess, I need......LESSER KNOWN TALENTS! *walks off to get ready for 3rd movie* Y2J: Yo junior, Where ya goin'? To work my friend....to work on my third movie. Y2J: Oh, and what will that be? You'll see. (Here's a hint, It's darker than both my failures.) Oh yeah, 2 more things. 1. I'm suprised at Eddie Murphy. If he's gonna be our star preformer, he shouldn't fail like this. 2. I'm not surprised however at the Natester as...well, he's not the best voice person in town, don't worry, he'll win some. he'll lose some.

EddieFnG · October 20, 2013

Russell, how would you like to co-write The Heist?

PM me and we can talk.

EddieFnG · October 20, 2013

The Heist

Malcolm D. Lee

- Deal

Christoph Sanders

Deal

Craig Robinson

I'll give him the 400.000 + a future movie

Chris D'Elia

225.000 + a future movie

Dana White

Agreed

Bob Saget

Alright pal, no hard feelings..

- I wanna get out feelers to Harry Groener and Bob Odenkirk for this role.

Russelrules44 · October 20, 2013

Title: Chamber

Rating (i.e. G, PG, PG-13, R, NC-17): PG-13

Genre: Horror

Brief summary of the movie: 4 friends are trapped in a chamber for 1 week with no food, no water and no way out...or is there?,

Amount you plan to spend on production: $650,000

Amount you plan to spend on marketing: $250,000

Main Lead: Rodger- A washed up pop star who now cleans up at McDonalds- Zac Efron- no nudity, no perks

Cassandara- A sexy retired secratary for Rodger- Miley Cyrus, some nudity, no perks.

Devon- A spoiled rich brat. (Guess whose back?......That's right) Justin Timberlake, no nudity, no perks and one question.....can you do a british accent?

Julie- A kind hearted southern belle. (Again, guess whose back?........Yup) Selena Gomez, a little nudity, no perks.

The Man: The antagnogist of this movie, he kidnapped the 4 friends because of the ol' days at school. (Let us be cheap and go for Tito Ortiz), no nudity, same role for a sequal.

The Man's Mistress- Just as the title goes. (Lindsay Lohan) some nudity, but not too much. (no perks(

Minor:

Carrie- Rodger's ex boyfriend who dates Devon....oh yeah, and she's also a spoiled brat. (Kat Dennings) no nudity, no perks.

Michaels Shawn- Shawn Michaels's biggest fan, he wants to be like his icon Shawn Michaels someday when he grows up. (C.J Adams) no nudity, no perks. (You might wanna start looking him up Goliath, If ya know what I mean.)

Cameo:

Randy Orton as....Rodger's dad......no nudity, and I promise you sure, a free ticket to the main screens my friend. (P.S, Goliath, you might also wanna go ahead as put in Orton if ya know what I mean.)

Director: Tim Burton (Cause I love the guy!)

And, I have a huge announcement....i'm going to be helping out Grand Inc. with it's new movie The Heist. (. So i'm going to work with this and help out Grand Inc. (I saw Checkmate and Make up your Mind....awesome.) at the same time! Cool huh?

And of course, A list of new people I think you should consider.

Actors

1. CJ Adams

2. Randy Orton

3. Chris Jericho

4. John Cena

5. Rey Mysterio

6. Hulk Hogan

7. Chris Saradon

8. Paul Reubens

9. Kerry Katz

10. Danny Elfman (Don't believe me? Watch The Nightmare Before Christmas!)

11. Debi Durst

12. Carmen Twille

13. Sherwood Ball

14. Randy Crenshaw

15. Jeff Bennett

16. Ken Page

17. Lyon Smith

18. Sergio De Zio

19. Tim Besford

20. Graeme Cornies

Acteresses

1. Debi Durst

2. Carmen Twille

3. Catherine O'Hara

4. Linda Larkin

5. Lea Salonga

6. Alyson Court

7. Denise Oliver

8. Bryn McAuley

9. Miranda Cosgrove

You might be asked, what the frak man, Why so many?

Well uh, I'm planning on a Grojband, TNBC and Big Nate collab in the future, based of a story I wrote. (The Natemare Before Christmas)

Licenses

1. Grojband (<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grojband" rel="external nofollow">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grojband</a>)

2. Big Nate (<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Big_Nate" rel="external nofollow">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Big_Nate</a>)

EddieFnG · October 20, 2013

Grant Pictures and RKO Productions are indeed working together, hopefully RKO can use the right name and movies next time. <img alt="" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/tongue.png.ceb643b2956793497cef30b0e944be28.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" />

Breakdown of the deal:

RKO Productions gets 15% of The Heist

RKO Productions gets 5% of any sequel

RKO Productions gets 15% of any Heist sequel they also worked on (so that would be 20% if they worked on a sequel of The Heist)

Grant Pictures gets 10% of any movie of Eddie Grant's choosing post-release.

EDIT: While I'm here.. also add Craig Ferguson for the possible replacement of Bob Saget.

Russelrules44 · October 20, 2013

That's correct Eddie.

And don't worry, Chamber will be a whole lot more epic. (I predict a 3 star god with this)

And on that note....Ah, sorry about this everyone, I need to say this.

SHOOT INTERVIEW

Ik Eddie Murphy's a god in the movies, but this is BS!

Eddie Murphy, losing all of his starpower because of 2 very bad movies (Serdepity 1 and 2).....and all because of NITROUS ACID FILMS.

Murphy deserves much better than this! He was in Shrek, Mulan and even 48 HRS! (The movie that gave him his start.)

Serdepity..........YOU KILLED EDDIE!..........YOU HORRIBLE HORRIBLE MOVIE!......I HOPE THE MOVIE INDUSTRY FORGETS SERCRAPITY!.........THE EVIL MOVIE CAREER KILLER!

*Back to normal*

Thank you for your time.

Russelrules44 · October 21, 2013

<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="EddieFnG" data-cite="EddieFnG" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36553" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Grant Pictures and RKO Productions are indeed working together, hopefully RKO can use the right name and movies next time. <img alt=":p" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/tongue.png.ceb643b2956793497cef30b0e944be28.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" /></div></blockquote> Right.

Goliath764 · October 21, 2013

Here's a list of advice for you(with comparison of Tribal Survival vs Isiah):

1. Adding extra elements is fine but when you add too much, it's messy and confusing. To use a a wrestling metaphor, it became "overbooked", which really isn't a good thing. A good story doesn't necessarily need to have everything included but you need to presents the things you have well. Tribal Survival is simpler to me and the story is clearer and to-the-point. The constant real life wrestling reference also doesn't fit the world of Isiah at all and should be avoided. You don't see Dwayne Johnson goes "I will beat your jabroni ass" in Fast Five, or G.I. Joe. For one, he isn't The Rock in said films and two, it doesn't really fit.

2. Turn off your commentary. It's more of a personal opinion but when you occasionally talk about the movie like a director instead of describing the story, it phases me out of the story. Just show how the movie is progressing without comments.

3. Logical progression of a story and things need to make sense. Both are important to a story. Your movies are fine in a sense that they do have logical progression of story but there need to be more explanation. Like the Nathan's "face turn". It's a little out of nowhere and the reason is just...illogical. You also need to show how exactly Claw Hiller is defeated. Claw Hiller is ticked off and then he accidentally let Isiah go. How does that happen? I can't find one scenario in my mind to run that scene. It's much easier if you just say "Nathan holds Claw Hiller in place and allow Isiah to stab Claw Hiller right through the heart." or "Nathan raises his sword for the final blow on Isiah...but he turns and stabs Claw Hiller out of nowhere". In both cases you can see how Nathan's face turn change the event around.

4. Lesser cast isn't really a must. Dakydaky uses big stars and did well. The story is the key. However, one thing about lesser cast is that you will lose less money for a flop.

5. Use your specialty. You choose in-house stunt team, you need to take advantage of it.

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Chamber

Per your previous agreement(Lindsay Lohan: Bigger role in 2nd movie[which is delayed because of John Travolta's cause]), you need to give Lindsay Lohan at least a secondary lead role in this one. Your workers suggest that you can put her as Cassandra or Julie.

Zac Efron(1.10 SP)

- He would like 990,000.

Miley Cyrus(1.20 SP)

- She would like 1,200,000.

- Need more detail on some nudity. Does she show breast? Ass? Frontal? Side?

Justin Timberlake(1.45 SP)

- He can try for British accent.

- He would like 1,160,000.

Selena Gomez(0.45 SP)

- She would like 400,000.

- Need more detial on a little nudity. Implied nudity? Or she is needed to show something?

Tito Ortiz(0.40 SP)

- He would take 320,000.

Kat Dennings(1.65 SP)

- She would like 742,500.

CJ Adams(0.40 SP)

- He would take 160,000.

Randy Orton(0.70 SP)

- 7,000 seems fine.

Tim Burton(2.10 SP)

- Horror fits the dark theme so he is cheaper.

- He would like 1,575,000 + 10%.

Do you still want Avenue Q? Or should I just do Grojband and Big Nate?

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The Heist

Harro Groener(0.85 SP)

- He would like 425,000.

Bob Odenkirk(1.35 SP)

- He would like 675,000.

Craig Ferguson(1.20 SP)

- He would like 480,000.

EddieFnG · October 21, 2013

I'll offer Craig Ferguson 450.000.

Goliath764 · October 21, 2013

Craig Ferguson

- 460,000.

EddieFnG · October 21, 2013

Deal.

This was a ballache. <img alt="" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/tongue.png.ceb643b2956793497cef30b0e944be28.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" />

I do believe that lands my talent budget at 3.115.000, with 7% post-release?

Goliath764 · October 21, 2013

I count 3,780,000 + 7%:

* Conditions not included

Director: Malcolm D. Lee

- 700,000 + 7%

Jonathan - Christoph Sanders

- 720,000

Marcus - Alphonso McAuley

- 600.000

Jessica - Jacqueline MacInnes Wood

- 280.000

LeDante- Craigh Robinson

- 400,000

Alfonso Trujillo - Chris D'Elia

- 300.000

Terrance Caan - Dan O'Brian

120.000

Mike - Dave Franco

200,000

Joshua - Craig Ferguson

- 450,000

Cameo - Thomas Lennon

- Free

Cameo - Dana White

- Free

Cameo - Randy Couture and Tito Ortiz

- 5,000 each

EddieFnG · October 21, 2013

3.790.000

Agreed with Craig Ferguson for 460k <img alt="" data-src="//content.invisioncic.com/g322608/emoticons/tongue.png.ceb643b2956793497cef30b0e944be28.png" src="<___base_url___>/applications/core/interface/js/spacer.png" />

But yes, there was an error on my spreadsheet, you're right.

Russelrules44 · October 21, 2013

<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="Goliath764" data-cite="Goliath764" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36553" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Here's a list of advice for you(with comparison of Tribal Survival vs Isiah): 1. Adding extra elements is fine but when you add too much, it's messy and confusing. To use a a wrestling metaphor, it became "overbooked", which really isn't a good thing. A good story doesn't necessarily need to have everything included but you need to presents the things you have well. Tribal Survival is simpler to me and the story is clearer and to-the-point. The constant real life wrestling reference also doesn't fit the world of Isiah at all and should be avoided. You don't see Dwayne Johnson goes "I will beat your jabroni ass" in Fast Five, or G.I. Joe. For one, he isn't The Rock in said films and two, it doesn't really fit. 2. Turn off your commentary. It's more of a personal opinion but when you occasionally talk about the movie like a director instead of describing the story, it phases me out of the story. Just show how the movie is progressing without comments. 3. Logical progression of a story and things need to make sense. Both are important to a story. Your movies are fine in a sense that they do have logical progression of story but there need to be more explanation. Like the Nathan's "face turn". It's a little out of nowhere and the reason is just...illogical. You also need to show how exactly Claw Hiller is defeated. Claw Hiller is ticked off and then he accidentally let Isiah go. How does that happen? I can't find one scenario in my mind to run that scene. It's much easier if you just say "Nathan holds Claw Hiller in place and allow Isiah to stab Claw Hiller right through the heart." or "Nathan raises his sword for the final blow on Isiah...but he turns and stabs Claw Hiller out of nowhere". In both cases you can see how Nathan's face turn change the event around. 4. Lesser cast isn't really a must. Dakydaky uses big stars and did well. The story is the key. However, one thing about lesser cast is that you will lose less money for a flop. 5. Use your specialty. You choose in-house stunt team, you need to take advantage of it. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Chamber Per your previous agreement(Lindsay Lohan: Bigger role in 2nd movie[which is delayed because of John Travolta's cause]), you need to give Lindsay Lohan at least a secondary lead role in this one. Your workers suggest that you can put her as Cassandra or Julie. Zac Efron(1.10 SP) - He would like 990,000. Miley Cyrus(1.20 SP) - She would like 1,200,000. - Need more detail on some nudity. Does she show breast? Ass? Frontal? Side? Justin Timberlake(1.45 SP) - He can try for British accent. - He would like 1,160,000. Selena Gomez(0.45 SP) - She would like 400,000. - Need more detial on a little nudity. Implied nudity? Or she is needed to show something? Tito Ortiz(0.40 SP) - He would take 320,000. Kat Dennings(1.65 SP) - She would like 742,500. CJ Adams(0.40 SP) - He would take 160,000. Randy Orton(0.70 SP) - 7,000 seems fine. Tim Burton(2.10 SP) - Horror fits the dark theme so he is cheaper. - He would like 1,575,000 + 10%. Do you still want Avenue Q? Or should I just do Grojband and Big Nate? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ The Heist Harro Groener(0.85 SP) - He would like 425,000. Bob Odenkirk(1.35 SP) - He would like 675,000. Craig Ferguson(1.20 SP) - He would like 480,000.</div></blockquote> Deal! And uh....I like Avenue Q, I really do, But i've known Big Nate and Grojband, so, Avenue Q can wait for another day. (The Natemare Before Christmas is nigh!) 1. For Miley, anywhere she wants. (she's an great singer and a totally underrated actress. 2. For Selena, same thing. (see above) 3. And for Lindsay........I've decided to make her the misteress! 4. And this is important......thnx for the advice Goliath!

Goliath764 · October 21, 2013

Sorry, I messed up the calculation. MPAA requested that the talents only take 60% of their pay pre-release to give you a chance to come back so here's the cost:

Pre-release: 3,932,700

Post-release: 2,621,800 + 10%.

Also, I need information on Lindsay's character like position(Main lead, second lead or support) and so on. She is not in yet.

Russelrules44 · October 21, 2013

<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="Goliath764" data-cite="Goliath764" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36553" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Sorry, I messed up the calculation. MPAA requested that the talents only take 60% of their pay pre-release to give you a chance to come back so here's the cost: Pre-release: 3,932,700 Post-release: 2,621,800 + 10%. Also, I need information on Lindsay's character like position(Main lead, second lead or support) and so on. She is not in yet.</div></blockquote> Main character.

Russelrules44 · October 21, 2013

<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="Goliath764" data-cite="Goliath764" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36553" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Sorry, I messed up the calculation. MPAA requested that the talents only take 60% of their pay pre-release to give you a chance to come back so here's the cost: Pre-release: 3,932,700 Post-release: 2,621,800 + 10%. Also, I need information on Lindsay's character like position(Main lead, second lead or support) and so on. She is not in yet.</div></blockquote> Oh yeah, one more thing. Ya might want to add in TNBC in. (That too is in that 3 show crossover;)

Russelrules44 · October 21, 2013

I'd like to dedicate this movie to the wonderful people who work at Grand Inc.

They are the most wonderful people i've ever met, Especially the man who made it, EddieFnG. This one's for you. The man who told me to go slow and simple.

RKO PICTURES PROUDLY PRESENT..............

CHAMBER

Lead Actor- Zac Efron

Lead Actress- Miley Cyrus

Supporting Actor- Tito Ortiz (My homie!)

Justin Timberlake

Supporting Actress- Selena Gomez

Director - Tim Burton

Genre- Horror

Rating- PG-13

Plot- Rodger is a one hit wonder pop star who was once famous, but now can barely get a gig at the local bar,

He is seen in introduced in a shitty apartment. It's dark, it's smelly, There's an old album of his barely hanging on the wall,

There's some ripped newspaper pieces saying "Young starlet gets #1 record" Then it shows him going to his broken down old ass car, driving to his work at mcdonald's, he's outside, and he grabs his phone, and phones Cassandra, and tells her he's fed up of this damn shit, and as his agent, she needs to do something about it, cut to Cassandra and her intro.

Cassandara is his sexy agent who is a bit sarcastic at times, And tells him to hold his horses and that he'll at least try to think of a plan to get him back in the spotlight.

Cut to rich boy Devon, and Carrie, who are laughing it up, driving to McDonald's in their fancy car, where they see Rodger, and they start mocking him for being a cleaner.

Cut to Julie, who is seen feeling sorry for Rodger and tells Devon to stop picking on the poor guy, Devon tells Julie to can it to the anger of Julie.

One day Rodger is seen throwing some stones at the pond when who should arrive but some local stranger (The Man) walks on by, asking for a nickel, Rodger feeling sorry for the guy runs off to give the man a dime "it's like what my father said, when someone needs help, help them damn it!" but just as he is about the give it to him,

The Man gets a knife and proceeds to almost cut his neck with his knife (Stunt Team),

Cassandara, being the helper she is, stops the man before he can kill him.

"What the hell is wrong with you?! This is my damn client you're messin' with! I'd oughta kill you for-"

The Man then knocks her out with a alarm clock that was never used (Stunt Team).

And then takes her and his client Rodger to an unlocated place, Meanwhile in someother part of the town, Devon is counting up his money.

"999,999,998, 999,999,999, 1,000,000,000! Hee hee! It's good to rich!" then, a knock on the door. "Ugh! WHAT?!" It's that same old man who asks that he could borrow a nickel. "Pfft! And lose my hard earned money, NEVER!" The Man, at first distraught, proceeds to nearly kill him with a gun, but thankfully because he's a terrible aim, hits a parrot on the street. "Aagh! Damn you frigging lazy ass guns!"

Devon is scared by it and begs on The Man's knees to let him go and that he'll just save him the trouble and jump in the bag.

"....well THAT went better than I thought."

Meanwhile in Texas, Julie is sketching a perfect wonderful sunny day, which is well, exactly what she loves....But then, who should arrive but you guessed it, The Man.

"Oh, howdy there stranger! What brings you here?" The Man asks for nothing but a nickel for at least a bread crumb. Julie, being the kind hearted girl she is, does so, but just when you think she's going to be fine.......she's been grabbed, kidnapped by the man, put in the van along with the other 3 guys. "Welcome to Planet Kidnapped, Population: 4"

"Shut the hell up Rodger, where's my Carrie? She could help me out in this!" "Oh you mean that bitch that almost took my job"

"Yep, THAT same Carrie, Cassie".

"Look guys, can we just shut up about what secratary is better and think of a reason where the f**k we're going?" apparently the place their going to is......is...........A chamber.

"This is where you sleep...for life....." He then takes them all in the chamber and locks them up. they wake up inside the chamber, but with the lights off, Rodger starts talking first, he's the star after all, he's asking Cassandra, Julie, "are you there? Are you ok? WHERE ARE WE?"

Devon then says something cowardly about Cassie, Julie is scared to the death because she never has been caught in a chamber before, Cassandara is freaked out because she never has liked a chamber.

And Rodger is worried because he doesn't know why that he kidnapped them.......Then the lights can go on, too bright, everybody's disorientated, The man is standing a couple of feet away from the chamber. Rodger tries to get at him, but he's just out his reach. The misstress is introduced, who tells Rodger it's pointless, he's powerless inside the chamber, and he'll remain this powerless for the rest of his miserable life.

So, Rodger decides to calm himself with a game of "Name that Song". "Um...allright guys...Who wants the play Name that Song?", no one answers. "Uh, ok...Um, I'm Rodger....Rodger Sterling, and uh, I think this is a song you might remember." He then goes on to sing a really cheesy pop ballad...or at least 15 seconds of it. None of them know, So Rodger tells them that it was his first and only hit. "True Love".

"So you're telling me YOUR the man?" "What? No Devon!....ok, Whose turn next?"

Meanwhile, Back home, Carrie is at her house, when she recieves a call on her phone. "Hello?" "Carrie. It's me" "Whose me?"

"Tyler Smith, You know, From Summer Camp?"

"Ah yes, the chambers of horrors" Tyler goes on to tell her that he hasn't seen Rodger or Cassandara all day. "So what else is new?" And he also says that Devon has gone missing too.

"WHAT?!?!, MY Devon?!"

"Yes, your Devon."

Carrie, scared and shooken, asks where he is?,

Smith doesn't know, Carrie has tears in her eyes and says it again.

Again, he doesn't know, Carrie snaps and yells at him to call the cops. "Actully, How about you call Michaels Shawn"

Carrie, tearfully asks who that is, "Why that's me silly! Never fear m'lady! The Heart Break Kid 2.0 is on the case!, I'll give whoever did this a Sweet....Chin...Music...WOO!" Carrie shuts up the phone and then goes to call the police with tears in her eyes.

"Y'ello, this is the police, how may I help you?"

"Hello...this is *sniff* Carrie..*Sniff*...And I'd like to place a order of help, *sob*" She then goes on to tell them about the kidnapping.

"Again? That's the 3rd call this week. Not that i'm surprised"

The Police tell her that they'll be there on the double, Carrie thanks them, hangs up and goes to room to cry.

Meanwhile back in the chamber, Rodger begins to notice The Man is back. "What is it?"

"Oh nothing, I thought i'd bring you a friend to play with....Say hello to Wednesday the Wolf, He just loves to eat off heads"

Wednesday the Wolf bites on Devon's arm (Stunt Team) which Devon prays doesn't give him rabies, But luckily, Thanks to Rodger's expireance in guns, shoots the wolf, sparing Devon's life. "Uhhhh....Thanks?" "No problem" The Man, in his workshop sees what happens...and he is not happy with it, He calls his Mistress and asks that he thought his wolf was punt proof, her mistress tells her that it came in like a Wrecking Ball.

Back in the Chamber speaking of that song, Cassandara decides to hum Wrecking Ball. Devon obviously a total suave man, asks that after they get out of here they go somewhere special.

Cassandara tells him to drop dead. "But I could make you famous, More famous than Hannah Montana" Cassandara takes offense to this and bitch slapped the living f**k out of Devon. (Stunt Team)

"Maybe now you'll learn to be a real man and get true to life."

Rodger and Cassandara high five, Then The Man comes back and introduces them too...heat!,

He smashes the air condition with his sledgehammer and laughs evilly. Cassandara, known to this, takes off her shirt to reveal a very revealling bra. "Ok, NOW i'm even more impressed!"

"Hey, Watch it Devon, She's mine!" "Oh is she? Then how come you don't have a LIFE? HUH?"

"It's like what my dad used to say, life is better than money."

Devon takes offense to this and calls him out for being like all the other Americans out there, Rodger snaps and Rodger and Devon brawl at it like this dickens!

Julie and Cassandara obviously break it up.

Back outside, The police knock on the door of the Man. but get no response....they knock again...but still no response......."Open up damn it or else we'll have to kill you".....

Well, he was warned and they barge in to find him, Meanwhile back in the chamber, The 4 are steaming...."what's the temperature?"

"Half past BURNING!" Devon checks his temperature watch. "It is exactly 118 degrees farenheit here." (all groan)

"It's ok guys, Just like what my father said, Heatwaves are nothing to worry about once you get to be 30."

"Says you, You're 25." "Shut up." "Traitor." "You both shut the hell up". Cassandara tells them that the only way to escape this hellhole is to find someway out of there. Julie suggests the window, But Cassandara points out that it's too small, Rodger says that his dad used to crawl under small walls. Devon asks why the hell he keeps talking about what his dad USED to do. Rodger says that when he was little, his dad and his mother had a very abusive relationship, His dad would usely go to bars at night and show off his amazing feats, sometimes he'd stay 'till 4 in the morning and get really drunk. Finally, He called his son in the living room and told him this *flashback!*....."Son.........I need to tell you something...."

"What is it daddy?"

His dad tells him that he and his mom are getting a divorce, the son asks what a divorce is...

"Um....uh....Divorce is....uh.....Divorce is when Mommy has to go away for awhile"

His dad explains to his son that he and his son's mother have some grown up problems, problems they just couldn't fix.

But told him that it's not his fault and the both of his parents will still love him either way.

The next day, His father is kidnapped by......

"Say, wait a minute, Wasn't he the same person who kidnapped US?!"...

"Well damn......Maybe",

The people take pity on him,

The Man, still relentless gives em back cold air and...what else? Sets a deadly toxic gas in there.

But then...."HALT! THIS IS THE POLICE! WE HAVE YOU SURRONDED!"

The Man is not surprised however, as he expected them and Smith (in his Michaels Shawn alter-ego) and Carrie.

"I believe you want your friends back right?" "Well yeah! That's why we came here! To jail your ass!"

"Well..." He proceeds to actully shoot some of the police (Stunt Team) and knocks out Carrie and Smith with a tranqulizer gun. (Stunt Team) "That outta keep you god damned people away from my evil secret plans!" Meanwhile back inside, The 4 are sufficating inside the now toxic wasteland that is the chamber. "*cough, cough* So...*Cough*

This is how it ends right?" "*cough, cough* Damn sure looks like it." "*cough* Well, if we all end up dying....it's been an *cough, cough, cough* been an honor being stuck here with all *cough* of *cough* you......*faints to unconsiousness*

"RODGER!" Cassandara tries to do some CRO on Rodger which Devon replies "What is this a lame cheesy ass porn movie?"

Cassandara doesn't care however, but even with all of her attempts, is unable to bring him back to consienceness, leading her to believe that he is dead ".......Grrrrrrrrrr, GOD DAMN IT!"

Cassandara, obviously upset and t'oed over the fact Rodger has died once again clocks Devon with a briefcase (Stunt Team anyone?) "Please tell me that was $100,000,000 in there"

"No." Juile is the next to suffocate and fall into unconsienceness leaving the two to themselves, that is until Carrie and Smith are brought in the chamber, Which Devon is happy about. Cassandara tries to call for an ambulance...but she too suffers from the toxics.

Smith tries to stay brave, but can't fight out the toxic smell either, and starts to cry that he wants to go home.

Devon tries to shut him up by at least giving him a dime.......And suddenly feels closer to God.....And suffocates next,

Upsetting Carrie into trying CRO on him, after being told by Smith that he might be most sincerely dead, Bursts into tears,

And Smith comforts Carrie....before they both suffocate. T

he Man believing he has finally killed our 4 brave heroes throws a bit of a celebration party, but get this, A mystery man lurks behind him and is RKO'ed. (Stunt Team), The figure is unusually familiar...But as he storms in the chamber to save the 4 heroes, it becomes increasingly obvious who he is, he is Rodger's father of course, Rodger's father tries to bring in some life to his son......but it is no use, distraught at the fact his son is dead, goes into some soft tears.....but then, the toxic smell dissapears and they all wake up,

Even Rodger. "Uuuuuugh, What...happened?" "Son..." "Dad?"....."Son!" "Dad!" *The two embrace*

"Oh I haven't seen you in so long!" "7 years to be of fact"

*Cassandara lightly punches Devon in the arm*

"Ow! What?!" The Man, goes in his chamber and sees this...the 6 are all right, And Rodger's father is here too!

"WHAT?! HOW THE HELL IS THIS POSSIBLE?! I HAD EVERYTHING PLANNED OUT!"

Rodger's father explains that true love always prevails even with God seems against them.

The Man, decides that these kids are better than he thought and has no other option but to kill them all, getting a chainsaw. "It's choppin' time!" But the 6 rally over because it is 6 vs 1,

But then the mistress comes in to play to make it 6 vs 2, and they soon relize that it may be harder than they thought as the 2 combined are unstoppable, Cassandara is (after a so-so 3 minute catfight with the Mistress is tooken down with a gun)

(Stunt Team), Julie decides to do the right thing and...gives TROTM a little Selena-Satisfaction. (I think you know what I mean),

The Man, aroused and bewildered by Julie's sudden little show is distracted but then regains focus after Smith goes throws a muffin at him, The Man goes on to almost destroy the poor kid, but the kid Sweet Chin Musics' the living crap outta him, not killing him but enough to take his head off, The Headless Man, now very angry stabs Smith on the back with a knife. (Stunt Team), Carrie and Devon throw money at The Headless- Ah screw it, You know who he is now! But Devon is easily clocked with fire balls. (Stunt Team!) Which suffocate him, Carrie, devastated at the death of her boyfriend goes on to take the man's gun and shoot the mistress. (Stunt Team) Making it 4 vs 1, Julie and Rodger team up and grabbing the not yet dead man's knife cuts his arm. (Stunt Team),

But just for that Julie is thrown an grenade bomb at and it explodes, taking her 5,000 miles away. (Stunt Team), Rodger's Dad beats the living hell out of him, kinda going back to Randy Orton a little there,

But after a epic 6.5 minute battle to the death...is stabbed with a knife by what's left of the man,

Rodger upset at first, gets the courage from his dad to carry on, Carrie takes out the man's other arm and Rodger takes out a leg (Stunt Team)

The Man whose name is now so long it's almost impossible to describe it snaps and grosses out Carrie with a regrown leg.

"EWWWWW! GROSS! AND LIKE WHATNOT!"

And Carrie runs for her life, never to be seen again.

Rodger and The Man (or at least what's left of him) finally square off, but as a surprise, his arms have grown back, so have his legs, he grows the twice of his size too, but thankfully the police find him and put handcuffs on him leaving Rodger and The Gigantic Man to fight for at least 5 minutes more as he finally shoots him with a gun and punts him in the skull snapping his neck (Stunt Team) which he replies "

This one's for you dad!" (Stunt Team's Final Call) finally defeating the man for good and sending him away to the death. Rodger, having finally defeated The Man wakes up.........yep, that's right, Rodger wakes up groggy, bloody, bruised and battered after everything and wonders...was this all a dream?

THE END? (Nope.)

Location- Hollywood, California

Budget: (Total of talent + production + marketing)

Talent fee- (Actors and director's fee)

Production- $1,500,000

Marketing- $2,500,000

Duration - 107 minutes

P.S, To Lohan, Whatever offer she may give me, I accept.

TheAwesomeBatman101 · October 22, 2013

I dont see Michael Keaton on the list you know the guy who played Batman?

EddieFnG · October 22, 2013

<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="TheAwesomeBatman101" data-cite="TheAwesomeBatman101" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36553" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>I dont see Michael Keaton on the list you know the guy who played Batman?</div></blockquote> Goliath adjusts the list as people are being cast, Keaton's not been cast by anybody, so he's not on the list. Feel free to cast anybody you like, and they'll be added to the list.

cappyboy · October 22, 2013

<blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="EddieFnG" data-cite="EddieFnG" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36553" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>Goliath adjusts the list as people are being cast, Keaton's not been cast by anybody, so he's not on the list. Feel free to cast anybody you like, and they'll be added to the list.</div></blockquote> Right. If you notice, there's little voice talent on the list as well. The reason for that is because I'm the only one to have used them and only on the one movie so far.

Goliath764 · October 25, 2013

The Chamber Lindsay Lohan - 960,000. She's on good term with you so she will only take 360,000 upfront. So: Pre-release: 4,292,700 Post-release: 3,221,800 + 10% 5,000,000 - 4,292,700 = 707,300 You only have 707,300 for ads and production and you are way out of that. You need to adjust it. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- <blockquote data-ipsquote="" class="ipsQuote" data-ipsquote-username="EddieFnG" data-cite="EddieFnG" data-ipsquote-contentapp="forums" data-ipsquote-contenttype="forums" data-ipsquote-contentid="36553" data-ipsquote-contentclass="forums_Topic"><div>2. I'll offer him 10% with a 5% increase for any sequel, up to 25% (That's to Donald Goddard)</div></blockquote> I realize I haven't answer this, Donald Goddard accepts your offer but he wants the right to stop you from making any more if the first two are not well-received. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- You can cast anyone and I will put them to the list. This is much easier than say putting everyone into the chart at once, that's massive work with the amount of talent around the world.

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